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Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 10:33pm On Sep 12, 2013
So, here I am. Let's see if this is gonna work. This is a collection of my poems though.

Copy paste peeps, abeg no copying o. If you do, the real person behind this moniker is gonna sue you if he gets you. He doesn't joke with his works.

Enjoy and criticize! grin
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 10:35pm On Sep 12, 2013
HE MEETS SHE
_______________
He meets she.
She meets he.
From the wells of romantic emotion,
Their hearts wander around a notion.

Could it be love?
Or lust hovering like Noah's dove?
Ay! Cupid laughs wickedly,
Ready to shoot his arrow speedily.

He chases,
And she responds in phases.
He withdraws,
And she fidgets like a market woman who lost her purse.

Cupid pays no heed to the pause,
He fancies no loss.
Stretching his bow,
He unites she to he's marrow.
_____________________________

Poetic freestyle. Whatever it means, mehn. smiley

Princesa inspired me to do this. I owe her one. smiley

This is it. smiley

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Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Cathaliya: 3:32am On Sep 13, 2013
nice combo....freestyle ghan.!

I wana see the big thing....patiently waiting.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 7:06pm On Sep 13, 2013
Cathaliya: nice combo....freestyle ghan.!

I wana see the big thing....patiently waiting.

Hahaha. Thanks.

You don loss me again. Chai!
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 8:38am On Sep 25, 2013
CAN'T HAVE THE BEST OF BOTH WORLDS (Inspired by Van Persie) grin

I can’t have the best of both worlds
No matter how I convince myself in sweet words
I have to sacrifice the other for one
Either pleasure or fun
The choice between being an excellent player
Or an excellent worker
One a slave,
The other a fave,
Just one master
Two makes a disaster
I can’t have the best of both worlds
Just like I can’t have two gods
I can’t have the best of both worlds
Neither can earth’s lords.

**Got stuck while writing this; rhyme failed me (end rhyme and double rhyme, I think I'll start harnessing metaphors and wordplay). Still gave it my best shot though. Criticize freely, I want to get better.

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Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Cathaliya: 9:19pm On Sep 26, 2013
why didnt you just chill till when you are open-hearted, huh?


You tend to give more in that mood....and never stuck.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 10:42pm On Sep 26, 2013
Cathaliya: why didnt you just chill till when you are open-hearted, huh?


You tend to give more in that mood....and never stuck.

Chilled for a week or more and I couldn't chill anymore. Just had to type this.

It's not good, right?
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Cathaliya: 10:07pm On Sep 27, 2013
Jekyll & Hyde:


Chilled for a week or more and I couldn't chill anymore. Just had to type this.

It's not good, right?
Do you need help?
You know I naturally completes you, although you always deny it...
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 10:48pm On Sep 27, 2013
Cathaliya:
Do you need help?
You know I naturally complete you, although you always deny it...

FYM. There's nothing to deny ni. Who said you do? smiley

Yes, I need help.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Cathaliya: 10:59pm On Sep 27, 2013
Jekyll & Hyde:


FYM. There's nothing to deny ni. Who said you do? smiley

Yes, I need help.
I will get over you....dont worry.
I know I will.


So, where do you need help?
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 11:11pm On Sep 27, 2013
Cathaliya:
I will get over you....dont worry.
I know I will.


So, where do you need help?

Lol @ highlighted. You ehn.

In writing.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Cathaliya: 11:33pm On Sep 27, 2013
Jekyll & Hyde:


Lol @ highlighted. You ehn.

In writing.
..you want me to write you a poem or help your brain?
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 11:57pm On Sep 27, 2013
Cathaliya: ..you want me to write you a poem or help your brain?

B.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Cathaliya: 12:06am On Sep 28, 2013
Jekyll & Hyde:


B.
you will have to help me too....
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 12:30am On Sep 28, 2013
Cathaliya:
you will have to help me too....

Huh? How?
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Cathaliya: 12:54am On Sep 28, 2013
Jekyll & Hyde:


Huh? How?
I will have to feel love from you towards me..
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 8:08am On Sep 28, 2013
Cathaliya:
I will have to feel love from you towards me..

How does one feel love in a virtual world?

Meanwhile, shey na trade by barter be this? undecided
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Cathaliya: 9:35am On Sep 28, 2013
Jekyll & Hyde:


How does one feel love in a virtual world?

Meanwhile, shey na trade by barter be this? undecided
lol, you are a poet......arent you?
So, you can do it.

Its not trade by barter....its just a way of helping you.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 11:25am On Sep 28, 2013
Cathaliya: lol, you are a poet......arent you?
So, you can do it.

Its not trade by barter....its just a way of helping you.

Nah, nah, I'm not a poet.

Helping me? undecided lipsrsealed
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Cathaliya: 8:23am On Sep 29, 2013
Jekyll & Hyde:


Nah, nah, I'm not a poet.

Helping me? undecided lipsrsealed
Yes I will....
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 12:50am On Sep 30, 2013
Cathaliya:
Yes I will....

Alright then. Thanks.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by krystophyr(m): 10:07am On Oct 01, 2013
The first piece was better, IMHO. Some nice lines there... lust like Noah's dove... Cupid's naughty part...

A tad more amusing though is the drama between you and Cal.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by krystophyr(m): 10:07am On Oct 01, 2013
The first piece was better, IMHO. Some nice lines there... lust like Noah's dove... Cupid's naughty part...

A tad more amusing though is the drama between you and Cath.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 10:53am On Oct 01, 2013
krystophyr: The first piece was better, IMHO. Some nice lines there... lust like Noah's dove... Cupid's naughty part...

A tad more amusing though is the drama between you and Cath.

Thanks, Krystophyr. smiley

Lol. No mind Cathaliya.


Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Cathaliya: 10:57am On Oct 01, 2013
krystophyr: The first piece was better, IMHO. Some nice lines there... lust like Noah's dove... Cupid's naughty part...

A tad more amusing though is the drama between you and Cath.
Yet another person feels the vibe between us....just give up the feelings, Jekyll.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 11:11am On Oct 01, 2013
Cathaliya:
Yet another person feels the vibe between us....just give up the feelings, Jekyll.

Lmao. He feels the drama on a lighter note. smiley
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Cathaliya: 11:14am On Oct 01, 2013
Jekyll & Hyde:


Lmao. He feels the drama on a lighter note. smiley
He doesnt...the magnetic field is too strong
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 12:59pm On Oct 01, 2013
Cathaliya:
He doesnt...the magnetic field is too strong

Hmmm
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Cestmoi1(f): 2:53pm On Oct 05, 2013
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Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Asolab(m): 2:55pm On Oct 05, 2013
Na onli dis kind poem a dey cee for free any oda poem
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Iaz93: 2:59pm On Oct 05, 2013
What's with Cathaliya? angry undecided

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