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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 8:46pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
Donkaz: Lolsss you are welcome into the family bro |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ThaRuthlxx7: 8:46pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 8:56pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
tecno4life: Lol...u ave a way of bringing me out from ghost mode...wil like to join the whatsapp group. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by crystalsaint(f): 8:56pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
techno...when are u adding me ? I will remove my number ooo |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by shankies215(f): 8:56pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
@techno4life.....08188115665 |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 9:21pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
crystalsaint: Where am Pls reply with your number and remove the other one |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 9:22pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
Curbstomp:Where your number ni |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 9:44pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
D9ty7: Take a week's break please. I'm so far behind welldone. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 9:46pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
D9ty7: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 9:50pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
tecno4life:08143751845 07067169064 add the both sha |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by crystalsaint(f): 10:02pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
tecno4life:09093263033...have removed the other one..add me jawe and I wish to be the treasurer... |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by crystalsaint(f): 10:04pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
[quote author=LogoDWhiz post=28375888][/quote]lemme pray for you..pls say a big Amen...uhmmm...The Lord Is your strength!! you will not fall sick till you finish this story..owo adura mi DA!! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:10pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
Jeez...I ve been away all day,and thanks for the updates,mk I use style go start to dey read them,keep up the good work |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 10:36pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
crystalsaint: Lol! Thanks for the prayer. But i'm not sick. Just wanted him to reduce the rate at which he updates, so i can catch up. And also, no one has offered to give me the summary. Finding it hard to comprehend some things. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:01pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
LogoDWhiz:things like? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 11:46pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
haydot95: what role is some characters playing, what actions have they performed? What events are missing and so on |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 3:34am On Nov 27, 2014 |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 6:03am On Nov 27, 2014 |
Whatsapp group still open for admission |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 6:14am On Nov 27, 2014 |
D9ty7 where morning food Whatsapp group still open for admission Hameenat94, bluestarry ur numbers |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 6:23am On Nov 27, 2014 |
D9ty7 where morning food Whatsapp group still open for admission Hameenat94, bluestarry and fatalveli ur numbers |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 6:27am On Nov 27, 2014 |
You no want make person wake up? tecno4life: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Fatalveli(m): 6:40am On Nov 27, 2014 |
tecno4life:08189884673 But oga d9ty7 e no good ooo, u cannot even wait for me, see wat I've missed! I'm still @ page 83! Anyway carry on bro. U rock |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 6:46am On Nov 27, 2014 |
D9ty7:Lolzz Whatsapp group still open for admission Hameenat94 and bluestarry Una still remain Emmykul4love Adeh39 Adewealth027 Ogbarmey We need una ooh for the hot discussions going on. JJoin and stop derailing oga thread. Comment here chat there |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 6:47am On Nov 27, 2014 |
LogoDwhiz and walewunmi you guys have table for two section in the whatsapp group so drop ur numbers |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by afamjb: 6:53am On Nov 27, 2014 |
(WHAT I DO?) tecno u no wan invite me for d chat .. . |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by codedbaby(f): 7:18am On Nov 27, 2014 |
hmmmmm. D9ty7 weld one. please when will this circle come to an end. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 7:26am On Nov 27, 2014 |
LogoDWhiz:lemme help. Lemme start from the top chief anthony- a politician and among the chief sponsorz of a terrorist group by name kharl corp. With the way thinqz are goinq, he has backup coverz for any assiqnment he's send people for. Abdul maleek- chief terrorist ( i.e dier oga at the top). Once a soldier that terrorise america and wan granted amnest and sent back to his native country Sudan buh one way or the other found himself in Niqeria through the help of some corruptz headz that want to make it in politics (like chief antho) clement- a well trained police officer that is bent on wantinq to unraved the secretz of kharl corp, killinqz in a school (and for his safety, thouqh he hasnt yet known that ). He is the son of the chief above and elder brodr to kelvin. A very intelliqent officer Kelvin- danger-kelv as he is known at kharl corp. Dangerous dude. Does not know his father is the sponsor of kharl corp. Keepz hidinq in the shadow of his fathers house, thouqh now he has to protect him self (as one certain victor after his life now buh in police custody) and avoid suspicious moves so that his brother (clement ) would not use through him to get at the root of khal corp sandra- model (beautiful chick *hopinq i can go to oga duro's imagination and hala that babe). Wantz to save her as.s from the media as she is in a case of sex scandal with one barrinster(who wantz to save his marriage). She is inlove with kelv( thouqh he playinq along for God knows what purpose *i have forgoten sha). She's involved with don. Don- a blackmail (er), into robbery and god knows all other formz of evil. Trainz youths for all ths atrocities. He has people all arround. Has a cousin deoye. Deoye- cultist, serial killer. Wants to avenge the death of girl and\or killinq everybody involved with his girl's death. Runz into the handz of don,hopinq that he may escape the handz of the law but getz himself involved into more killinqz. Rachel- pregnant wife of clement. Stumbled upon a confidencial document of her father in-law. Knows his secrets now (as a bad man that he is). Wantz to have an affair with a certain doctor takinq care of her (her ex-lover). Who knows if she could be able to tell the secret of her in laws before she is killed (cause clement in danger, automatically same as she). Oboy wait make i rest small |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:48am On Nov 27, 2014 |
CHAPTER SEVENTEEN Dolapo was seated in the room that adjoins with the ICU ward 3b on the third floor of the hospital. The room has a total of nine chairs that are directly facing the ICU, the only demarcation between the two rooms was the glass wall and the door. Inside the ICU was Tolani who was in coma and two other patients who have been on live saving machines. The relatives of the two other patients were seated with her in the waiting room while Tolani's mother was seated behind her. "Dolapo." Someone called her. She turned to see Darasimi squatted beside her seat. She turned away from her and looked absent mindedly at Tolani. She wished she was fine but just sleeping peacefully like a baby with no worries. But the Tolani she was looking at has the greatest worries anyone could have. One she will miss her final exam and in turn miss the chance to graduate. And most importantly, she was battling with her life. She was on the verge of loosing it, yet she was stong willed and wasn't giving death the advantage on her. "Dolapo, I am talking to you." Darasimi said tapping her lightly. She wanted to scream that moment but she was afraid she might be disturbing the three patients in the next room. Even though she was sure the glass wall and doors were sound proofed. Such that no single sound penetrated but we are in Nigeria and those things are very scarce. "Dolapo, talk to me nau, don't make me look like a fool." Darasimi continued. "Can't you just get it? I am not talking to you. Now get out of my sight." She said half screaming and half trying to keep her voice low. Darasimi wanted to scream or slap her but she needed at least someone to trust her. And the perfect person was Dolapo. "I swear to God, I know nothing about Tolani..." Her voice trailed off. "Did I accuse you of knowing about it? Your conscience is pricking you right? Now you are playing a fast one before you are summoned by the police." Dolapo asked not minding the pair of eyes peering at her from behind. "Dolapo, any problem?" Tolani's mother asked. "No problem mum." she replied. Darasimi could hear her heart shatter into pieces just like a breakable plate that fell on a tiled floor. "Dolapo, are you saying I know about Tola's fate? I am disappointed in you." Darasimi said trying to sound strong but her voice gave her away. "Be disappointed in me for all you can. You threw away your dignity and liased with a bloody cultist who paid you fifteen thousand naira to lure all your friends out to be killed. Am waiting for that day when you'll do the same to me, I bet that will mark your end." Dolapo said angrily. "But I thought we've settled this.." Through the glass, they could see one of the the other two patients who shared the ward with Tolani fight for his life. He was gasping and shaking violently, his chest was rising and falling, his ribcage visible as the cloth covering him has slid off. Tola wanted to scream, she wanted to faint, she wanted to close her eyes, she needed to hold unto something. She held something soft and clutched to it crying. Immediately, two doctors and three nurses arrived at the scene. How they got to know something was going wrong was a suprise to her. Maybe there is a camera somewhere, she concluded. The doctors tried to revive him, but things seemed to have gone a little bit out of hand. One of the doctors was screaming instructions to the nurses and the other doctor, he was the most senior and he wanted to save the patient's life. The guy breadthe his last and dropped dead on the bed. One last check on his heartbeat, the senior doctor shook his head sorrowfully as his countenance changed. He instructed the nurses and walked over to Tolani and the other living girl. He shook his head and walked out, tears in his eyes. Dolapo was suprised at the Doctor's reaction, why is he crying? But doctors are said to posses a lion's heart. She wanted to see more of the guy, but the nurses blocked her view by putting a curtain on the glass wall. "Is this how Tolani would die too?" She asked herself. Because she could see the senior doctor shaking his head at the other two patients before going out. Maybe either of them was the next to die. Then her eyes went to what she was clutching unto, Darasimi's hand. Like she was stung by a snake or scorpion, she dropped her hand and ran out of the waiting room. "Tolani must not die." She screamed as she opened the door and started descending the stairs. Was she loosing her mind? She wanted to ask someone, maybe Doctor Kolade would be willing to run a test on her state of mind, if there is a test for that. --to be continued-- |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:54am On Nov 27, 2014 |
Thank you very much Stuff for explaining things to oga Logo |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Mcweber(m): 8:06am On Nov 27, 2014 |
hmmm, yam pepper scatter scatter......everytin is just complicated |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 8:07am On Nov 27, 2014 |
tecno4life: +912815983 |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:09am On Nov 27, 2014 |
You are not in Nigeria right? Curbstomp: |
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