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Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by KimBerlyie: 6:47am On Jun 02, 2016 |
OK what just happened If u had told me Maxwell will die, I wouldn't av read this chapter. I can't stop crying |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by Encorecasmie(m): 7:11am On Jun 02, 2016 |
@chistar01, abeg person don ever tell you how good you be? Bruh you're an awesome writer! Really enjoyed reading this story.. Abeg when you the start your next story? When you start, mention me ghon.. |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by chistar01(m): 7:22am On Jun 02, 2016 |
@Bobbybube I was hoping no one would notice it. The pressure to end the story was getting too much as it was dividing my fan base so I had to rush the end a bit even though I initially planned on elaborating more on how deeply in love Maxwell and Funmi were in love but decided to just cut it short using just a few chapters to do that to the best of my ability. Anyway thanks for your input and I would try to make sure the edited book would surely hint more on their feelings for each other. As for the critics, I'm not one to complain over criticism because ask for it always as it makes me better, however, I always remind myself its the internet and people with different opinions are all over here so I read all the criticisms and pick the constructive ones while I ignore the others. Granted, this piece took a long time to complete but the way some of you guys put it was quite offensive like I'm being paid here or I owe anyone here so thank you mzchistar for standing up for me once again. Nevertheless, do keep the criticisms coming but try to be constructive. The secondary moral of this story is simple, no matter how we try, like really try, some stories don't just have a happy end, that's just life. I'll let you decide what the primary moral is. My vote of thanks would come after chapter 40. 5 Likes |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by Dandeson1(m): 7:55am On Jun 02, 2016 |
Weldone bro @chista (tumbs up), i must admit i never predicted it to end like this, i predicted henry dyin or gettn caught, and max prolly getting injured or something then a happy ending, and you just wowed me, anywaiz sorry if the way i spoke was offensive, I dint even see it as criticism i just spoke on wat i felt (i hate suspense ). Jah bless |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by Nobody: 10:20am On Jun 02, 2016 |
this is the best story i've ever read so far on nairaland. big ups chistar01 abeg i want that b*tch called mary-anne gone..i dey vex gan 1 Like |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by ericanex(f): 10:41am On Jun 02, 2016 |
definitely you schooled in uniport |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by chistar01(m): 10:58am On Jun 02, 2016 |
ericanex: |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by chistar01(m): 11:02am On Jun 02, 2016 |
Dandeson1:lol... we cool. Suspense is what keeps you coming back for more, glad I wowed you |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by Ay04z(m): 11:25am On Jun 02, 2016 |
wat a sad ending........cry......maxwell did not deserve to die... |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by mahxiimus(m): 12:27pm On Jun 02, 2016 |
Another story na. |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by bummybummy(f): 12:38pm On Jun 02, 2016 |
from d beginning of dis story am ghost reader but @ dis place of junction i must voice out oooo, u didnt do well @ all. Y maxwell as 2 die nw? Y nt d prsn dat spill d beans out |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by Jannie1999(f): 1:00pm On Jun 02, 2016 |
I HATE MARYANNE 3 Likes |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by izzou(m): 1:02pm On Jun 02, 2016 |
Chistar,raise up your hand Knock yourself Raise it up again Knock yourself Why maxwell go die naa Chaiiii..... Make sure Mary Anne mouth is chopped off too Thumbs up bro For the first time i have follwed a story to the end |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by Cdstars(m): 1:16pm On Jun 02, 2016 |
IMO, it was a good ending. If Henry had died, it could have been less emotional. Maxwell death made it more emotional. |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by ericanex(f): 1:22pm On Jun 02, 2016 |
bummybummy:Realities of life, doesn't go the way we want it |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by Eniqurl(f): 1:39pm On Jun 02, 2016 |
It's unfair tho |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by HDoc(m): 3:50pm On Jun 02, 2016 |
For me I feel the end was too sudden. |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by dannybomb(m): 5:19pm On Jun 02, 2016 |
OK we didn't expect it to end this way. but I must say dude, u nailed it. kudos |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by Bobbybube(m): 6:49pm On Jun 02, 2016 |
chistar01: Your story certainly tops my list of nl literature, and now you explained the pressure on you, i'm more understanding . Readers should know your an amateur writer not been paid and have personal responsibilities. I stand for more encouragement and constructive criticism. As for the ending I agree with it 100%. No great work ends " happily ever after " apart from flimsy romance novels. Ask okonkwo in things fall apart. Anyhow, i'm following bumper to bumper. lets see what other masterpiece awaits us. |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by Galacious1: 7:02pm On Jun 02, 2016 |
chistar01:I noticed that too. Pls don't let pressure get to u next time. I understand d feelin. My overall rating of this story 98/100. |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by Rapfrick(m): 8:42pm On Jun 02, 2016 |
fam24:babe u dey dere |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by estiedoll(f): 8:49pm On Jun 02, 2016 |
Why nah?... It's so painful. It shouldn't have been Maxwell. Mary-anne was just too forward. Nice work Chistar, u're a good writer. |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by elvido(m): 9:08pm On Jun 02, 2016 |
Lessons Maxwel's death was as a result of keeping bad company, having a cultist as a friend is dangerous..preventn is so better than cure..chistar love ur work nd i wish u didnt end d story so sudden because of these criticts, as if to write a story is child'splay.. 1 Like 3 Shares |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by holar2ge(m): 1:46am On Jun 03, 2016 |
Bro, nice story.. it really touched my heart, death can come at any time. We just have to live a meaningful life at least Henry won't forget Maxwell for being a good friend....Nyc piece bro....#RESPECT 1 Like |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by Sexina851(f): 3:21am On Jun 03, 2016 |
segsbenks: mtcheeew if u know how long av been on nl u won't kip beating around d bush with dis ur "novice" of a word ..anyway seems am more matured so I will play d elderly nd let d sleeping dog lie pls try not to wake it... winks**** |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by chistar01(m): 6:51am On Jun 03, 2016 |
Morning guys, as you wait for the epilogue of this story, I'll like you check out this story I stumbled on last night after I got a mention from the writer. I read the story so far and I felt it was a great story in the making. Anyway, don't take my word for it, the title is Memoirs of a Hustler and this the link https://www.nairaland.com/3142969/memoirs-hustler If you like what you see, do drop a comment to encourage the writer. This is not a paid advert :/ PEACe. |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by hfinest1(m): 8:08am On Jun 03, 2016 |
Finally, we've come to the end of this lovely series.... it's such a pity maxwell had to die *sobs* in such a painful way for that matter *sobs* no, I'm not crying, something entered my eyes.... great story by the way... kudos to chistar01... jah keep u and take u higher... come and kneel down let me pray for you... *speaking in tongues* because of how much you've entertained us for free with this your story **speak in tongues and shakes vigorously as holy spirit descends upon me** Stephen Osaji, I decree today that anything u lay ur hands upon shall prosper, this act that you've done, entertaining us with your story free of charge, by this act, I decree that this your talent shall expose you to the world... great men will read your books and invite you over... TV stations like CNN, BBC, Al Jazera, and a host of of international TV stations sill interview you... your name will spread around the world like the wind *speaking in tongues and shakes as holy spirit leaves* can somebody shout hallelujah?? |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by Ay04z(m): 8:41am On Jun 03, 2016 |
hfinest1:halleluyahh.. |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by stuff46(m): 11:28am On Jun 03, 2016 |
Unique setting bro Chistar. More still ti come from this, Fummi and Henry need to settle for Max loss. |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by Sexina851(f): 12:07pm On Jun 03, 2016 |
Godsgal: you nailed it |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by Zeedarh(f): 5:30pm On Jun 03, 2016 |
OMG!!! This is tooooooo good. The plot, theme and charcters were frigging great. As touching as it is, Maxwell had to die. He had to. Christar, thanks a bunch for this 'over wonderful' piece. |
Re: Why I Want To Be Bad - A Story by emekajerry: 7:25pm On Jun 03, 2016 |
chistar I swore u are d best dis is about the best story I Eva read....posterity will remember u for dis.my high point of d moment was d appearance of skinny I couldn't help but shout in excitement n as for Mary Anne am coming for u,u have just made d worst mistake of ur generation cos am taking did party to ur family DAT henry slap small sef...oh my Max u r indeed a friend..sobs |
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