darkenedrebel:


You need to read wide & stop acting like an illiterate. .all the words used are as elementary as abc.. .. It's not my fault you are dumb.. Neither would I dumb down my verse for idiotas like yourself.
& it wasn't a punchline verse.. .It had a storyline & it was to flex rhymes


And what do you mean by deep lyricism? You mean like the crap you write?
Stop smoking crack ..a man with a log in his eye should not tell the next man to remove the splinter in his eye.. .

Lol man. Where didju dig up that my verse? I forgot i dropped that shit .

I still chew bullets.

Call me out if you feel you can trash me.

SmokingGunZ:
Nice ducking bro

Lols. . . Come f.b now!!!

I nor understand o

him father no be thief again He done turn demon

Who unban those accounts sef

Tick tock tick tock,,
.
.
.
Leggo ur time's up!



they call me insane I know,, but am neutral
Its cause of the way I "flow",, "Brah-ma-putra" Verses go the way I go,, and as usual,,
They built With enuf punches to "impale my foes",,like am Dracula!!


Strange!!

Am not that good with multies/
But am used to raw diss/
With few or more kills/
Like the hood on 4th street!/
I hate this boring dudes claiming they best
Shouting kids kids,,like teachers in nursery schools!!
Seriously?
Claiming senior for text,,
now that's a fool at forty!!
U can say am cruel but Bleep it!


l" ama sheer immortal,,
Tha brings fear in mortals/
Even in the witches in "french quarters"/
Call me a fair original!!



#writersblock

I'm new around and not exactly ur obsessed type of rhymer but whatever... I'd like to get a grading

Some super Mario broz just got themselves locked up in the wrong room
So I like from some BET I shot 'em pullin' rhyme triggers to make 'em figure they won't get bigger if they on 'shrooms
Like a witch on a broom I string along rap lines and hold these bitches spellbound
Hearts freezin', y'all shiver like I put u under lock and key with some hell hounds
I spite and bite 'em as tho' I'm some Venice merchant, I chomp skin off 'em by the pound
Like Himalayas to Rift Val', we ain't on level ground
So I grow 'em up and cultivate 'em like....blah blah blah...

Bars:



Lols. . . Come f.b now!!!

I go whoop you there. Lets battle here. I just want to give u the chance of winning

Hmmm. . .

my guys please I need your help am a rapper that loves to use rhyme alot because of my mastery of words this embarrasse me when am freestyling because I run out of rhymes am often mocked and dissed how can I freestyle better please

Phero:
my guys please I need your help am a rapper that loves to use rhyme alot because of my mastery of words this embarrasse me when am freestyling because I run out of rhymes am often mocked and dissed how can I freestyle better please

Freestyle is not for everyone, write your stuff down

SmokingGunZ:


Lol man. Where didju dig up that my verse? I forgot i dropped that shit .

I still chew bullets.

Call me out if you feel you can trash me.

how you wanna die? by hanging or by hanging?..pick an option

Phero:
my guys please I need your help am a rapper that loves to use rhyme alot because of my mastery of words this embarrasse me when am freestyling because I run out of rhymes am often mocked and dissed how can I freestyle better please

you have to practice daily or three times in week if you want...so long as you consistent with practicing..there's no magic behind it

Darkenedrebel i call u out.

darkenedrebel:


how you wanna die? by hanging or by hanging?..pick an option

i'm picking both. 8 bars.

Raplinx:
Darkenedrebel i call u out.

when? and how do you wanna die? by electrocution or by electrocution? - pick an option

Raplinx:

i'm picking both. 8 bars.

we drop tomorrow... I got some residual bars....8 bars- Sunday 1pm

darkenedrebel:


when? and how do you wanna die? by electrocution or by electrocution? - pick an option

electrocushion! 8 bars. We drop on monday.

Raplinx:

electrocushion! 8 bars. We drop on monday.

nahhh ..not happening.. we drop on sunday..weekdays is work.

darkenedrebel:


nahhh ..not happening.. we drop on sunday..weekdays is work.

i got a facebook battle 2mao so i gotta script 4 it 2mao. We drop on monday 8pm if u want in. U can save ur sunday-scripted lines then drop it on monday.

darkenedrebel:

how you wanna die? by hanging or by hanging?..pick an option

I'll go back to school soon, son. If a thread can b created, lets do 24 lines Vocabs can be a criteria if you want, so you'll have a chance of winning.
I still chew bullets

SmokingGunZ:

I'll go back to school soon, son. If a thread can b created, lets do 24 lines
Vocabs can be a criteria if you want, so you'll have a chance of winning.

I still chew bullets

are you a tool by default? vocab is a criterion in rap battling? were you dropped on the head as a kid? quit these shenanigans...


low-tiers like you don't do 24 lines, neither am I willing to waste that amount of bars on you
since raplinx isn't ready then let's drop tomorrow- 12pm{10 bars}

darkenedrebel:


are you a tool by default? vocab is a criterion in rap battling? were you dropped on the head as a kid? quit these shenanigans...


low-tiers like you don't do 24 lines, neither am I ready to waste so much bars on you
since raplinx isn't ready then let's drop tomorrow- 12pm{10 bars}

Lets make the battle a classic, shall we?

Low tier you call me?

20 lines min

SmokingGunZ:


Lets make the battle a classic, shall we?

that's not by business...come online to post your 10 bars[20 lines] by 12pm tomorrow...

darkenedrebel:


that's not by business...come online to post your 10 bars[20 lines] by 12pm tomorrow...

Lemme see the thread first

SmokingGunZ:


Lemme see the thread first

thread would be created tomorrow

Yo yo..
Quick free
Henze is never a loser/ my pen is tight, am a bruiser/



Don't know what else to rhyme again...

darkenedrebel:

thread would be created tomorrow

Anything you say.

Tut tut tut!! So the chat room is locked

What I pen ridicule emcees/
God of the first z0diac sign,'imagine-aries lines' have this nerds split in two axis!/
Rap?? These men ain't even good at it/
Kobo for y'all thought, I coin deadly phrase, the verses still schools texcees!/

Its pellucid, this godly phrase runs within/
Y'all urchins gapes for the scripts/
Chuka is proof, i 'storm' the stage y'all shrieking !/
You all gonn be in the soup if your plan is to 'curry favour with me' !/

Am 'never outta word' its why what I write is sick/
'Give insights' to this blind gimmicks!/
Am a problem I'll 'Rat on this vets' make 'em 'de-mise' in this!/
Dig?? And you all are 'thermophobic', reason i throw punch and you all get 'scared by the hit'!/

I cackles hearing you ranting you scare foes/
Nah, nah you flop in that bro/
I should be accoladed for the best flow!/
Shii is y'all glads 'stay-numb' like breast bones !/
Gitit? I said y'all 'sternum' like breast bones!/

The brute scripts unfolds!/
Apart doing it verbally, physically knives be pulling your toes!/
If a glad says he's cruel with tough prose/
I'll chase him fiercely, making him run '4 40's' like he was 'looking for loan' !/

SmokingGunZ:


I go whoop you there. Lets battle here. I just want to give u the chance of winning

Oya . . .ask for thread

[quote author=Jayscar post=39760690]Tick tock tick tock,,
.
.
.
Leggo ur time's up!
they call me insane I know,, but am neutral
Its cause of the way I "flow",, "Brah-ma-putra" Verses go the way I go,, and as usual,,
They built With enuf punches to "impale my foes",,like am Dracula!!
Strange!!
Am not that good with multies/
But am used to raw diss/
With few or more kills/
Like the hood on 4th street!/
I hate this boring dudes claiming they best
Shouting kids kids,,like teachers in nursery schools!!
Seriously?
Claiming senior for text,,
now that's a fool at forty!!
U can say am cruel but Bleep it!
l" ama sheer immortal,,
Tha brings fear in mortals/
Even in the witches in "french quarters"/
Call me a fair original!!
#writersblock
[ Let's brawl sir!]

Imagine the hypocrisy obsession fueling rap section/ No Pac expression...who translates MODs direction?/Unstructured brawls...parading criminal minded votes/Few notes stamped on election oaths/Bye-bye to religion principles ..verses they ridicule/Sunday bars for miracles...testimonies is miniscule/Sacrifice my time to revenge deaths of dead poets/My secrets complex...let's pause for lowest/Empty hearts screaming..Fela song upon sight/Beggars of height,swaying off intellect fight/Internet justice more like drunks making judges/Light the torch to touch sinners with grudges/They became slaves to rhymes...words turning graves/Man still in caves with false concept...fading waves of braves/Are shadows in heaven before I say a prayer/Who's next in line to talk about earth's layer/

Damn. . .