D.Ella.luv:
Choi,I don miss,wl I eva catch up wt u guys

D9ty7: This thread is dry, why?

boogiejay: @Op. may sango strike you....how can u end such an intresting story lyk dat.... i hereby curse you for allowing me use my mb frm d beginning to d very end.... may u wander aimlessly till death! #slams phone against d wall#

boogiejay: @Op. may sango strike you....how can u end such an intresting story lyk dat.... i hereby curse you for allowing me use my mb frm d beginning to d very end.... may u wander aimlessly till death! #slams phone against d wall#

D9ty7: This thread is dry, why?

Sexy Sapphire:

Wat's dis? Why do u av to curse the writer? Dis is such an xpensive silly joke to play. The guy wasn't paid to write the story and readin it is a matter of choice nt force. So wat is ur problem? Instead of u to appreciate the write-up, u're hia cursing. Ok fine, if u wanna point out ur view bout the way it ended, u cud av said so in a more matured way. If u're are hia ranting bout dis lovely story, wat do u wanna say bout uncompleted stories?

I reject all the curses on D9ty7's behalf. He deserves an apology from u cos he's worth all dos bs of urs and we're all waiting.

Sexy Sapphire:

Wat's dis? Why do u av to curse the writer? Dis is such an xpensive silly joke to play. The guy wasn't paid to write the story and readin it is a matter of choice nt force. So wat is ur problem? Instead of u to appreciate the write-up, u're hia cursing. Ok fine, if u wanna point out ur view bout the way it ended, u cud av said so in a more matured way. If u're are hia ranting bout dis lovely story, wat do u wanna say bout uncompleted stories?

I reject all the curses on D9ty7's behalf. He deserves an apology from u cos he's worth all dos bs of urs and we're all waiting.

D9ty7:
You must be out of ur senses. Why must you curse me because i ended my story where i deemed fit to be the end. Its not like you are an active reader who always comment. Not like, i am being paid to write a story, why dnt you pick up ur pen and write yours and let us see how you're gonna end it.
I wonder maybe if you buy a novel and it ended where you dnt expect it to end, are you gonna curse the author? How are you going to do that? Dumbhead#

Yemlizzy:
Oooh i can you greatly annoyed,dont be vexed,okay.Some people will always complain,the best you can do to yourself is simply ignore them.Beautiful story once more.

Yemlizzy:
Oooh i can you greatly annoyed,dont be vexed,okay.Some people will always complain,the best you can do to yourself is simply ignore them.Beautiful story once more.

Sexy Sapphire:

Wat's dis? Why do u av to curse the writer? Dis is such an xpensive silly joke to play. The guy wasn't paid to write the story and readin it is a matter of choice nt force. So wat is ur problem? Instead of u to appreciate the write-up, u're hia cursing. Ok fine, if u wanna point out ur view bout the way it ended, u cud av said so in a more matured way. If u're are hia ranting bout dis lovely story, wat do u wanna say bout uncompleted stories?

I reject all the curses on D9ty7's behalf. He deserves an apology from u cos he's worth all dos bs of urs and we're all waiting.

Sexy Sapphire:

Wat's dis? Why do u av to curse the writer? Dis is such an xpensive silly joke to play. The guy wasn't paid to write the story and readin it is a matter of choice nt force. So wat is ur problem? Instead of u to appreciate the write-up, u're hia cursing. Ok fine, if u wanna point out ur view bout the way it ended, u cud av said so in a more matured way. If u're are hia ranting bout dis lovely story, wat do u wanna say bout uncompleted stories?

I reject all the curses on D9ty7's behalf. He deserves an apology from u cos he's worth all dos bs of urs and we're all waiting.

Ghozye: Wow! Guess I wz away 4 too long n d teenage frolicking had 2 cum 2 an end in my absence.

D9ty7,I mst commend u 4 a job weldone;altho I don't rlly lik d way it ended,I wz actually prayin 4 a miracle 4 Segun #team Nike n I wz expectin Jummy 2 lay an egg after smtym,bt d endin z stil owk.

@Boogiejay dt wz rlly harsh!

Fredfrank: Wow... @D9ty, is dat d end like seriously?.... to me d strory cn go longer than dat... i really enjoyed it bro... thumbs up

D9ty7: The story had to end like that you know. When a story becomes lengthy, it becomes boring.
But anyway, i've learnt one or two things from ur observation.
@Boogiejay, he'z just hating. Nufin much.
You can read my second story via the link on my signature.

Ghozye:

Yea,I jst feel it ended too soon lik thr wz stil sm tinz dt cld cum out of ur plot,anyways tis ur story n d endin z stil ok. U did well

*muvin 2 d Undercover Agent...'I loooove crime fiction'*

Don famous: The ending is very much ok for me. Cos after the scene there's nothin important to talk abt again. I love the ending jare boss thumbs up

TOLU£N£:
Loving this...*thumbs up*

D9ty7: --continuation--
After the paper Segun waited for Jummy outside the exam hall.
Nike hurriedly came out and walked towards Segun. She handed him an envelope and waited for his reaction. Segun opened it and discovered it was an invitation card to her birthday party on the 4th of October.
"Will you come?" She asked.
"Yes, i will." he replied.
"I'll really appreciate it." she said.
Jummy came outside and joined them.
"Baby let's go." she said.
"I'll be with you shortly." he said.
"See you later." she said.
"Alright." Segun said and walked to where Jummy was standing.
"What's that?" Jummy asked.
"Invitation card." he replied.
"For what?" she asked.
"Birthday party." he replied.
"do u plan on attending?"
"Yes, i will." segun answered.
"But what is so special in that girl." Jummy asked.
"There is nothing special in her, She is my friend and i have to support her on her birthday."
"Let go on a date on that day." Jummy said.
"No problem, provided you'll follow me to her birthday." he said.
"No way, am i going to her birthday." she replied.
"Then we go on no date." he said.
"I know you love that girl." she said angrily.
Segun was suprised at her sudden outburst. Jummy walked away angrily, leaving Segun behind. Segun didn't bother going after her.
"Segun, what's the matter?" Nike asked from behind.
"Nothing. Its just a little misunderstanding." segun replied.
"Hope its not about my invitation. Because i can hear you talk about going somewhere." She said.
"Its not about your invitation." segun said.
They continued walking towards the main road.
"So, how was your paper?" segun asked expertly changing the topic.
"It was good." she replied.
They got to the bus-stop where they will go their seperate ways.
"See you tomorrow." she said.
"yeah, Biology practicals right?" he asked.
"Yes."
Segun hopped into a commercial bus and Nike crossed the road.
"Oh my God! See maturity. She didn't feel jealous at all." he said to himself.

--to be continued--

Haybeeb: but segun sef na cassanova o..only segun olanike, jummy, titilope, tolani...#SMH

sambrozini: Diz story looks childish to me
Cox dz days, teenagers don't du dz fuvk that you're writing

D9ty7:
I get u perfectly. Based on d tushness of the family, i had to make it easier for my readers to understand my story.
Concerning the humor, sarcasm, nd d unrealistic plot. Am not a writer, am just doing this to while away time.
I guess you don't live in Ibadan, cos if u do, you will know what Secondary school cultist entails.
Anyways, i appreciate your observations. It will definitely make me a better writer.

D9ty7: Good morning guys, this is an early morning update. The next updates will be later in the day because am kind of fixed up for today. But i promise you at least two more updates today.
While am away lets delibrate on this questions.
1. Now that Segun have bleeped Jummy. Does that make their love stronger? Are they even in love?
2. What do you think will be the content of Nike's message?
3. Based on acceptance. Who do you think Mary will prefer between Jummy and Nike if Segun succeeded in dating her?(Nike)
Give your answers with reasons.
***
Lets kip the thread busy before the next update.
Signed:
d9ty7.

LogoDWhiz: she's not desperate.. Its just the way segun is treating her...

1mic_cza:

Nooo Logo right from the onset Jummy has been desperate so far