A rough draft animation I created in one week so it's no where near complete, it' a concept advert for a client who asked me to come up with something 'creative', hope I did lol.

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WATCH HERE:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvA6NpHmi4w

Just pasting what I wrote in the other section... I didn't know it was here too.

I like the style of animation a lot. But for a TV advert it doesn't work in my opinion. The shots drag way too long and don't tell us anything about the 'product'. It doesn't look or sound like a TV ad at all.

You'll benefit from going onto the same Youtube and watching 'real' ads... see how much they put into 30sec & 60sec ads. Note the way they 'build' up the product and to the product.

Best of luck with it all.

Just pasting what I wrote in the graphics section... I didn't know it was here too.

I like the style of animation a lot. But for a TV advert it doesn't work in my opinion. The shots drag way too long and don't tell us anything about the 'product'. It doesn't look or sound like a TV ad at all.

You'll benefit from going onto the same Youtube and watching 'real' ads... see how much they put into 30sec & 60sec ads. Note the way they 'build' up the product and to the product.

Best of luck with it all.