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Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 7:34pm On Aug 02, 2014

Dygeasy: Nice feel of the introductory passage but there are bits of abbreviations here and there all over.

Punctuate correctly and eliminate the use of "..." and insert your breaks in the right places. It's not a text message.

Still following.

lol..m so used to that ....

Tanx for following

Re: My Life,my Fate by Dygeasy(m): 7:35pm On Aug 02, 2014

Lorlaahlozz: lol..m so used to that ....

Tanx for following

Re: My Life,my Fate by daveP(m): 7:35pm On Aug 02, 2014

missyhorlah: Bestie,I dey ur back ooo..move on dearie

Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 7:36pm On Aug 02, 2014

papindinho: interestingano

Tanchugano

Re: My Life,my Fate by daveP(m): 7:36pm On Aug 02, 2014

LogoDWhiz: Reporting In..

My moniker is logodwhiz not logodwiz.

Lovely story sis.. Keep it up..

I dey your back..

lol

Re: My Life,my Fate by daveP(m): 7:39pm On Aug 02, 2014

Lorlaahlozz: pls m so sowi..thought I did..pls pls nd pls

well its okay,be ready for the preyor that follows. Wait when last did you comment up to 5 times on my own tori? shocked

update ......

Re: My Life,my Fate by Dygeasy(m): 7:42pm On Aug 02, 2014

Lorlaahlozz: lol..m so used to that ....

Tanx for following

You have to get unused to it o. You aren't writing for yourself or your friends or for writing sake.

Maybe I'm wrong though.

Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 7:43pm On Aug 02, 2014

Cheriepet:

Sitting beside u dear.... Lola i neva knew u are a storyteller.... lol

... *druming for support*

Tanx,knew I could count on ur support

Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 7:45pm On Aug 02, 2014

frankben: but she refused kissing me

i'll always support you lorla

lol

Never knew u read tongue

Re: My Life,my Fate by Nobody: 7:46pm On Aug 02, 2014

daveP:

surprised

Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 7:48pm On Aug 02, 2014

charijee: Here I am. ....Following

Tanx in law

Re: My Life,my Fate by daveP(m): 7:53pm On Aug 02, 2014

missyhorlah: surprised

carry on

Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 7:53pm On Aug 02, 2014

dre11: Abeg shey nah narrative story u wan write or discriptive story self.......

I was here and c the room empty

All join

Tanchu

Re: My Life,my Fate by Nobody: 7:56pm On Aug 02, 2014

daveP: carry on

wt I do?

Re: My Life,my Fate by dre11(m): 7:58pm On Aug 02, 2014

Lorlaahlozz: All join

Tanchu

abeg no b greeting we go read for this thread ooooo

drop sometin jooor
and don't tell me ur a canivour

from the essay u just wrote down undecided

Re: My Life,my Fate by daveP(m): 8:04pm On Aug 02, 2014

missyhorlah: wt I do?

support ma story.and quickly update. I know ife though! Derailers beware.

Re: My Life,my Fate by papindinho(m): 8:12pm On Aug 02, 2014

Lorlaahlozz: Tanchugano

lol... You garrit

Re: My Life,my Fate by sod09(m): 8:13pm On Aug 02, 2014

wat did I miss

Re: My Life,my Fate by Nobody: 8:57pm On Aug 02, 2014

daveP: support ma story.and quickly update. I know ife though! Derailers beware.

yesss sir

Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 9:01pm On Aug 02, 2014

sod09: wat did I miss

Nt much

Re: My Life,my Fate by daveP(m): 10:16pm On Aug 02, 2014

missyhorlah: yesss sir

as Sarah respected Abraham and called him ' Lord '...... Now im nt your ' Abraham ' neida r u my ' Sarah ', so stop the sirdom. Therez only 'Siredom' ( yes sire, nay sire) abi u wanto be my :p ....... Thank you

Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 10:29pm On Aug 02, 2014

...1..

The scent of hypo welcomed me back to life.Opening my eyes I looked around,this should be the hospital everywhere in white.

All the past event came running back,the mysterious nightmares,the strange feelings of having something to do.Now I understand all this

For 20years I have lived a fake life,what and who I thougt I am is not who I am.

I remember d first time I found myself in the hospital,exactly 20years ago.Pains and not hypo combined with a sweet voice had welcomed me back to live.

I can't vividly recollect what she had said,but I know it was something like I should not try to raise my head.I know right then they asked me questions,like what my name was,what do I think had happened and so all

When I could not supply answers,a test was carried out and I was diagnosed to be suffering from loss of memory.

Not long after then a couple was introduced to me,I was told that they are my parents.On seeing them I fell in love but the problem was they reminded me of nothing.

The doctor had told me that once I see someone or get to the environment I was before then I had no problem.

"Hi ayo"my dad said

"Ayo,is that my name"

"Yes,son.You're Ayo Manuel"

20years ago till yesterday I was Ayo manuel but 26years ago I was Aremo Oriade.

Re: My Life,my Fate by harlos: 10:45pm On Aug 02, 2014

Lorlaahlozz: Ebola welcome

Ebolola

weldone o. I get ur back like ike, na together we go take that revenge cheesy

Re: My Life,my Fate by harlos: 10:50pm On Aug 02, 2014

Lorlaahlozz:
20years ago till yesterday I was Ayo manuel but 26years ago I was Aremo Oriade.

Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 11:04pm On Aug 02, 2014

harlos:

u'll understand soon

Re: My Life,my Fate by harlos: 11:11pm On Aug 02, 2014

Lorlaahlozz: u'll understand soon

amin o

Re: My Life,my Fate by LogoDWhiz(m): 11:37pm On Aug 02, 2014

Hmmm

The story behind the name change..

Ride on..

Re: My Life,my Fate by Yungmilio2(m): 11:38pm On Aug 02, 2014

walks in
viewing

Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 11:47pm On Aug 02, 2014

Yungmilio2: walks in
viewing

u need extra eyes tongue

Re: My Life,my Fate by Yungmilio2(m): 11:55pm On Aug 02, 2014

Lorlaahlozz: u need extra eyes

lols
funny
can you lend me yours
would return it very early tomorrow morning
its already late and you need to sleep now

Re: My Life,my Fate by Nobody: 11:59pm On Aug 02, 2014

nice one, following.

Re: My Life,my Fate by Lorlaahlozz: 12:50am On Aug 03, 2014

sameer1212: nice one, following.

welcome

Tanx

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