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A Poem:oh! My Dearest Country Nigeria by Ollyfad(f): 3:20pm On Nov 11, 2013
Ermm..... i knw u guys might b disapointed since its the work of an amateur lyk me bt i rili wnt to hear wat u guys tink.i wuld appreciate it since this is my first attempt in writing anything related to literature.
Re: A Poem:oh! My Dearest Country Nigeria by Ollyfad(f): 3:35pm On Nov 11, 2013
Oh! My dearest country Nigeria
Injustice and lawlessness has taken over your beautiful streets
Those that are meant to restore law and order turned out to be lawless and carefree monsters


Oh! My dearest country Nigeria
You are supposed to be one of the greatest country the world will ever have
But you are turning out to be the greatest joke the world has ever known
Because of the hypocritical monsters you have in place of citizenry


Oh! My dearest country Nigeria
These monsters await nothing than to devour every good thing left in you
What faith awaits you dearest country if these monsters succeed?

Oh! My dearest country Nigeria
I fear for your future
I weep for the future that awaits you in the hands of these greedy and selfish monsters
Will you ever be saved?
Will a miracle ever happen?

Oh! My dearest country Nigeria
I mourn for the future of my fatherland
I weep for the hopelessness of its plight
I weep for the efforts of the past sages
I weep for the uncertainty of the future of the giant of Africa!
Re: A Poem:oh! My Dearest Country Nigeria by mariM(f): 11:17am On Nov 12, 2013
nice.
Re: A Poem:oh! My Dearest Country Nigeria by Olugbenger(m): 4:59pm On Nov 12, 2013
Ollyfad: Oh! My dearest country Nigeria
Injustice and lawlessness has taken over your beautiful streets
Those that are meant to restore law and order turned out to be lawless and carefree monsters


Oh! My dearest country Nigeria
You are supposed to be one of the greatest country the world will ever have
But you are turning out to be the greatest joke the world has ever known
Because of the hypocritical monsters you have in place of citizenry


Oh! My dearest country Nigeria
These monsters await nothing than to devour every good thing left in you
What faith awaits you dearest country if these monsters succeed?

Oh! My dearest country Nigeria
I fear for your future
I weep for the future that awaits you in the hands of these greedy and selfish monsters
Will you ever be saved?
Will a miracle ever happen?

Oh! My dearest country Nigeria
I mourn for the future of my fatherland
I weep for the hopelessness of its plight
I weep for the efforts of the past sages
I weep for the uncertainty of the future of the giant of Africa!

since you said this is the work of an amateur, i wont point out ur flaws and state the areas you need to work on....
angry angry angry


Nice poem.
cheesy

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Re: A Poem:oh! My Dearest Country Nigeria by Ollyfad(f): 2:28pm On Nov 16, 2013
you guys should please point out my flaws and where i need to work on.i cwiuzly aint sure if i av a gud way of describing my tots

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