papindinho: Great shift noted.... Keep it up boss. You can always do better in every step.

thanks bro.

Nice story line you got there. But you should be cross-checking your spellings well before posting. Keep it up

underage: Nice story line you got there. But you should be cross-checking your spellings well before posting. Keep it up

noted.

Ehhee,oga yemi,am here wit ma bottle of schnapp and kola#pours some on d ground##...may amadioha keep u as u continue ds gud work,may ur enemies neva c u..iseeeeeeee...now waitin patiently wit ma hands akimbo...

yehmy:

i like ur comment die

lol u nat sewz...

papindinho: "La get sweeter La suspenser"..... Yemi, hmmn...... Na as e dey get sweeter the suspense dey bokum abi. All is well. Btw, no tell me say u sef don dey shake cos of Justin that may do Justice to your action oooooo.lolz

Yemi wey no dy tay shake abi cry qan sef d quy na woman wrapper jewe

Yemi kon update na abi u neva kum bck frm church abi na ccc u dy qo

Yemi are u still busy with ur sunday rice? If u lyk chop all d food, u go stil dey lyk toothpick..hehehehe.
Oya come & update sharpaly.

Eni~girl:
Yemi kon update na abi u neva kum bck frm church abi na ccc u dy qo

Hehehehe..., dat got me lauffn

Vivy Gift:

Hehehehe..., dat got me lauffn

lol he ouqht tu ve bn bck by now dnt jez kn wahz delayinq im lez he attends a white qarment church.

Eni~girl:
lol he ouqht tu ve bn bck by now dnt jez kn wahz delayinq im lez he attends a white qarment church.

#LMFO..._ u r very funny...laff no gree me@ur personal text.

Eni~girl:
Yemi wey no dy tay shake abi cry qan sef d quy na woman wrapper jewe

lolz.... Hahahahahahahaha. Btw, shay e don shake for ur front before ni..........#just axing *winks*

I was just going through d literature section nd i saw dis 1 by yemi2plus2 nd i decided 2 read it.***i don grab my okpa nd popcorn***

linpok:


#LMFO..._ u r very funny...laff no gree me@ur personal text.

lol

papindinho: lolz.... Hahahahahahahaha. Btw, shay e don shake for ur front before ni..........#just axing *winks*

for my dream na

Eni~girl:
for my dream na

arrgh!! lolz....

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All of una don turn superstar sotey na only ONE UPDATE u dey drop per page. GOD s watching you in HD

Ah. I am late ooh, so no more seat for me. Let me just peeping from the window.

Thumbs up yemi, your are improving big time. I like this title than the other one.

....***AYIGBA THIEF***....

No update throughout yestaday, nt evn a word at all 4rm Yemi 2day. Even if u no update, abeg jst say something. Its vry unusual for u to keep quiet all day

"why is he here? Why can't he just leave me alone" Victoria grumbled under her voice.

"Victoria!!!" Justin called from outside.

He must had seem my pair of shoes outside. So I thought.

"open the door for him" I had said to Victoria who sat on the chair by the reading table re-arranging her hair.

"you see what you cause?" she accused me.

What did I do? Why me? Why always me?

"what did I do?" I needed to know my offence.

"Victoria......I know you're inside. Open this door" Justin kept ranting.

"you made me almost sin against God" she said stil contemplanting weather to open the door for her boyfriend.

"all the kissing and romance nor be sin abi" I thought or saying that, but rather I kept quiet.

"you're making matter worst. Open the door for him" I begged her.

"I wouldn't! Let him come back home" She said.

"is that want you want?"

She nodded her head in reply.

"open the door and tell him"

She hissed at me, stood up from the chair and walked to the bathroom.

"I know you're in here. Open the door for me....." Justin said banging the door.

I was getting tire of the noise. I stood up from the foam and foolishly walked to the door.

"don't open it!"

"open the door for him"

"why should I open it?"

Different thoughts were running through my small head.

I finally made up my mind and opened the door for him.

"oh! Yemi, you're the one with her" Justin said pushing me as he entered the room.

Justin was a Degree student around my age. He was my direct opposite: he was short, fair in complexion, chubby, rich and handsome.
I sometimes wonder why Victoria chose to date a guy like that. It could only be for a reason "his money".
"what do you mean by that?" I asked, but rather he ignored my question.

He surveyed the room, walked to the kichenenth and back to the room.

"where is Victoria?" he asked.

I kept quiet while playing "Midnight Pool" on my mobile phone.

"Victoria..." he ranted.

"what do you want?" Victoria asked him from the bathroom.

"come outside" he commanded.

Just like he had charms in his mouth, Victoria came out of the bathroom.

"Justin, you slapped me?" Victoria said crying as Justin landed a hot slap on her cute face.

As a lover boy, I thought it was the best time I show her how much I love and care for her.

I stood up from the foam and grabbed Justin by his shirt.

"are you mad? Don't you have respect for ladies?" I asked the ill-mannered Justin.

"you must be stupid for asking me such question. Leave my shirt before I slap you too" he threatened.

"Yemi, please leave his shirt" Victoria pleaded on his behalf.

He was lucky. I would have taught him never to mess with a "Yoruba boy wey grow for Benin".

I released his shirt and walked to Victoria.

"it's okay! Stop crying" I consoled her with my hand round her shoulder.

"get out of my room" she shouted at Justin.

"are you asking me out of your house?" Justin asked.

"just get out and never you come back" she replied him.

Justin looked at me with a "i-go-kill-you" face and angrily walked out of the room.

"it's okay!" I consoled her.

"leave me alone. You're the cause of all this" she fired at me and removed my hand from her shoulder.

I learnt to always leave people alone when they are unhappy or angry. I picked me notebook and handout from the reading table and walked home.

Going home was the problem. The problem was nature had a different plan for me.

Dear readers,
I was not chance to update yesterday, I was very busy doing somethings.
Please bear with me, my left fingers are shaking, I think it's writer's cramp.

hersweetness: No update throughout yestaday, nt evn a word at all 4rm Yemi 2day. Even if u no update, abeg jst say something. Its vry unusual for u to keep quiet all day

am sorry dear.

Deiok: Ah. I am late ooh, so no more seat for me. Let me just peeping from the window.

Thumbs up yemi, your are improving big time. I like this title than the other one.

....***AYIGBA THIEF***....

i don thief mynd chair for you. Thanks, na una dey improve my writing skills as una dey point of errors and typo

Abeq one mre update oh

Eni~girl:
Abeq one mre update oh

not today. I wil update the last and final update tomorrow

Following...... Nice story yemi waiting for ur update

[color=#000099][/color]I dy follow u bumper 2 bumper ;DI dy follow u bumper 2 bumper

Final update kwa?

suxxman: Final update kwa?

yeah! It's a short story, am trying to do something new. Many of una never notice something about the story

I was even thinking the story hasn't even gone half and you saying it remains one update.. Wheres the 'Anyigba thief'?

hersweetness: I was even thinking the story hasn't even gone half and you saying it remains one update.. Wheres the 'Anyigba thief' kwanu??

people complained about the "2go love". I just wanna try my hand on something different.