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The Break Up- A Short Story by Jaglieski: 9:16pm On Jul 14, 2014
Boy: Baby, we need to talk.
Girl: Ricardo, what do u mean?
Boy: Something has come up...
Girl: What? What's wrong? Is it bad?
Boy: I don't want to hurt you, baby.
Girl: *Thinks* Oh my God, I hope he doesnt break up with me... I love him so much.
Boy: Baby, are you there??
Girl: Yeah, I'm here. What is so important??
Boy: I'm not sure if I should say it..
Girl: Well, you already brought it up, so please just tell me.
Boy: I'm leaving...
Girl: Baby, what are u talking about?? I don't want you to leave me, I love you.
Boy: Not like that, I mean I'm moving far away.
Girl: Why? All of your famliy lives over here.
Boy: Well, my father is sending me away to a boarding school far away.
Girl: I can't believe this.
[FATHER: (Picks up the other phone, interrupts & yells furiously ERICA!, what did I tell you about
talking
to boys?!!!... Get off thedamn phone!! (And hangs up).]
Boy: Wow, your father sounds really mad.
Girl: You know how he gets, butanyways, I dont want you to go.
Boy: Would you run away with me?
Girl: Baby, you know I would, I would do anything for you, but I can't... You don't know what would
happen if I did. My dad would kill me!
Boy: *Sad* It's okay.. I understand, I guess..
Girl: *Thinking*I can't believe what's going on.
Boy: I need to give you something tonite, because I am leaving on flight 1-80 in the morning, so I
need to see you now.
Girl: Okay, I will sneak out & meet you at the park.
Boy: Okay, I'll meet you there in 20 minutes.
[They meet at a nearby park, they both hug eachother. And he gives her a note.]
Boy: Here you go, this is for you. I gotta go.
Girl: *Tear* (Begins to cry.)
Boy: Baby, dont cry, you know I love you... But I have to go.
Girl: Okay (Begins to walk away.)
[They both go back home. And Erica begins to read the letter he gave her]
It says..."Erica, You probably already know that I'm leaving, I knew this would be better if I wrote a
letter explaining the truth about how much I care about you. The truth is, is that I never loved you, I
hated you so much, you are my bitch and dont you ever forget that. I never cared about you, and
never wanted to talk to you, and be around you. You really have no clue how much I hate you. Now
that I'm leaving I thought you should know that I hate you, bitch. You never did the right thing, and
you were never there. I didnt think I could hate someone as much as I hate you. And I never want to
see you, for the rest of my life, I will never miss kissing you like before, I never want to cuddle up,
how we used to. I will not miss you and that's a promise. You never had my love, and I want you to
remember that. Bitch, you keep this letter because this may be the last thing you have from me.
Bleep, I hate you so much. I will not talk to you soon bitch... Goodbye. - Ricardo"
[ Erica begins to cry, she throws the paper in tha garbage & crys for hours ]
... A day passes, she is sad, depressed and she feels so lonely... Then she gets a phone call....
Friend: How are you feeling?
Girl: I just cant believe this happened.. I thought he loved me.
Friend: Oh, about that. Ricardo left me a message. A few days ago. He told me to tell you to look in
your jacket pocket or something...
Girl: Umm.. okay.
[She finds a piece of paper in the jacket, It says: "Baby I hope you find this before you read my letter.
I knew your dad might read it, so I switched a few words...
Hate = Love
Never = Always
Bitch = Baby
Will not= will
.... I hope you didn't take that seriously because I love you with all my heart, and it was so hard to
let you go thats why I wanted you to run away with me... -Ricardo"]
Girl: Oh my God! It's a letter.. Ricardo does love me!!, he must of slipped it into my pocket when he
hugged me. I can't believe how stupid I am!! Friend: lol Okay but I ... Call me later.
Girl: *happy*okay, bye, I'll be at home waiting for my baby to call me!... Erica turns the T.V. on......
[Breaking news] "An airplane has crashed. Over 47 young boys died, we are still searching for
survivors... This is a tragedy we will never forget, this plane was flight 1-80... it was on its way to an
all boys boarding school..." the Reporter says.
[ She turns off the t.v. ... 3 days later, she kills herself, because of the fact that Ricardo was dead &
she had
nothing to live for...]...
A day after that the phone rings. Nobody answers. It was Ricardo, he called to leave a message. "Its
Ricardo, I guess you're not home so, I called to let you know that I'm alive, I missed my flight
because I had to see you one last time. So, I hope your not worried. I am staying for good.

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Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by hippyj(m): 9:18pm On Jul 14, 2014
space acquired, in case. u know nahhh
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Aliyeous(m): 9:29pm On Jul 14, 2014
so sad...jst kill ursef mr ricardo n d equation wuld b balancd
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Noah13: 9:35pm On Jul 14, 2014
hippyj: space acquired, in case. u know nahhh
Seconded
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Nobody: 9:37pm On Jul 14, 2014
I never read the story but mek i just book this space grin
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by computerboy: 10:14pm On Jul 14, 2014
cool
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Ericardo7(m): 3:10am On Jul 15, 2014
ummm...sweet intro...
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by chiimdee: 6:01am On Jul 15, 2014
Wow! what a story, gud work dear

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Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Greyworld: 6:56am On Jul 15, 2014
khia! If no be say i forget my eyes 4 bus yesterday i 4 cry now. Nyc 1 @op.

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Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Ericardo7(m): 8:29am On Jul 15, 2014
Jags you are an amazing writer....
Please I have one request...This story really touched me and I don't want this thread to die just like that... So I want to ask u to turn this thread into one of short love stories. I know that there are lots of ideas from where this one came... I think it would be really nice if you keep our hearts warm with amazing stories.
Once again...nice job.
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Nobody: 9:13am On Jul 15, 2014
Jagileski you are the boss
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by jones9ice: 10:03am On Jul 15, 2014
shey all of u never see d message on bbm broadcast arund 2011/2012 b4 u dey shout jagajaga u the boss

mk u na find something wey reasonable do
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by jesuswithus: 12:15pm On Jul 15, 2014
jones9ice: shey all of u never see d message on bbm broadcast arund 2011/2012 b4 u dey shout jagajaga u the boss

mk u na find something wey reasonable do
@jones9ice if you need moneypak we can transact just drop your contact details i will call you,thanks
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Jaglieski: 1:05pm On Jul 15, 2014
Thanks for the love friends...I appreciate...
@Ericardo, Thanks a lot for d love #*no-homo-sha*#
I'll try my best and see what I can do about it.
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Jaglieski: 1:06pm On Jul 15, 2014
@divepen....tanx a lot....That means a lot. .I'll try to keep the ink flowing. Tanx y'all.
Re: The Break Up- A Short Story by Nobody: 1:17pm On Jul 15, 2014
Jaglieski: @divepen....tanx a lot....That means a lot. .I'll try to keep the ink flowing. Tanx y'all.
yes oooo...oya kp d ink flowin

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