It is A story About a girl that lives with is aunty and brother in Mexico, her name is ana Paula. She is very beautiful And well got a tempare she is very caring and king. Her parents is dead living her and younger brother in the care of greedy Anuty.

[b][/b]In hAcinda---- roghlio is a very bitter man having being paralysed and his fiance broke up with him immediately she found out about it and he has a sister her name is cynthia and she is having an affair with the fore man of the ranch. And bruno roghlio's lawyer who pretends to.be a friend of roghlio. With Maria who is a nanny

Ur story look so disorganized,have you started or is this preamble

This looks so disorganised, and why are you quoting a movie instead of telling your own story!

Pls all ur discouragement and critics is allow aNd for writing a movie.........Am writing it be cos not everybody has the opportunity To watch such A wonderful movie and thanks once again

Havent watched the movie sha..... Op pls just arrange ur work inugo

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Plot
Ana Paula lives in Chiapas where she is studying nursing; her
devotion for sick people came up while she took care of her
ill mother throughout her long agony. When she was about
to graduate, she met Bruno, Rogelio Montero’s lawyer.
Bruno offered her a job nursing his boss who became
paralytic and got stuck in a wheel chair after having an
accident. The pay is good so she takes the job in order to
financially support her aunt Rosaura, who has been like a
mother to her and her brother Miguel ever since they were
kids.
Ana Paula arrives in the “Hacienda Del Fuerte” to look after
Rogelio and she is surprised to learn that he is a bitter,
resentful man mostly because Vanessa, his shallow fiancée,
left him after the accident.
In the hacienda also lives Cynthia, Rogelio’s sister, who is in
fact kept there by her brother since he forced her to stay
and take care of him in exchange for keeping the lifestyle
she is used to have. To avoid boredom, she began an affair
with Efraín, the Hacienda’s foreman; he actually falls in love
with her, but she is only using him for fun. With them also
lives their nanny, María, who has always acted as a loving
mother to Rogelio and Cynthia, and who is not able to ever
leave them.
Rogelio’s arrogance and bad mood make it very difficult for
Ana Paula to work with him, so one day she decides to quit.
She has an accident in the river and she is rescued by
Gustavo Durán, a handsome and good hearted engineer.
They fall in love but their plans are frustrated when Gustavo
has an accident with his father and Ana Paula believes he is
dead.
Rogelio has also fallen in love with Ana Paula, so he sends
Bruno to look for her and ask her to come back to the
hacienda. At first she refuses, but afterwards, when Miguel
causes an accident that could send him to jail for life,
Rogelio offers to help him if Ana Paula agrees to marry him.
She accepts the sacrifice just to help her brother, and so
she marries Rogelio. Gustavo comes back looking for Ana
Paula but Rosaura, considering the marriage of her niece
with Rogelio as the solution to all her financial problems,
decides to lie to Gustavo, telling him that Ana Paula is not
interested in him anymore. Gustavo feels disappointed and
decides to forget her.
After returning to the Hacienda, the life of Ana Paula as
Rogelio’s wife is a living hell, one she had never imagined.
She will have to deal with Cynthia’s humiliations and envy;
she will also have to manage her brother’s problems, as
well as Bruno and Rosaura’s greed. And on top of that, she
will meet again with Gustavo, the love of her life, knowing
that perhaps, he may never be for her...

Now this is a wonderful improvement

It all began in the leaf village. Ana paulA had come back from
looking for a job, when she saw the apartment owner
inside. What are you doing here? she asked. Do you
have my money he replied. No, but we will pay you,
she said. I've been waiting a long time, if I can't get
my money i got another solution. He grabbed ana paula and
tried kissing her. Get away from me! she said. She
tried running but he blocked the door. She screamed
for help. The owner said no ones going to hear you.
She grabbed a flower vase and smashed it. You better
get away from me before I cut you, ana paula said. The
owner laughed. Ana paula went for the door but the owner
grabbed her again. She cut his hand. Look what you
did to my hand, he said.
Ana paulA ran outside and she saw her aunt. She ran towards
her. Her aunt said what happened? The owner tried
abuse me because we didn't pay the rent. Her aunt
didn't believe her. She said lets go talk to him. No! I'm
not going back in there with him, ana paula said. She pulled
Ana paulA inside. ANa paula cut him for no reason, he said. Lair! You
tried to abuse me, ana paula replied.
Ana paulas brother miguel came in.
What happened? Miguel asked. This man tried to abuse
me, ana paula replied. Miguel was about to punch him but
there aunt stopped him. The owner said I want you all
out of here right now unless you pay the rent!
Later that day miguel was walking when his friend said
what's wrong? I need money for the rent, miguel
replied. I'll help you out if you do me a favor. What
kind of favor? Miguel asked. You have to be in the look
out. For what? he asked. You need money right. Yes,
Miguel replied. I have a solution for your problem but
you have to do it, he said. What is it that I have to do?
Miguel replied. I'm going to rob a market and you'll
have money to pay for the rent. No! Miguel said. It's the
only way to let your family have a roof over there
head. Miguel agreed. He put the mask on. Miguel entered
first and was looking around. His friend pulled the gun
out when the store owner pushed the 911 button and
the bell rang and he ran. Miguel stayed behind.
The cops came and the store owner said that miguel
was helping him but keeping a watch. Miguel stayed
quiet. They took him to jail.
The police called home and Ana paula answered the phone.
The police officer said that miguel was in the police
station. Why! Ana paula asked. You have to come, the officer
said. Ana paula's aunt said what happened? A is in jail.
They rushed to the police station. Ana paulA said I'm looking
for my brother, his name is miguel. He's here. Why did
they arrest him? Ana paula asked. It says here he tried
robbing a store. What?
Miguel came out and the store owner said your a theif.
I'm sorry, I won't do it again, miguel said.
A lawyer was watching. Ana paula was walking around when
he came up to her and he said I'll help you. Ana paula was
shocked. But we don't have any money, ana pAula said. Her
aunt came and said what's going on? He wants to
help us with miguel's case, Ana paula replied it. Her aunt was
happy. But I already told him that we don't have any
money. Unless your one of those lawyers that don't
charge, her aunt said. Yes, he said.
Her aunt pushed ana paula towards him. He said what's your
name? Ana paula, what about yours? My name is bruno.
Bruno got the papers ready. That same day miguel got
out. They said thanks to bruno. Bruno said but you
still have to come back so you could talk to the
police.
Bruno took them back to there apartment. He was
about to leave when he heard Ana paula say that she needed
to find a job. You could work for me, bruno said. No.
but thanks, Ana paula said. Come on, at least hear me out,
Bruno replied. Okay, she said. It's not for me it's for a
friend of mine, you could be his nurse, his name is
rogelio montero. That's great, your a good nurse, her
aunt said. Where is it? Ana paula asked. It's at the
hacinde del furte, bruno replied. That far, ana paula said. But it's the
only job, the aunt said. So do you want to, bruno
said. Okay, she said. But we have to leave today,
Bruno said. That's too far, miguel said. Don't worry, I'll
be fine, she replied. Ana. Paula started packing.
It took 3 days but they finally arrived at the ranch. Ana pAula
was looking around.
Get in the horse! Rogelio demanded. No! Magarito
said. Raiden was about to whip him when ana pAulA said
leave him alone! Who are you! Reglio asked. Rin, what
about you. Rogelio montero, I'm the owner of this
ranch.