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Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by PRINCEHPXP(m): 8:28pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
book space |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by karferguso(m): 9:02pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
Following |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by Elparaiso(m): 9:03pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
Thank God for this piece.... Love it.... |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by Nobody: 9:10pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
I hope sey no be una be ingredient for ritual? Please come and continue what you started |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by alberto2k(m): 9:12pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
Skimpledawg, suxxman... My realest niggas, oya appear like willy willy |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by pcaliphate(m): 9:12pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
Okay oo! I don show. @op! *grabs a bottle of fayrouz and wait for op next update* |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by ashly3633: 9:13pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
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Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by ProfGday(m): 9:37pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
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Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by Nobody: 9:37pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
Nice piece. More! |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by coolcacuz: 9:55pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
At the begining. I was like wich kin story b dis wan but now my rum maits think am goin crazy coz LWKMD . Not ery day one comes accross a beautiful piece like dis. So I say more breeze m sory more greese (abi na breese? Just choose any one)to elbow. 1 Like |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by EbuGeneral(m): 9:58pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
this story no carry bleep? 2 Likes |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by sandradayz(f): 10:02pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
Wow! Been fun continue pls... |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by Funniez: 10:10pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
What an interesting & comical piece. Abeg try update sharpaly o |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by Nobody: 10:24pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
alberto2k:Present Sir. 1 Like |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by moseph(f): 10:33pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
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Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by Nobody: 10:37pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
kinwayne:I like ur piece, infact I was forced to track ur updates up till this last episode. Kudos! MY TAKE: While each episode is very encompassing and funny, the characters are becoming disjointed. As in, you are not looping them together. You could be another JK Rowlings but still have more work to do on building up 40% of ur characters more strongly, if you'll be killing some off, let the readers reason wt why and when. EG, -how about 'Stephanie' in ep 2, she shld still be in d show or make us know what happened to her. -how did d food seller get 2 know that ur display was orchestrated 4 her to bring police in that short a time (reader were doing d guess, like maybe she 'studied u guys unawares' u when she went 4 d drinking water) then u could hint that when she came wt d police officers. -where those gangsters came from was unknown, and how could they pursue a random person like they have scores to settle. Next time u cld make ur readers understand that d main xter was a mischievous socialite wanted by all. -Each episode grows much faster into the future, eg, the two friends did not ponder into their ordeals that morning (almost getting jailed/killed) b4 venturing into a new venture. And everytn happened so fast without reference to earlier occurences. -Last shot: if u'll want to write a beautiful piece like this I'll suggest u write it out in full and not this microtintin social style. U'll becoming a writer, so make us feel you'll giving us a novel and not just a fast one on NL. U'll get used to it and be a better writer. PLS: Just my observation. I ain't a professional writer self. 23 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by Princesschi(f): 10:37pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
Lemme register ma presence NB: this space is not for sale... Ride on kinwayne |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by alphaomega(m): 10:38pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
Joyous888: lol...guy, u sure say no b Emma piss (Remy Martins) u wan drink so? Check well oh..mk e no b lyk say u follow Val dey dream.... Modifed: buh come oh...u b male or female? |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by tecno4life(m): 10:38pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
kinwayne:Hmm |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by Nobody: 10:52pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
kinwayne: I guess this update was inspired from 1 Ghana movie like that. Anyways bro. Keep it up. More draw draw to your elbow. |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by ritababe(f): 10:54pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
Ok |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by Gabriel6(m): 10:56pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
I don take my sit |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by s3nn2x(m): 10:57pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
Nice one!!! |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by Skimpledawg(m): 11:05pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
alberto2k:Shaun Sir!!! Permission to carry On!!! 1 Like |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by Nobody: 11:08pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
Skimpledawg:Nightwalker. #Asewo |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by Mate77(m): 11:13pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
Am in but not later, nice write up |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by ketiy77: 11:16pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by stuff46(m): 11:23pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
Skimpledawg: carry wetin wen i de here?? oga kingwanye my observations so far are just few. read through yur last 2update. suring the baba scene, thiers is a little error. (its not too big ) thanks |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by Deapexboy(m): 11:34pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
Any space for sale |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by sunsky29(m): 11:47pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
Wey dt boy?comon coman phinish dis tin bfor I will vex |
Re: Campus Life. The Girls. The Ghetto. The Garri. The Glory. by kinwayne(m): 11:51pm On Jan 06, 2015 |
Jesus!!!!!!! What am I seeing?? Frontpage? I owe you guys an avanlache of updates...... Thank you very much guys 1 Like 2 Shares |
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