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Re: The Murder Case- A short story by Rapsainot(m): 3:22pm On Dec 15, 2013
OGA ADE tell us how e go be... Abi no update today ni?
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by D9ty7(m): 3:35pm On Dec 15, 2013
Rap_sainot: TEENAGE LAPS NAVIETY tho?
Lmao
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 3:47pm On Dec 15, 2013
Rap_sainot: OGA ADE tell us how e go be... Abi no update today ni?
update comes up 6:00pm. I dey enjoy this comments
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 5:59pm On Dec 15, 2013
Jimmy took the team and left for the golden house, the official hideout of the invisible quartet while Musa went to the hospital but not before calling the security team in the hospital to inform them about a possible attack on the patient in ward 18.

Jimmy and his team parked at the end of the street and walked all the way to the golden house.
"How far is the back up team?" Jimmy asked.

"15 minutes away" Agent mike replied.

Agent mike was supposed to lead the team in the absence of musa but Jimmy who had no training whatsoever in field ops, took it upon himself to lead the team.

They got to the golden house, it was a spacious compound with just a building at the far end. Jimmy was able to hack their cameras and viewed inside the room. Three men where present inside the room.

"Get me the megaphone" Jimmy commanded.

"And what do you want to do?" mike asked.

"Tell them to come out ofcourse" Jimmy replied.

"Are you crazy? Lets go inside, we have the element of suprise on our side, they wont expect us." mike countered.

"Do you think there are fools? Their security camera would spot us before we get there and you dont even know the kind of security accessories they have. They best thing is to order them out and if they fail to come out then we smoke them" Jimmy explained.

"Alright Jimmy, lets do it your way, but when this fails, i will be the first to tell sani during debriefing that you brought this idea" mike threatened.

Jimmy collected the megaphone and spoke. "This is NATU commanding all occupants of this building to come out in the next 2minutes" He ordered and watched their reaction from his ipad.

The three men were startled. Agent white quickly ran to his keyboard and punched some keys. The large screen in the room came alive. It was showing all the angles outside the room, there were cameras outside the building. He used different angles to view the sorrounding but he didn't see any body. Whoever it was was well trained and has hidden perfectly.

"You have one more minute" Jimmy shouted into the megaphone.

"What do we do?" White asked.

"Let them come, we would be ready for them" Agunechemba replied.

"You have 20seconds left" Jimmy reminded them.

"This isn't working" Mike said.

"Trust me, its working perfectly" Jimmy replied and then turned to another member of his team
"Hope you are with the tear gas?" he asked.

"Affirmative" the guy replied.

"Good! After the count of three, i want you to smoke them out" Jimmy ordered and started counting albeit whispering to his team.
"1.....2......3" he counted to three and then signalled the guy.

The tear gas was shot into the room via the window which was slightly open.
"go go go!!!" Jimmy ordered and they all ran towards the door. Jimmy planted dynamite on the door and it blasted open.

They all wore gas masks and ran into the room. Lo and behold, it was empty. Jimmy used his ipad to access the cameras but they had all been deactivated.

"I told you this was a bad idea" mike Shouted.


Musa broke his all time speed record as he was driving to the hospital. You would mistake him for a formula1 driver. How did he get a car since jimmy and his team took the official NATU van? You might ask, but there should be a guy somewhere in the island who might be reporting a missing car any moment soon.

Paul walked majestically to ward 18 where Grace was, all the security men had converged at the north west entry. He opened the door and went in. Grace was sleeping peacefully. He brought out his gun and wanted to point it at grace when security men barged into the room. They had been tipped by Agent musa about a possible attack on the patient in ward 18.

"Freeze!!!" dey shouted.

Paul didn't wait to be told that he was busted. He quickly jumped through the glass window of ward 18 which was located at the second floor of the hospital building while the security men kept shooting to the air. Their orders were to use non-lethal force.

Paul landed on a vehicle that was parked outside. He felt the pains as his back ached but he had to run. He quickly got up and just then, musa drove into the hospital.

The security men ran to the staircase and ran downstairs.
Musa came down from his car and together with the security men, they gave paul a hot chase.
Paul ran into an abandoned warehouse.
The men followed him but they applied caution. The warehouse had many rooms and it was difficult to know which particular room paul entered.
Musa who was outside the Warehouse put a call across to Jimmy
"Send paul's photograph to my PDA" he ordered. They were chasing someone without actually seeing his face. Only two security men who barged into the hospital room were able to see his face and it was even the side of his face they saw.

"I dont have his picture" Jimmy replied.

"Then find it" Musa shouted. And ended the call.

Paul hid perfectly behind a large drum in the room. He saw the door slowly open without a sound and he became alert. A police man walked in, slowly inspecting the place. He walked slowly with his gun, turning his head at every slight movement.

Paul saw his shadow, he was coming towards him. He braced himself for the inevitable and held his breathe.
The policeman suddenly passed where paul was without seeing him. Immediately he passed, paul grabbed him on the neck. The policeman was struggling, there was no way he could turn his long gun and shoot paul and there was no way he could shout because paul held his neck so tight. He struggled till he gave up. Paul dragged him to one corner, removed the policeman's uniform and wore.
"This will facilitate my escape" he said.

*TBC*

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Re: The Murder Case- A short story by loabb2(m): 6:08pm On Dec 15, 2013
Suspense again
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by 3Dimension: 6:13pm On Dec 15, 2013
Its getting much more interesting.....jimmy must be from kuvuki land. To hv taught of such method... He should be shot if he survives he should be shot again.

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Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 6:13pm On Dec 15, 2013
loabb2: Suspense again
wink
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 6:16pm On Dec 15, 2013
3Dimension: Its getting much more interesting.....jimmy must be from kuvuki land. To hv taught of such method... He should be shot if he survives he should be shot again.
grin dont blame him na, he's just a computer operator with no experience in field ops. You should rather blame mike for accepting
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by Clumslow17(m): 6:32pm On Dec 15, 2013
ah ade wic kin andrelin rush be dis nah.
Abeg more update pls.
More mb to ur line,9ice one bro.
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 6:45pm On Dec 15, 2013
Clumslow17: ah ade wic kin andrelin rush be dis nah.
Abeg more update pls.
More mb to ur line,9ice one bro.
the adrenalin rush is very necessary o
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by Oluwason(m): 6:49pm On Dec 15, 2013
adegwurulez:
grin dont blame him na, he's just a computer operator with no experience in field ops. You should rather blame mike for accepting

This action film is taking a new turn daily, weldone bro.
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 6:50pm On Dec 15, 2013
Oluwason:

This action film is taking a new turn daily, welding bro.
tnks sir
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by oloyedayo(m): 6:55pm On Dec 15, 2013
hmmmmm. I comment my reserve.
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by PrinceAdepoju(m): 6:57pm On Dec 15, 2013
and when is the next update, Boss?
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 7:00pm On Dec 15, 2013
oloyedayo: hmmmmm. I comment my reserve.
abeg comment am o
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 7:01pm On Dec 15, 2013
PrinceAdepoju: and when is the next update, Boss?
*whispers to him* that should be 2mao

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Re: The Murder Case- A short story by tana4gud(f): 7:01pm On Dec 15, 2013
Oga ADe plsss wen are u completing d story? Cos I want 2 travel n d place am going 2 is networkLESS! Lolz

Nice write up my brother
#still following

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Re: The Murder Case- A short story by Sowhizy(f): 7:04pm On Dec 15, 2013
Nice! Hpe d nxt update z comin up shortly?

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Re: The Murder Case- A short story by hikmoj(m): 7:21pm On Dec 15, 2013
How i wish all d security tactics describe here are truely use in 9ja...nigeria 24...jack baurer on pt.
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Re: The Murder Case- A short story by Uthman51(m): 8:13pm On Dec 15, 2013
adegwurulez:
*whispers to him* that should be 2mao

Tomorrow?!!! shocked
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 8:40pm On Dec 15, 2013
tana4gud: Oga ADe plsss wen are u completing d story? Cos I want 2 travel n d place am going 2 is networkLESS! Lolz

Nice write up my brother
#still following
hmm... dnt want to reveal when it will end this time around, i want it to come as a suprise.
but dont worry ehm, i'll complete it before you travel
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 8:42pm On Dec 15, 2013
Sowhizy: Nice! Hpe d nxt update z comin up shortly?
well, if 18hrs is very soon then the answer is yes!!!
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 8:43pm On Dec 15, 2013
hikmoj: How i wish all d security tactics describe here are truely use in 9ja...nigeria 24...jack baurer on pt.
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Dnt worry, we shall get there
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 8:44pm On Dec 15, 2013
Uthman51:

Tomorrow?!!! shocked
yes wink
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by walewunmi(m): 8:50pm On Dec 15, 2013
Waow c action everywia I turned...avnt bin able 2read dis story cos I was kinda bizy bt cumin bak here I know I've missed a lot MR.ade u re one hell talented of a writer u got glued on 2ur story(nt gmmed oh bt gluuueeeddd)my man u re gud thumbs up I knw dis mite sound rada insane bt I luv d SUSPENSE in dis short action story in quote lol grin :-
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by adegwurulez(m): 9:17pm On Dec 15, 2013
walewunmi: Waow c action everywia I turned...avnt bin able 2read dis story cos I was kinda bizy bt cumin bak here I know I've missed a lot MR.ade u re one hell talented of a writer u got glued on 2ur story(nt gmmed oh bt gluuueeeddd)my man u re gud thumbs up I knw dis mite sound rada insane bt I luv d SUSPENSE in dis short action story in quote lol grin :-
tnx man, atleast someone loves the suspense

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Re: The Murder Case- A short story by kennybelle: 9:52pm On Dec 15, 2013
shocked
this is getting as interesting as ever, so tight a suspense filled story. U increase our heartbeat with every update. This story is too interesting to be tagged *A short story*, abeg remove am joor!
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by DEllaluv(f): 9:54pm On Dec 15, 2013
3Dimension: Its getting much more interesting.....jimmy must be from kuvuki land. To hv taught of such method... He should be shot if he survives he should be shot again.


Lol I'll tel Mr Bones 4 u

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Re: The Murder Case- A short story by philtrum(m): 10:33pm On Dec 15, 2013
Amaka gone for good
Jimmy wan dey claim smart boy....meanwhile!! *smh*

*sighs and sing* And I think to myself what a wonderful story

calvary! Grace is safe.
@Ade now I shall rest to wake at sunrise and to the sweet smelling aroma of thy update.

#sweetstory
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by Jumizie13(f): 9:37am On Dec 16, 2013
Shaií, i don late
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by Nobody: 9:38am On Dec 16, 2013
Baba adegwu I tender ooooooo.... Diz one na '' as e dey hot'' me likey.... I no know sey yo grand Pman na agent o... Lol
Re: The Murder Case- A short story by AnnNini(f): 9:49am On Dec 16, 2013
Nice story! Am following! Update ooooooo! Mean while what is the meaning of TBC?

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