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Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by anthoniosp(m): 3:08pm On Oct 05, 2013
uhhh
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 3:16pm On Oct 05, 2013
The first is beautiful. Better than d second.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Kslib(m): 3:17pm On Oct 05, 2013
Yaay!! Hyde,we go pop champagne oo..

Funny enough,i just made a request some few minutes ago,only to check minutes later and saw this on FP..
Nice,its a sign. grin
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All izz well!
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by vcvibes(m): 3:18pm On Oct 05, 2013
Jekyll & Hyde:
HE MEETS SHE
_______________
He meets she.
She meets he.
From the wells of romantic emotion,
Their hearts wander around a notion.

Could it be love?
Or lust hovering like Noah's dove?
Ay! Cupid laughs wickedly,
Ready to shoot his arrow speedily.

He chases,
And she responds in phases.
He withdraws,
And she fidgets like a market woman who lost her purse.

Cupid pays no heed to the pause,
He fancies no loss.
Stretching his bow,
He unites she to he's marrow.
_____________________________

Poetic freestyle. Whatever it means, mehn. smiley

Princesa inspired me to do this. I owe her one. smiley

This is it. smiley
*in french Montana's voice*



Ehhh!!!
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by ayobase(m): 4:13pm On Oct 05, 2013
Jekyll, are u OKOBO?

Give the lady what she wants na!
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by fishmakas: 4:16pm On Oct 05, 2013
i beg no vex o watin we go call dis one?
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 4:19pm On Oct 05, 2013
Jekyll & Hyde:
CAN'T HAVE THE BEST OF BOTH WORLDS (Inspired by Van Persie) grin

I can’t have the best of both worlds
No matter how I convince myself in sweet words
I have to sacrifice the other for one
Either pleasure or fun
The choice between being an excellent player
Or an excellent worker
One a slave,
The other a fave,
Just one master
Two makes a disaster
I can’t have the best of both worlds
Just like I can’t have two gods
I can’t have the best of both worlds
Neither can earth’s lords.

**Got stuck while writing this; rhyme failed me (end rhyme and double rhyme, I think I'll start harnessing metaphors and wordplay). Still gave it my best shot though. Criticize freely, I want to get better.

My bro, I tried sending u a pm... Didn't go through.. Focus less on rhymes and concentrate on harmony... It doesn't always have to rhyme, as long as the line agrees with the previous one, u re gud.. Kip ur message simple, poetry has gone beyond d stage where someone has to check d shrubs to comprehend.... Simple nd interesting does the magic... Gud luck man.. More power to ur elbow..
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Caseless: 5:37pm On Oct 05, 2013
Jekyll & Hyde:


Lmao. He feels the drama on a lighter note. smiley
old lovers wey nor de shame. So na here u and caterpillar come de enjoy urselves? Una don hit fp. I saw ur name, dat was y i opened the thread. Dz guy na silent killer. Hin don win dz babe heart finish. Nice lines.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 5:57pm On Oct 05, 2013
Asolab: Na onli dis kind poem a dey cee for free any oda poem

Loool. Got none o.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 6:00pm On Oct 05, 2013
fishmakas: i beg no vex o watin we go call dis one?

Which one? undecided
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 6:00pm On Oct 05, 2013
ayobase: Jekyll, are u OKOBO?

Give the lady what she wants na!

undecided

I don't know what she wants ni.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 6:02pm On Oct 05, 2013
Kslib: Yaay!! Hyde,we go pop champagne oo..

Funny enough,i just made a request some few minutes ago,only to check minutes later and saw this on FP..
Nice,its a sign. grin
..
..

All izz well!

Hahaha. Hyde go break the bottle of champagne for your head o. tongue

Thanks, man. Make I go find the request. grin
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 6:02pm On Oct 05, 2013
sexytabhi: The first is beautiful. Better than d second.

Thanks, dear. smiley I noticed, too.

No mind me, I dey find rhyme. sad
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 6:03pm On Oct 05, 2013
C'est moi:
Mod yi n se bebe.Welldone J &H,front page things.

Thanks, C'est Moi. smiley

Omo, wetin your first sentence mean ni?
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Cathaliya: 6:03pm On Oct 05, 2013
oh, this made front page, uh?
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 6:05pm On Oct 05, 2013
caseless: old lovers wey nor de shame. So na here u and caterpillar come de enjoy urselves? Una don hit fp. I saw ur name, dat was y i opened the thread. Dz guy na silent killer. Hin don win dz babe heart finish. Nice lines.

Na you love us join ni? undecided

Thanks, man. Hahaha. I no dey silent kill any babe o. I actually wrote it because I saw Princesa's poems. smiley
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Kslib(m): 6:07pm On Oct 05, 2013
Oh,its about to get interesting.. cheesy cheesy
**Tip toes and hides under chair**
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All izz well!
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 6:07pm On Oct 05, 2013
njokusboy:

My bro, I tried sending u a pm... Didn't go through.. Focus less on rhymes and concentrate on harmony... It doesn't always have to rhyme, as long as the line agrees with the previous one, u re gud.. Kip ur message simple, poetry has gone beyond d stage where someone has to check d shrubs to comprehend.... Simple nd interesting does the magic... Gud luck man.. More power to ur elbow..


Thanks for the advice, bro. I'll drift away from the rhyme mindset; it didn't sit well with the second poem.

I think I got your PM. I'll check to see.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Chinaimporter: 6:39pm On Oct 05, 2013
I fuc k bitchees
Then they need stiches
Cause i arnt snitchin
Cause i love living
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Cestmoi1(f): 7:05pm On Oct 05, 2013
Jekyll & Hyde:


Thanks, C'est Moi. smiley

Omo, wetin your first sentence mean ni?
In my own words.....The mod that moved this threads to fp (I've seen many from lit.section) performed wonders and tried alot.At least,people who check only front page will appreciate talents.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Caseless: 7:36pm On Oct 05, 2013
Jekyll & Hyde:


Na you love us join ni? undecided

Thanks, man. Hahaha. I no dey silent kill any babe o. I actually wrote it because I saw Princesa's poems. smiley
huhn*throws a heavy klitschiko's blow at him, and watches him wail*
loverman, whr hav u been? Ar u a lit-section guy? Com'on leave ther 4 d ladies and join us on that 'off topic thread(derailers paradis); it is flaming there.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by joshadesanya: 7:46pm On Oct 05, 2013
WRY SMILE OF SORROW
Curfew of fear keeps me from flying,
Like a whithered feather unfit for flight,
None but I could understand my plight;
That someday I might look at my scar,
And pity the dent in my spine,

The sting of adversity that struck in the melee
Has made birds of a feather flock separately,
Like a rigid piece of shit that wouldn't flush,
Firmly; Thoughts dangle in my heart like a golden
cross;

Extinction has now become a thing of adoration,
And nothing feels more exciting than being banished,
For I could only see death as a prerequisite to a
soothing rest,
Most controversial; I would rather it to a milky bed,
Now, jamming vibes of sad instrumental,
Fills my soul like dirt on a rusty metal,
That I will fall a pretty pink petal,
Is nothing but a dream of a routeless magi,

Though I hear;
None would spare
The joy they've got to share,
Yet;
I crave to get in any way
It's spoils, dumped in the mud and has been left to rot,
But, Alas! The fields of peace have been emptied
And the debris of hope, buried,
For if it hadn't;
It would have been that i've found a diamond cherry,
In the host of Gaia berries,
But, the drama of joy without the crew of glory,
Is like a merry ferry heading for its peril,

Had i known;
The anguish the cock will later crow,
I would have painted my last true smile.

- Jerry Okeowo
July 3, 2012 at 1:47pm

He is one of the best writers in this country.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 8:02pm On Oct 05, 2013
caseless: huhn*throws a heavy klitschiko's blow at him, and watches him wail*
loverman, whr hav u been? Ar u a lit-section guy? Com'on leave ther 4 d ladies and join us on that 'off topic thread(derailers paradis); it is flaming there.

Lmao. Fragile hands. grin

Been around. I dey show for there. Make I enter keke.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 8:03pm On Oct 05, 2013
Kslib: Oh,its about to get interesting.. cheesy cheesy
**Tip toes and hides under chair**
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All izz well!

Lmao. Ant go chop your eye for there. tongue
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by Nobody: 8:05pm On Oct 05, 2013
C'est moi:

In my own words.....The mod that moved this threads to fp (I've seen many from lit.section) performed wonders and tried alot.At least,people who check only front page will appreciate talents.

Oh, okay. Thanks.

Yeah, he/she did well.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by corperscorner: 8:44pm On Oct 05, 2013
www.nairaland.com/1466830/one-best-poets-nigeria-jerry

So proud of this DUDE...
Lono where he gets his inspirations from tho.
Gudwork @OP....nice tin for d front page
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by corperscorner: 8:52pm On Oct 05, 2013
LIMA

Baby Lima! The pride of my heart,
Wields the power of a monsoon
And could also be as tender as the snow flakes that sail gently down
from the sky.
None but her could embed blistering affection in the evening breeze to
reach my soul.

Tho! her comely coy nature keeps me wondering;
If Lima would ever stay to see my opera till the curtains fall
But Lo! she would always instill the perfect reassurance to fuel my
passion through those beautiful eyes.

Scrolls and ventures have gotten the better of me,
All necessary to earn a life worth living,
But at the expense of the attention for Lima,
I can only hope she aspires the splendor the future proposes,

Her thoughts dangle in my heart like a golden pendulum,
Priceless when coupled with the memories we share,
The tender feel of her loving lips,
And the aura of her sapphire body,
Endowed with salient breasts, succulent and smooth enough to spark a
man's cock to Life,
And closely embedded from behind, with well-parted laffy-taffy which
turns every spank to a warm caress.

Lima has brought me thus,
Into her warm arms of affection,
That i might flee from the quagmire of lust,
And neva breakdown in the absence of love,

"I truely love you";
Remains my nunc-dimittis to her,

Carpe diem! Lima,
Till all doubts run into extinction,
And leave us to the warm embrace of each other.

-Jerry Okeowo
August 3, 2013, 7:45am
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by corperscorner: 8:52pm On Oct 05, 2013
LIMA

Baby Lima! The pride of my heart,
Wields the power of a monsoon
And could also be as tender as the snow flakes that sail gently down
from the sky.
None but her could embed blistering affection in the evening breeze to
reach my soul.

Tho! her comely coy nature keeps me wondering;
If Lima would ever stay to see my opera till the curtains fall
But Lo! she would always instill the perfect reassurance to fuel my
passion through those beautiful eyes.

Scrolls and ventures have gotten the better of me,
All necessary to earn a life worth living,
But at the expense of the attention for Lima,
I can only hope she aspires the splendor the future proposes,

Her thoughts dangle in my heart like a golden pendulum,
Priceless when coupled with the memories we share,
The tender feel of her loving lips,
And the aura of her sapphire body,
Endowed with salient breasts, succulent and smooth enough to spark a
man's cock to Life,
And closely embedded from behind, with well-parted laffy-taffy which
turns every spank to a warm caress.

Lima has brought me thus,
Into her warm arms of affection,
That i might flee from the quagmire of lust,
And neva breakdown in the absence of love,

"I truely love you";
Remains my nunc-dimittis to her,

Carpe diem! Lima,
Till all doubts run into extinction,
And leave us to the warm embrace of each other.

-Jerry Okeowo
August 3, 2013, 7:45am
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by katiemadubiko: 9:03pm On Oct 05, 2013
Who is thisguy
His write-ups makes me Hot cheesy cheesy cheesy

*thumbs up* dude.......u rili wanna dethrone wole soyinka.
Re: Poems | Verbal Outburst by ayobase(m): 11:54pm On Oct 05, 2013
Jekyll & Hyde:


undecided

I don't know what she wants ni.

We both know, no fall my hand o!

"Give it to me now.....baby koma a....i love the way you.......l

just singing!

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