@Ozor1 & ChyEndowed don't just read and leave. But try and drop your comments.

Wow.....hu dy drag diz front seat wit me?

Yemxy005: Wow.....hu dy drag diz front seat wit me?

There are enough seats in the vip section.

Still waiting o... Pls make it more thrilling., am feeling u!!

Yemxy005: Wow.....hu dy drag diz front seat wit me?

Na m ooh...

@ Dnty7: i dey here o. I just decided to lay low for a while make e no be like say na only me dey this thread.

Winnie1950: @ Dnty7: i dey here o. I just decided to lay low for a while make e no be like say na only me dey this thread.

Thank God u're still here. I thought i av lost one of my gr8test readers but am hapi u're still with me.

Update dis tin o, we dey wait faa

Am veri sori, i won't be updating today again but i promise to make it up to you 2mao. Gudnyt.

Its either segun is an i.diot or he is addicted to being beat up...

Haba!! In wat world does 1guy overthrow 14cultists?? Hian!!

Gud job D9ty7.

IzyLuv: Its either segun is an i.diot or he is addicted to being beat up...

Haba!! In wat world does 1guy overthrow 14cultists?? Hian!!

Gud job D9ty7.

na true u talk

Jummy Fallin out of order

tmamuda: Jummy Fallin out of order

she don sha

Wats wrong with these jummy?kip it up @up

Keep it Up...I've been a silent follower of your story. How about a partnership on d publishing of your story? Goyna make it a popular novel 2ru d right literary marketing networks.

Nyc job xo far

Profemmy001: Keep it Up...I've been a silent follower of your story. How about a partnership on d publishing of your story? Goyna make it a popular novel 2ru d right literary marketing networks.

Lets meet on my mail via durodola9ty7@gmail.com

--continuation--
Segun entered the sitting room and met his mother and Jummy seated discussing only God knows what.
"Good afternoon mum." he prostrated.
"Welcome. How was your paper?" she asked.
"It was fine. You didn't go to shop?" he asked.
"I had to come back to attend to somethings." she explained.
"Okay ma." he said leaving the sitting room.
"Segun." his mother called him back.
He face her waiting for what she had to say.
"Are you blind or you don't see your girlfriend?" she asked.
"Girlfriend? I don't think i have one at the moment." he said.
"So who is she?" she asked pointing to Jummy.
"She is one of those girls i met during the exam." he explained.
"Are you alright? So you have started changing girls like you are changing clothes?" she asked.
"I am okay." he replied.
"Okay. As your mother i hereby command you that you should continue your relationship with Jummy with immediate alacrity." she said angrily.
"That's not possible. I own my life and i know what is good for me." he said angrily.
"Are you a bastard?" she asked.
"That a question for you." he replied.
His mother frowned her face. And stood up angrily moving towards him.
"Am i the one you are talking to?" she asked.
He kept mute to the question.
His mother angrily picked up a mug and threw it at him. He quickly dodged it and the mug came crashing on the wall.
He quickly ran to his room and shut the door. His mother ran after him and knocked on his door angrily.
She walked back to meet Jummy in the sitting room.
"Don't worry my dear. He will surely become yours. Tell your mum that everything will be settled." She consoled jummy.
"Okay ma." Jummy said and left.
Segun overheard all what his mum said to Jummy.
"Does that mean that her parents are connected to mine. No way am gonna date such girl. Nike is the right person for me." he said angrily.

END OF CHAPTER 7

Nice update!.......diz jummy na anoda tin oooo

Wao.. Really loving ds story, ready 4 more!!

CHAPTER 8=> DEDICATED TO HAMEENAT94, HEYWHY.KUM, YEMXY005.....
Segun came out of his room dressed in a sky blue long sleeves shirt with a black jacket on a black varsace pant trouser and a black paul smith pimpsole shoe.
He was looking cute and handsome with his sunshade.
He got out into the compound looked at himself in the side mirror of the Nissan Murano parked outside, feeling satisfied with his looks he walked out of the gate and headed towards the junction of his street.
He boarded a bus towards Agodi GRA. He dropped in the bus-stop and walked towards the GRA. He got outside the gate and dialled Nike's number.
"Hello,where are you?." she said from the other end.
"Am at the gate." he informed.
Segun could hear her scream and telling some people that he is around.
The gate opened and she stepped out.
"Happy birthday." he said.
"Thanks." she replied smilling.
They both walked in with Segun carrying a bagpack. They walked towards the garden behind the house where tables and chairs were arranged.
She took Segun to a section of the garden where some guys and girls are seated. She introduced them as her classmates in school. She took him to another part where her cousins and distant family members were seated before they rounded up the introduction spree at the section where her neighbours were seated.
She led him through the pathway between the lawns walking towards the main house.
They entered the sitting room where her parents and some other elders were seated.
"Good afternoon sir." he greeted postrating.
"Segun, i thought you wouldn't come. How are you?"
"Am fine sir." he replied.
Nike led him back into the garden. He sat down on an empty seat while Nike quickly ordered refreshments for him. Nike left him occassionally to welcome her guests.
At exactly 12pm the party was declared opened by Ambrose(Nike's big bro).
The party continued until when the celebrant was called upon to cut the cake in company of two best friend of hers.
Nike got up and walked towards the stage. She collected the microphone and called on Segun and Matilda (her cousin) . The cake was cut and photographs were taken. The dj began showing his skills by playing varieties of party nigerian hip-hop music. Everyone present was tempted to dance.
Nike's dad beckoned on Segun to come to his table. He asked him personal questions like his family background and future ambition before the man dropped the bomb by asking Segun a life and direct question which requires a quick answer.

--to be continued--

D9ty7...i dy feel u oooo

You are doing a great job D9ty7, but then, you just have to work hard at filling plot holes.

The last part of Chap.7 is hardly believable.

Nike's father had known about Segun all the while.Segun was surprised when he found out,but was too forgetful to ask Nike about it when she came back.

The conversation between Segun and his mother didn't strike me as anything close to reality.It was just too mechanical.You've portrayed the family to us as one where parents are respected.That dialogue contradicted your portrayal, no matter how angry Segun was.

Again, Segun's mother was for the better part,overly forceful.Forcing her son to date a girl of her choice at 16? Beats me!

I may be wrong though, but that doesn't take away the fact that you are doing a great job.

Segun na only him fada, he de fear? He shout 2 anyone dat comes his way 2 bad. He supose 2 pretend n do as his mum wise nt in front of Jummy dat attitude.

Why re de nt askin him abt his cut?

#Following

you are doing a great job bro...keep it up..#Following

Tnx 4 dedicatin d lst chapter 2 me.nyc work. Wen do u update precisely?

Wow cant blive am here........i strted few hrs ago n nw m here wif u guyz....no b smal tin ooo......followin line by line,dot by dots frm nw y liein on mah bed nw cos no wrk 4 me 2day......tank God m off 2day......

I av been observin so many tinz since i strtd.....though a gret wrk rather......bt dnt wnt to coment til i finish,n my latest obsavatn is dat i tot segun's mom once rejected n conclided dat jummy wunt b a nice match 4 hr son n nw she is d one putin a vehement leur of suport to hr in clingin 2 hr son.......r ws dere an arangement b4 den........pls i stnd in d chance of ctiticizm.......nice n gret wrk by mah boss D.ninety seven(D9ty7).........ASPIRING WITH GREAT OPTIMISM to learm frm u n do beta

nehmasjet: I av been observin so many tinz since i strtd.....though a gret wrk rather......bt dnt wnt to coment til i finish,n my latest obsavatn is dat i tot segun's mom once rejected n conclided dat jummy wunt b a nice match 4 hr son n nw she is d one putin a vehement leur of suport to hr in clingin 2 hr son.......r ws dere an arangement b4 den........pls i stnd in d chance of ctiticizm.......nice n gret wrk by mah boss D.ninety seven(D9ty7).........ASPIRING WITH GREAT OPTIMISM to learm frm u n do beta

Thanks for the compliment and observation.
As 4 d observation, kip ur fingers crossed and see hw tinz turn out to be as the story continues. Thanks tho!

I neva knw i hve gr8 peepz on this thread. I have become a better writer in the last few day and a wide thinker just to satisfy u guyz.
I hve come to d conclusion that most of my readers are writers cos they observe things i seem nt to care about. I urge u all to continue with ur gr8 observations and u'll see that d sky iz d starting point.
Signed:
d9ty7

Nkpume Iko: You are doing a great job D9ty7, but then, you just have to work hard at filling plot holes.

The last part of Chap.7 is hardly believable.

Nike's father had known about Segun all the while.Segun was surprised when he found out,but was too forgetful to ask Nike about it when she came back.

The conversation between Segun and his mother didn't strike me as anything close to reality.It was just too mechanical.You've portrayed the family to us as one where parents are respected.That dialogue contradicted your portrayal, no matter how angry Segun was.

Again, Segun's mother was for the better part,overly forceful.Forcing her son to date a girl of her choice at 16? Beats me!

I may be wrong though, but that doesn't take away the fact that you are doing a great job.

hmm............seconded