laykorn:


Please help remove all comments that has nothing to do with poetry. Including this. Thank you sir.
Ayamlaykorn

*eyeroll* Is this your thread? Because OP didn't have a problem with me talking to her. Which by the way, was two weeks ago.

uumm:
keep it up..
and soon you'll be high up.






errm... also, don't give up

I'm serious

Thanks a lot, I wont give up

Nice collections, am a poet my self and I can say u ar good...wud like to work wit u tho......u ar a young writer, perhaps perspectives and ideas abt poety can be exchanged......

Niyinficient:
Nice collections, am a poet my self and I can say u ar good...wud like to work wit u tho......u ar a young writer, perhaps perspectives and ideas abt poety can be exchanged......

Thanks...sure, we can exchange ideas

Okies, here is my pin and number for bbm and watsapp: 07032479507 and 2a1d2386

Courtesy: Ayozainy and Niyinficient
@Niyinficient, thanks a lot. U just boosted my morale. God bless you.

FRIENDS IN THE MAKING

On the platform of gist,
I met a like mind.
Of such talent I so much find,
A meeting wit no exchange of fist.

He admires my words,
That made me blush,
In a twinkle of an eye,
We commune in style.

Like a wildfire on a sunned leaf,
Our strangeness consume.
And flow of witty words resume,
And I sure want more of her without leave.

I just want to be free,
To live my life.
In the euphoria of my puzzles,
Beautiful words with no contemplating.

I have read her soothing lines,
So beautiful like diadem.
Now I want to see the picture of this gem,
But her rejection pains the spines .

I try to put down my best,
In solitude, I gather my pen,
Just to impress the one that cares.
Verily, I have got to be the best.

Campy brain, I will wait,
Till our acquaintance has paid.
Wen your conservation be put to laid,
And your portrait I long for with faith.

It might take ages or more,
I will put my thoughts to paper,
I dont mind if you wait.
Till my craft gains a stage.

U welcome dearie....u ar such a wonderful talent!

Niyinficient:
U welcome dearie....u ar such a wonderful talent!

Thanks

Written by My lovely friend and I (Dapo)

OUR RAMBLINGS

The time would come,
We have five years and more together,
The perfect time for us to,
Synchronize our poetry brains together,
And the result would be smashing,
It will be written in gold ink.

We'll write with burning passion,
Cos no one knows our intention,
With imense knowledge and foresight.
We would spread the word...
And scatter their brain with our ramblings
Words of wisdom that will stand agaist the words of Solomon.

In one fierce contest
We will gather our pen
And then at the end,
We will hypnotize the like of Soyinkas,
And make them search their ancient dictionaries.
We would bedazzle the minds..of the Hebrews.. and Popes.. and Novelist

They shall dig for answers,
For our piece can only deliver.
Just with our little words of wisdom,
The world will stand at attention.
And marvel.. and our master piece would move d world into a time of peace.. unity... and Love.
The traitors will bow, for truth will gain a place.

In the era of words, our pen will speak volumes.
Our minds will be undefeatable, Our message would be no choice but the means..
We would rule,
With the message of our mind!
And the power of our pen.

Our audience will be mesmerized in our accent.
For we will speak the English of the Queen.
And translate with the knowledge of phonetics.
The world will bow for peace,
Our words will travel far,
And the world will smile again.

The One in A Dazzled Armour

I see you spewing the ink
Painting immortal images of beautiful words
That dance across the breathless leaflet
Sucking nostrils, breathing life into them

Ayozainy, the one in a dazzled armour
Slaying words with uncommon swords
Awaking the spirits of the timbers
As they perceive the morsel brought upon them

Ride on, Poetess. I'm feeling you.

OMA4U:
The One in A Dazzled Armour

I see you spewing the ink
Painting immortal images of beautiful words
That dance across the breathless leaflet
Sucking nostrils, breathing life into them

Ayozainy, the one in a dazzled armour
Slaying words with uncommon swords
Awaking the spirits of the timbers
As they perceive the morsel brought upon them

Ride on, Poetess. I'm feeling you.

Lol, am blushing. Thank u boss

THE PAIN I FEEL.
My heart has lost the will,
the urge to move further
I feel pained,
I feel jilted
Life has dealt my face a blow
For I have cried, hot shot tears
My sense of judgement abused
by the actions of the insolent.

My face is pale
My jaw agape
My nails unpolished
My hair tattered
My teeth stinking

The mother of all injustice,
the wickedness of man
has pushed me into earths furnace
There is no more tears,
for I have shed all I need
I am now........
I watched it all happen
but I never saw it coming

This world I live,
is one of servitude.
My hands will suck deep into thy heart
My teeth will tear you limb by limb
Run!!! for my feets are coming.

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DEDICATED TO THE ONE I NEVER MET.

It just stop flowing,
It just stop coming,
I wonder why?,
You didnt even say bye.

Did i offend you?,
Did I scare you?,
What has she done?
Pls, stay and have some fun.

I never imagined it,
It never crossed my lips,
Silly me, I thought it would last,
Last, so long, till the world cast.

I was so busy ignoring it,
like it would stay till I cease,
I was making merry,
while you were begging for mercy.

I ignored you for too long,
You left without a single touch,
Dreams and aspirations ,left behind,
My tears flows, with a heavy mind.

Allah knows best,
Please watch over the rest,
Take care, sleep on in peace.
My friend!, rest in perfect peace.


@Laykorn, something came at last

So I stumbled on ur poems, I must say they are really impressive, I like ur simple style of writing. I write poetry for pastime too, and I have interest in short stories. well done