Loading..so here I am..this has been on my mind for quiet sometime now buh d lazy part of me is saying no

All tanx to my oga at d top sammy hoe...nd kingphilip...also to missyhorlah bestie of life for the inspiration
So m calling u all:
Xtarxhyne
Lanicky
Cheriepet
Charijee
Kelvingraphics
3dimension
Logodwiz
Harlos
Naijaboiy
Dre11
Omotorlah
Seanrhodez
NB:Am not promising a constant update oo and it is just a fiction

This post is Ebolaic! Beware!




SAW

So I was not invited




The story better be sweet.
One of these days I will tell the story of my life. But with another moniker of course

Prologue:

I must have fallen into a deep sleep. Rolling out from under the table,I looked around

What! everywhere is so deserted and this is so unusual considering the fact that this is the most crowded place in the palace.

My head keeps aching.Yeah,now I remember what happened,the chaos,the running,the shoving.Mama's voice as she shouted our names.the men on horses,the one with veils,the ones with swords and the one's with bows and arrows.

Now I remember how I was shoved into the room by the slave,making me hit my head on the chair.Now I know what I was doing under the chair.

"Hahahaha"I heard the voice of the wicked witch.scared to d wits nd almost urinating on my shorts.

No!I should not be scared.My father will be sad to see me scared..Been d only son,and next to be king.But cut that short.I am just six.

Summoning all the courage I had,I went out and no,what I saw got me running back.To hell,with courage.What do I know about life,my mum still feeds me,bath me.

"But,why are you doing this"That was my dad voice...strong in front of danger.

"Why?..are you seriously asking me why"I heard the evil queen's voice.so soft and innocent you could fall for it...."Do u think,u were lucky to have killed my late husband?oh,no baby.It was planned by me,that is how I go around killing everybody"

"But why do u do this,what do u stand to gain"

"Hahaha"that laughter I have always hated since the 1st day I laid my eyes on her...."I LOVE BLOOD,I LOVE BLOOD" peeping out I could see her stabbing my dad as she repeated d word over and over again.

And looking at that man whom everybody had loved,the once bold man I had always envied sitting vulnerable on the chair.I had no idea when the tears came out from my eyes.looking up to my dad I can see him staring at me nd then I can see d smiles forming at the two edge of his lips.and there and then I spoke to my heart









I passed the secret passage to the entrance.looking around I feel bad.the once loved and cherished environment now covered with bodies,blood was everywhere,heads were divorcing the body.


Woman,children not even spared from this but nobody noticed me,nobody could see me and then I remember what I said in my heart

Death,I had called,do not take me away today but after the day of my vengeance and there and then a veil covered me.

JigsawKillah: This post is Ebolaic! Beware!




SAW

Hian

naijaboiy: is this going to be a true life story?

Nope

BoiledCorn: So I was not invited




The story better be sweet.
One of these days I will tell the story of my life. But with another moniker of course

oops!my bad


Its not d story of my life

Lorlaahlozz: oops!my bad
Its not d story of my life

Now I remember how I was shoved into d room by d slave,making me hit my head on d chair....

this story go get better action.

Bestie,I dey ur back ooo..move on dearie

interestingano

Reporting In..

My moniker is logodwhiz not logodwiz.

Lovely story sis.. Keep it up..

I dey your back..

birra dey ur back gadagba

missyhorlah: Bestie,I dey ur back ooo..move on dearie

Tanx

LogoDWhiz: Reporting In..

My moniker is logodwhiz not logodwiz.

Lovely story sis.. Keep it up..

I dey your back..

Tanx egbon

Xtarxhyne: birra dey ur back gadagba

Birra mi..tanchu

Nice story hon....the update better be constant

i see im nt relevant here.hmm [walks out whistling]

Lola u've decided to start............

Oya now make I sit. Cheriepet come and have your sit beside me.

3Dimension: Lola u've decided to start............

Oya now make I sit. Cheriepet come and have your sit beside me.

Sitting beside u dear.... Lola i neva knew u are a storyteller.... lol

JeffreyJamez, Charijee, Kinggphilip, frankben our girl has started a story... *druming for support*

Cheriepet:

Sitting beside u dear.... Lola i neva knew u are a storyteller.... lol
. frankben our girl has started a story... *druming for support*

but she refused kissing me

i'll always support you lorla

Nice feel of the introductory passage but there are bits of abbreviations here and there all over.

Punctuate correctly and eliminate the use of "..." and insert your breaks in the right places. It's not a text message.

Still following.

*Crashed in and hits head on the wall*

My head
Who threw me here like boko haram bomb

frankben: but she refused kissing me

i'll always support you lorla

Na by force to kiss u?

Nwanne how u dey

Cheriepet:

Na by force to kiss u?

Nwanne how u dey

no be by force buh at least, she should have given me a peck

Adim Okay ..... Kedu maka Ndi be-unu?

Cheriepet:

Sitting beside u dear.... Lola i neva knew u are a storyteller.... lol

JeffreyJamez, Charijee, Kinggphilip, frankben our girl has started a story... *druming for support*

Here I am. ....Following

Lorlaahlozz: Tanx egbon

Uwc aburo.

Show then what you've got..

Abeg shey nah narrative story u wan write or discriptive story self.......




I was here and c the room empty

seanrhodez: Nice story hon....the update better be constant

m blushing oo swthrt..tanx for reading this..am happy

daveP: i see im nt relevant here.hmm [walks out whistling]

pls m so sowi..thought I did..pls pls nd pls

3Dimension: Lola u've decided to start............

Oya now make I sit. Cheriepet come and have your sit beside me.

Tanx..sit nd enjoy


Still expecting sammyhoe

harlos: *Crashed in and hits head on the wall*

My head
Who threw me here like boko haram bomb

Ebola welcome