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festwiz:
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thanks #done

very nice
the tone, the choice of words, all good
its depicts hope determination
you can only make it if you try

Queennelly:
very nice
the tone, the choice of words, all good
its depicts hope determination
you can only make it if you try

wow! Thanks a bunch

Wow! I love this poem, susrite keep it up.

tmx21:
Wow! I love this poem, susrite keep it up.

thanks man

From a distance I heard your plea for help
Wretchedness and tiredness written all over you
I set my eyes upon the heavens
And cried out.. ..... when will this end?

Beggars flood the street
Who's hands seems to be made only for alms
With weary eyes and shivering lips they beg
Oh. ...... who will save me? They asked .

I answered. .....
There is a tomorrow I see. A God I know
Whose compassion is ever TRUE when you set your heart on Him
When you walk with Him, there's a Glory for you.
Then you have a priceless Joy in your heart

And you tell yourself.........
I am Homeless not Hopeless
For tomorrow holds for me
Greater things I know

susrite:
[b]
As the day turns in
the firmament seizing the sun
the coolness of the moon coming
the earth quiet like a deserted lawn
.
the horizons flaunt their beauties
the stars, their streak
the nightingale called for duty
and silent hitting its peak
.
In the street corner
lies a child dazed from sleep
a poor soul feeling sober
a tender heart that often weep
.
trembling, feeling cold like a damp
with a sick body, frail and weak
under the moon's unbias lamp
a happy bed impossible to seek
.
for this little child
the street corner becomes home
to rest for the night
without a silk and soothing foam
.
In a little and short while
he will wake to scavenge
like a vulture walking a million mile
being hurt by the earth without revenge
.
from the gabbage can
full of litters and trash
yet he lives on the platform "I can"
I'll stay alive and someday earn cash
.
to all kid that live without shelter
that has no mild mother's hand to caress
the way you are today never matter
you are only homeless, not hopeless!
[/b]

Oh men this is awesome and do..pe. I admire your diction and fine imagery. But your last stanza really ain't necessary. It makes the whole poem sound like a cheap lyrics. Try and refine it or probably remove it as part of the poem it can just be an epilogue or something to tell us that it's not a stanza on it's own. Once again, nice poem. Keep it up bro.

wow.so great. the nicest poem I have read in recent times.

Needed these so bad on a Sunday morning ... Thanks op

Nice one susrite... very inspiring. I have a short poem too, I'm not a poet though









Row Row Row your boat
gentle down the stream
merrily merrily merrily
life is but a DREAM.

still reading

Nice one Susrite

Good One.

Nice peom

Beautiful piece of work. POETRY touches the heart in a dynamic way. Shout out to fellow poets out there

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