OMA4U, I think I have to invent a new word to describe you, you are just Fantamarawesome, (fantastic, marvellous, awesome). Too much spy movies is in action. Lol. You were just you

Divepen, will always be divepen. This dude can make even the devil to laugh. I had always known you had a funny bone in ur body and I was waiting to see what you would drop, trust me, u didn't disappoint, just that, as usual, it is always a short piece. Kudos

theorbiters:
OMA4U, I think I have to invent a new word to describe you, you are just Fantamarawesome, (fantastic, marvellous, awesome). Too much spy movies is in action. Lol. You were just you

Thank you, theorbiters. I'm flattered.

stuff46:
Words cannot discribe this qreat work.
OMA4U you just brouqht back hope of nabbinq those two ingreats.

All i can say now is that am waitinq for the next chapter cause the last sentence says it all ( i need more)

I'm just seeing these accolades. Thank you, Stuff46.

D9ty7:
When I read Larry's chaper, I said it was the best. Then came Frank, Repo finished it off, then T.Dan, TheRock threw me off, Prettys didn't disappoint me, Kayemjay did it well, Mazi did what he does best, Audrey murdered it, Now you, OMA4U, took it to a whole new level.

D9ty7 boss. I hail you

Skimpledawg:
Kai, OMA4U!!! U are a murderer with class bro! .....abeg incase u neva marry, ma younga sis is available oo!




Ce sweet Story...e b like say na season film! Yu tyt pass g'string bro!

Hahahahaha! I don't mind having her na. Skimpledawg, you're too much.

theorbiters:
Audrey!!!! Finally I can why everyone had been screaming ur name, that was a dangerous piece you dropped and I am so loving it that I had to read it over and over

Really? Lol! Thanks dear

Wao Wao Wao, dis awesome, more wisdom.

Divepen! DIIIIIVEEEPEN!!!!!


YOU KILLED IT.

Wow!! I pray d dream does nt cum true

Wow!! I pray d dream does nt cum true @divepen welldone

Divepen will always be crazily interesting, imagine Rimi born in the line of prophets, LWKMthroway, where did that come from because I am sure I did not see that one coming.

uhn Divenpen, r u saying all wat Oma4u wrote in his chapter was a dream. sorry o, bt me dint gbadu dis ur chapter @tall. u wrote 90% of d last chapter as it was n only added few stuffs dat dint really fuel my int. deer r a lot of xters u could av developed instead of taking d easy way. nway I know its not easy 2 write, tanks 4 putting in ur time. kudos 2 all d writers so far.

using deception to pay decievers divipen u just made the story more intresting. Mehn i just love ur chapter

MumZ:
uhn Divenpen, r u saying all wat Oma4u wrote in his chapter was a dream. sorry o, bt me dint gbadu dis ur chapter @tall. u wrote 90% of d last chapter as it was n only added few stuffs dat dint really fuel my int. deer r a lot of xters u could av developed instead of taking d easy way. nway I know its not easy 2 write, tanks 4 putting in ur time. kudos 2 all d writers so far.

i'm nt saying its a wrong thing to criticiz a writer but dont be too hard on them. We dont pay them or owe them anything.
Oma4u and divepen, weldone on ur quota in makin d collabo worth reading. God bless una plenti.

MumZ:
uhn Divenpen, r u saying all wat Oma4u wrote in his chapter was a dream. sorry o, bt me dint gbadu dis ur chapter @tall. u wrote 90% of d last chapter as it was n only added few stuffs dat dint really fuel my int. deer r a lot of xters u could av developed instead of taking d easy way. nway I know its not easy 2 write, tanks 4 putting in ur time. kudos 2 all d writers so far.

He added a twist, and that is not that easy. Besides there are books in which the writer did what he just did now, saw little wrong with it.

MumZ:
uhn Divenpen, r u saying all wat Oma4u wrote in his chapter was a dream. sorry o, bt me dint gbadu dis ur chapter @tall. u wrote 90% of d last chapter as it was n only added few stuffs dat dint really fuel my int. deer r a lot of xters u could av developed instead of taking d easy way. nway I know its not easy 2 write, tanks 4 putting in ur time. kudos 2 all d writers so far.

Thanks for this... I have sent an apology to Oma4u stating reasons I did that.
..I love your eagle eyes ma and your ability to remember details.... I would love to give you details of it but the writers have agreed that it must remain an in-house thing..Once again thanks ma...

rapmike:


He added a twist, and that is not that easy. Besides there are books in which the writer did what he just did now, saw little wrong with it.

Thanks sir for the defence

toykathy:


i'm nt saying its a wrong thing to criticiz a writer but dont be too hard on them. We dont pay them or owe them anything.
Oma4u and divepen, weldone on ur quota in makin d collabo worth reading. God bless una plenti.

Thanks sir.
.

unlimitedbosco:
using deception to pay decievers divipen u just made the story more intresting. Mehn i just love ur chapter

Thanks baba

Urm... Kingzpen u did great
i don't think divepen did a bad job, the twist made the story longer and more intriguing, he can twist it more without Rimi finally catching them in the act, making it unpredictable. When is Royver posting jor?

Finally kingzpen there are loopholes in your episode. How did Uche know about the keys? How did they know where Christopher's house is? We got to know that Double R is very far from Cedar Point, so how did they get to Double R in a night? You did well sha

Nimen:
Urm... Kingzpen u did great
i don't think divepen did a bad job, the twist made the story longer and more intriguing, he can twist it more without Rimi finally catching them in the act, making it unpredictable. When is Royver posting jor?

Finally kingzpen there are loopholes in your episode. How did Uche know about the keys? How did they know where Christopher's house is? We got to know that Double R is very far from Cedar Point, so how did they get to Double R in a night? You did well sha

How did Uche know about the keys? Kindly Re-read DivePen's chapter again with proper concentration...

How did they know where Christopher's house is? Kindly Re-read my chapter studying deep the dialogues and facial expression... I won't do your thinking for you...

Your last question, Have u traveled at night before? If you have, then you should know how free the road would had been... Perhaps I never mentioned the time they got there, it could be 3:00 A.M. So? And again, this cities are in a country and no chapter stated how distant apart they were, just like saying Lagos and Ibadan...

I tried my best to keep it cool and follow the plot...

MumZ:
uhn Divenpen, r u saying all wat Oma4u wrote in his chapter was a dream. sorry o, bt me dint gbadu dis ur chapter @tall. u wrote 90% of d last chapter as it was n only added few stuffs dat dint really fuel my int. deer r a lot of xters u could av developed instead of taking d easy way. nway I know its not easy 2 write, tanks 4 putting in ur time. kudos 2 all d writers so far.

It depends on the way you see the story, but Divepen as a writer, I believed he just want to add a little twist to the story. Mind you if the story continues from where OMA4U stopped, it means everyone will write from one POV, cos the key is with someone else and a lot of antagonist had died. But with the situation of things, he just left the succeeding writer something write on, the key is still safe and they are still after it. Just my own thought sha o. I may be wrong too cos I wrote this as a result of how I see the story so far.

Kudos to Divepen and Kingzpen. Divepen added twists that made it all complicated and Kingzpen took his clue and maintained that.

KingzPen:


How did Uche know about the keys? Kindly Re-read DivePen's chapter again with proper concentration...

How did they know where Christopher's house is? Kindly Re-read my chapter studying deep the dialogues and facial expression... I won't do your thinking for you...

Your last question, Have u traveled at night before? If you have, then you should know how free the road would had been... Perhaps I never mentioned the time they got there, it could be 3:00 A.M. So? And again, this cities are in a country and no chapter stated how distant apart they were, just like saying Lagos and Ibadan...

I tried my best to keep it cool and follow the plot...

thumbs up man, you good

ok guys, no p, still ffg.

That was a nice one kingzpen. Kudos!

KingZpen!!! Wow, I felt the adrenaline rush as Uche made a drift with the car, I swear it was almost like watching Fast and Furious. Thanks boss for that. I just can't wait for the ending

theorbiters:
KingZpen!!! Wow, I felt the adrenaline rush as Uche made a drift with the car, I swear it was almost like watching Fast and Furious. Thanks boss for that. I just can't wait for the ending

Like seriously? Thankz so much... I really appreciate your spirit-lifting comment...

God Bless You...

I lack words to describe this chapter....
HBG...
You're simply AMAZING!!!

Miss HumbledByGrace, you just made my whole family cry. Nice one

theorbiters:
Miss HumbledByGrace, you just made my whole family cry. Nice one

am also crying 4 nia and chris * it so emotional* misshumbledbygrace welldone