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The Break Up- A Short Story by Jaglieski: 9:16pm On Jul 14, 2014 |
Boy: Baby, we need to talk. Girl: Ricardo, what do u mean? Boy: Something has come up... Girl: What? What's wrong? Is it bad? Boy: I don't want to hurt you, baby. Girl: *Thinks* Oh my God, I hope he doesnt break up with me... I love him so much. Boy: Baby, are you there?? Girl: Yeah, I'm here. What is so important?? Boy: I'm not sure if I should say it.. Girl: Well, you already brought it up, so please just tell me. Boy: I'm leaving... Girl: Baby, what are u talking about?? I don't want you to leave me, I love you. Boy: Not like that, I mean I'm moving far away. Girl: Why? All of your famliy lives over here. Boy: Well, my father is sending me away to a boarding school far away. Girl: I can't believe this. [FATHER: (Picks up the other phone, interrupts & yells furiously ERICA!, what did I tell you about talking to boys?!!!... Get off thedamn phone!! (And hangs up).] Boy: Wow, your father sounds really mad. Girl: You know how he gets, butanyways, I dont want you to go. Boy: Would you run away with me? Girl: Baby, you know I would, I would do anything for you, but I can't... You don't know what would happen if I did. My dad would kill me! Boy: *Sad* It's okay.. I understand, I guess.. Girl: *Thinking*I can't believe what's going on. Boy: I need to give you something tonite, because I am leaving on flight 1-80 in the morning, so I need to see you now. Girl: Okay, I will sneak out & meet you at the park. Boy: Okay, I'll meet you there in 20 minutes. [They meet at a nearby park, they both hug eachother. And he gives her a note.] Boy: Here you go, this is for you. I gotta go. Girl: *Tear* (Begins to cry.) Boy: Baby, dont cry, you know I love you... But I have to go. Girl: Okay (Begins to walk away.) [They both go back home. And Erica begins to read the letter he gave her] It says..."Erica, You probably already know that I'm leaving, I knew this would be better if I wrote a letter explaining the truth about how much I care about you. The truth is, is that I never loved you, I hated you so much, you are my bitch and dont you ever forget that. I never cared about you, and never wanted to talk to you, and be around you. You really have no clue how much I hate you. Now that I'm leaving I thought you should know that I hate you, bitch. You never did the right thing, and you were never there. I didnt think I could hate someone as much as I hate you. And I never want to see you, for the rest of my life, I will never miss kissing you like before, I never want to cuddle up, how we used to. I will not miss you and that's a promise. You never had my love, and I want you to remember that. Bitch, you keep this letter because this may be the last thing you have from me. Bleep, I hate you so much. I will not talk to you soon bitch... Goodbye. - Ricardo" [ Erica begins to cry, she throws the paper in tha garbage & crys for hours ] ... A day passes, she is sad, depressed and she feels so lonely... Then she gets a phone call.... Friend: How are you feeling? Girl: I just cant believe this happened.. I thought he loved me. Friend: Oh, about that. Ricardo left me a message. A few days ago. He told me to tell you to look in your jacket pocket or something... Girl: Umm.. okay. [She finds a piece of paper in the jacket, It says: "Baby I hope you find this before you read my letter. I knew your dad might read it, so I switched a few words... Hate = Love Never = Always Bitch = Baby Will not= will .... I hope you didn't take that seriously because I love you with all my heart, and it was so hard to let you go thats why I wanted you to run away with me... -Ricardo"] Girl: Oh my God! It's a letter.. Ricardo does love me!!, he must of slipped it into my pocket when he hugged me. I can't believe how stupid I am!! Friend: lol Okay but I ... Call me later. Girl: *happy*okay, bye, I'll be at home waiting for my baby to call me!... Erica turns the T.V. on...... [Breaking news] "An airplane has crashed. Over 47 young boys died, we are still searching for survivors... This is a tragedy we will never forget, this plane was flight 1-80... it was on its way to an all boys boarding school..." the Reporter says. [ She turns off the t.v. ... 3 days later, she kills herself, because of the fact that Ricardo was dead & she had nothing to live for...]... A day after that the phone rings. Nobody answers. It was Ricardo, he called to leave a message. "Its Ricardo, I guess you're not home so, I called to let you know that I'm alive, I missed my flight because I had to see you one last time. So, I hope your not worried. I am staying for good. 2 Likes |
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by hippyj(m): 9:18pm On Jul 14, 2014 |
space acquired, in case. u know nahhh |
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Aliyeous(m): 9:29pm On Jul 14, 2014 |
so sad...jst kill ursef mr ricardo n d equation wuld b balancd |
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Noah13: 9:35pm On Jul 14, 2014 |
hippyj: space acquired, in case. u know nahhhSeconded |
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Nobody: 9:37pm On Jul 14, 2014 |
I never read the story but mek i just book this space |
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by computerboy: 10:14pm On Jul 14, 2014 |
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Ericardo7(m): 3:10am On Jul 15, 2014 |
ummm...sweet intro... |
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by chiimdee: 6:01am On Jul 15, 2014 |
Wow! what a story, gud work dear 1 Like |
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Greyworld: 6:56am On Jul 15, 2014 |
khia! If no be say i forget my eyes 4 bus yesterday i 4 cry now. Nyc 1 @op. 1 Like |
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Ericardo7(m): 8:29am On Jul 15, 2014 |
Jags you are an amazing writer.... Please I have one request...This story really touched me and I don't want this thread to die just like that... So I want to ask u to turn this thread into one of short love stories. I know that there are lots of ideas from where this one came... I think it would be really nice if you keep our hearts warm with amazing stories. Once again...nice job. |
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Nobody: 9:13am On Jul 15, 2014 |
Jagileski you are the boss |
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by jones9ice: 10:03am On Jul 15, 2014 |
shey all of u never see d message on bbm broadcast arund 2011/2012 b4 u dey shout jagajaga u the boss mk u na find something wey reasonable do |
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by jesuswithus: 12:15pm On Jul 15, 2014 |
jones9ice: shey all of u never see d message on bbm broadcast arund 2011/2012 b4 u dey shout jagajaga u the boss@jones9ice if you need moneypak we can transact just drop your contact details i will call you,thanks |
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Jaglieski: 1:05pm On Jul 15, 2014 |
Thanks for the love friends...I appreciate... @Ericardo, Thanks a lot for d love #*no-homo-sha*# I'll try my best and see what I can do about it. |
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Jaglieski: 1:06pm On Jul 15, 2014 |
@divepen....tanx a lot....That means a lot. .I'll try to keep the ink flowing. Tanx y'all. |
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Nobody: 1:17pm On Jul 15, 2014 |
Jaglieski: @divepen....tanx a lot....That means a lot. .I'll try to keep the ink flowing. Tanx y'all.yes oooo...oya kp d ink flowin 1 Like |
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