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I will never stop. by frenzybest1(m): 9:06pm On Oct 27, 2013 |
O! How much i love you despite all you do to me why do you stab me in the back, why? You see me as an emermy but i see you as a friend Man or Animal we all carry blood in the vain. You say my days are numbered But i pray you will live long what eals can i do ? But wish you well !(scilence) Oh! I just want you to know,hmmmmmmm! Oh! How much i love you. I will never stop.[center][/center] |
Re: I will never stop. by frenzybest1(m): 9:39pm On Oct 27, 2013 |
What do you think about this poem "i will never stop " ? |
Re: I will never stop. by Justiceenams(m): 3:36pm On Nov 07, 2013 |
frenzybest1: What do you think about this poem "i will never stop " ?@Frenzy you are straight forward and you dont use figures of speech.you should leave ur audience with something to brainstorm about.I wud not say good or bad cause noone was burn with a pen on his/her hand. |
Re: I will never stop. by frenzybest1(m): 6:06pm On Nov 09, 2013 |
@justiceenams,thank you very much for your advice ,i will post a new poem i published, hope you will see a change in it . |
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