Guykhena:
Tanx Bro.
The extras I added was just to keep the verse entertaining and not a bore,but it seems that only gave way to the huge Stretchings,am gonna work on that...

Nope, those extras made the verse boring at the end.

coogar: opener - jigsaw
rhymes - jigsaw
metaphor - TIE
punchlines - guykhena
personals - guykhena
flow - jigsaw
wordplay - guykhena
closer - jigsaw

MVGT - jigsaw

opener
no single punch was delivered by guykhena - he was even pampering his opponent. jigsaw's first sentence was a direct punch talking about guykhena's impotency. anyone that said opener was a tie is a complete idïot that should never judge here again.

rhymes
jigsaw took this by a countrymile. he kept it short, simple & concise. guykhena stretched his rhymes beyond the elastic limit & he hardly rhymed perfectly in any of the verse.

metaphor
none of them came through here. i guess they both agreed not to infuse deadly metaphors in their verses so this is almost redundant.

punchlines
guykhena got this but that's because he had more than 70 lines instead of the agreed 32 lines. airmark should have edited guykhena's verses to the same number of lines as jigsaw. it's unfair to jigsaw when his adversary has more than double his lines. everyone gets to spit within a time limit in a rap battle, the rule is the rule.

personals
guykhena went apeshït here as well. scooping out information like a deranged paparazzi. he concentrated too much on personals he forgot to rhyme perfectly or arrange his flow intelligently.

flow
jigsaw - not even debatable. his bars were structured. very concise & clear. his line compression skills were excellent here. he made sure his fillers were to the barest minimum.

guykhena rambled on & on like he was writing a thesis. no flow, no structure. irrelevant bullshyte waxed with baloney. this kid needs to learn how to compress his lines. rap verses should be like a telegram message, not a science textbook!

wordplay

guykhena took this - he had some gems dropped even though most were generic. jigsaw had one or two in this category & that wasn't enough to subdue guykhena.

closer
guykhena lost this by default. i don't even know what was meant to be the closer. he included a chat session in a rap verse. trust nigerians to turn everything into a village meeting standard. what the fück was that about? does he think we have all the time to read through his bunkum?



fück this - jigsaw won this & it wasn't even close. guykhena cheated by having more lines than the rules stated & he should work on his structure, flow and rhyme schemes.

lmao
oga why are you doing this nah?
Free niggas jooh!

Dareezyn's verse is more or less a freestyle!
I know that guykhena fumbled as well, but he was more serious. which i think made him script too much nd he started fusing the lines together!
Nd thats why he didnt get the flow criterion

The opener you gave to dareezyn, pls point out the punch in that bar!
Lwkm @ mets = tie

oga coogar don't try to manipulate us with ur cunning words!

when you sway, you influence the judges verd... Sway less!

Limerick:
Nope, those extras made the verse boring at the end.

Ok,,
I guess so... Everyone got different tastes..
Thanks for your verds tho..

LIKE I SAID EARLIER, MY PHUCKING VOTE GOES TO GUYKHENA VIA BODYGHANAMUSTGO.



#YouFuckBytches

Limerick, don't lemme give Kslib your picture o!

You know the guy is a good MEME artist, he will help me caption your ugly self o!

Guykhena:
Jigsaw lines wasn't even up to 16,he didn't do his homework and you put the blame on me?
I will call this a fair judgement,tho you found fault in everything I did,,,and you saying chat session? Do you watch Live battles at all? If I start breaking down all the blatant points you made,this thread is gonna be turned upside down(cus I know you live arguments,and you're just gonna go on and on.).....
It seems anything you do,you take up issues with it,but am not gonna go on that lane with you.
Anyway Thanks for your verds tho,am gonna work it..
.

no need to get salty about my verdict - 90% of the cats here will still give you the W cos they are all faggöts anyways. however, if you are a man of dignity & decorum, you should concede defeat & hope for a rematch!

in live battles, it depends on what was agreed. if the ish is unlimited then all kinda bullshit comes along. however, this was a time-limit battle. drop 20 lines & that's it. you went on a SSCE composition & it bored the fück outta me.

i dunno you from adam & i have got nothing against you. i don't judge personalities, i only judge the bars i see. you built an expensive mansion on a poorly-laid foundation. if your bars can't be easily comprehended by the audience, what's the essence of spitting it?

guykhena, how do u count bars and lines jig did 22 lines/ 11 bars wtf!

Lmao! Really? Its kool sha
so i guess its a self exile since airmark wouldnt ban me

but come to think of it......time wasnt an excuse but i never really thought much of the battle
some of u judges are just ddickriding!
This just spelt a the beginning of a new era where stretching is condoned!

If he beats me fine! But let it be with 20lines or it doesnt count!


SAW

coogar:

no need to get salty about my verdict - 90% of the cats here will still give you the W cos they are all faggöts anyways. however, if you are a man of dignity & decorum, you should concede defeat & hope for a rematch!

Am not feeling salty in any way,everyone is entitled to his/her opinion and I respect that,so I've got no problem with your verds.
Jigs didn't come prepared(I doubt if he has ever been in a battle once),he dropped a freestyle verse with no punchlines,Metaphors,and I should concede to that?
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coogar:
in live battles, it depends on what was agreed. if the ish is unlimited then all kinda bullshit comes along. however, this was a time-limit battle. drop 20 lines & that's it. you went on a SSCE composition & it bored the fück outta me.

I don't get it? In Live battles you go in for the kill bar for bar,if you watch battles from KOTD,URL,RTV Villa,you'll get what am talking about..
In my verse I went in for the stings(which his verse cleary lacked),so you saying its like a 'composition',its just somehow...

coogar:

i dunno you from adam & i have got nothing against you. i don't judge personalities, i only judge the bars i see.

But the way you presented your verds states otherwise,am cool tho...

coogar: you built an expensive mansion on a poorly-laid foundation. if your bars can't be easily comprehended by the audience, what's the essence of spitting it?

Can't be easily comprehended? In real sense you sayinge my lines wasn't easy to decypher?,,,I made my verse less complicated that even non-textcees can easily pick out the punches.
Jigsaw's verse was just a one way freestyle not a battle verse,I think he need to learn how battles are carried out..
Anyway,thanks for your 'strict' points, its gonna push me to do better.....