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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 9:51pm On Mar 08, 2015
EverestdeBliu:
Ms. Tex,would you mind if I suggest a name for your piece?
Suggest away. smiley
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by firestar(f): 9:52pm On Mar 08, 2015
UjSizzle:
Texanomaly/Firestar, can I write a haiku? cheesy tongue

Shoot grrrl.

(Let's have it!)

Make it intense.
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by UjSizzle(f): 9:52pm On Mar 08, 2015
EverestdeBliu:
THE CAMPAIGN:
Like colony of ants,travelling on queue,
So was cars piled up,in lanes like stationed pews,
No niddle eye,for bikes to slant or swerve,
Chants and maunder rented the air in many vents,
Now,paramount it is to visit my town.
Galloping through tarred and dusty path,
Flew on air,but still touched down on my rural suburb,
Knelt before the clergy,
And bow to the monarch,
Sweeping with their brooms,
Shielding with the umbrella,
Grid-lock on the street,
As traffic is at a pause,
Pregnant women,
Men with ill omen,
Hungry abdomen,
All stuck in the snarl-up,
For men of potty tummy,
Oratory,pompous an' clumsy,
Thoughtfully cunning,
With lies so funny,
Are here to feed us,
No not with food,
But brooms,
Waving to the sky,taunting us with our filths and dirts,
With umbrella,
No not to shield,but to remind us of the impending rain.

-Everest'
iLike smiley
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 9:53pm On Mar 08, 2015
UjSizzle:
Texanomaly/Firestar, can I write a haiku? cheesy tongue

Write whatever comes to you. We can't wait to read it. smiley
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 9:54pm On Mar 08, 2015
Qaisar1 where is yours?
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by harlos: 9:58pm On Mar 08, 2015
Hai magrin

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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Qaisar1: 10:00pm On Mar 08, 2015
texanomaly:
Qaisar1 where is yours?
Qaisar1:
Somewhere in here
War song now a National Anthem
Men Match - kalashnikov handled by children
Cold heart, no fear, death died in his system
Somewhere in here
wondering, should i question this God
was i attached to the wrong umbilical cord?
"Free Will" I should have chosen when to come

*scratches head* I'm trying something else
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by harlos: 10:02pm On Mar 08, 2015
Signing up as a student grin
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 10:04pm On Mar 08, 2015
harlos:
Signing up as a student grin

Bring us a poem and we'll let you in. tongue cheesy

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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by firestar(f): 10:04pm On Mar 08, 2015
(Muse just struck)

Where the sun's higher
Where words are fire
Where Kuli kuli mess...
...and Akpu flies fence
Where male flowers blooms
Where darkness lands at noon
Wia Bross fall mah hand...
...and bigga Bross land am slap
Where shouts of AREA yapa
Wia dem dey sef?

Nigeria!

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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Nobody: 10:06pm On Mar 08, 2015
*lays mat and sits*

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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by harlos: 10:08pm On Mar 08, 2015
texanomaly:


Bring us a poem and we'll let you in. tongue cheesy
now? undecided


firestar.... Lwkmd o cheesy

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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 10:08pm On Mar 08, 2015
Qaisar1:


*scratches head* I'm trying something else

Sorry I missed this. Nice

More more please. smiley
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by firestar(f): 10:13pm On Mar 08, 2015
Oya o...
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by EverestdeBliu(m): 10:25pm On Mar 08, 2015
@Texanomaly
"Children grow thin,
As coffers swell
And pockets grow heavy.
Coaxing Charlatan’s begin
And mothers say Amen"
*
...I've been ransacking my mind for the past 30+mins,seeking for an amiable title for such imagery-packed-piece,but haven't got none yet...I can see why its still untitled. Ms,u killed it...thumbs up;the 2nd stanza got me thinking,I've read it more than 5time,and it still sound fresh.

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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by texanomaly(f): 10:30pm On Mar 08, 2015
EverestdeBliu:
@Texanomaly
"Children grow thin,
As coffers swell
And pockets grow heavy.
Coaxing Charlatan’s begin
And mothers say Amen"
*
...I've been ransacking my mind for the past 30+mins,seeking for an amiable title for such imagery-packed-piece,but haven't got none yet...I can see why its still untitled. Ms,u killed it...thumbs up;the 2nd stanza got me thinking,I've read it more than 5time,and it still sound fresh.

Thank you Everest.
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by LarrySun(m): 10:51pm On Mar 08, 2015
texanomaly:
DeepSight, UyiIredia, 1miccza, Cuddlemii, Nuges11, musKeeto, UjSizzle, Tovot, LarrySun, Mynd44, harlos, laykorn, Jbluv55,
I'm here. cheesy

This is what I've been waiting for! A poetry class! Yatta!

Now, who are my teachers? Or, what is expected of the pupil?
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by firestar(f): 10:52pm On Mar 08, 2015
LarrySun:
I'm here. cheesy

This is what I've been waiting for! A poetry class! Yatta!

Now, who are my teachers? Or, what is expected of the pupil?

Teachers ?
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by harlos: 11:35pm On Mar 08, 2015
Looking so dull and shabby
like a picture that needs repainting,
I sat still with a straight face
looking at the wall with full gaze
like answers are going to pop out.
Lazily i introduced a note and pen
like i'm going to write one to ten,
minutes ticked away still nothing came forth,
the next didn't pass before i gave up
as it is time to take a rest.

*sleeping*

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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 11:54pm On Mar 08, 2015
I'm a bad poet.... here is my free verse


UNPROTECTED JUNGLE

Where is the sun?
Those greedy trees
that can not shade all her animals
will not over power.
Bashful jungle craving control.

Those days are on their
way.
Her dwelling animals kidnapped by BH,
The Blood Hunter.

Lion, Tiger, Elephant, Wolf, fox and Python-
The leaders.

On rules positioned officials live,
Market convenience, earn bad revenue.
System make fool,
position is always abused.

If I had all that power,
No longer would the slithering Python and Lion
Invade the private domain
Devouring harmless
jungle dwellers.

The jungle needs clearing, its canopy made lush, to shelter from
heavy rain.
The storm clouds of dishonesty and insecurity collide.

Brooms promise to clear.
Umbrellas promise to cover.
The clearing is not with the brooms,
Nor the covering with the umbrellas.
They forsake the promise.

Propriety rules where are thee?
To be most concerned with having
the lead?

Hope of our future is lost-
since promising seeds
gain knowledge from a smoldering jungle.

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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by Nuges11(m): 7:47am On Mar 09, 2015
texanomaly:
DeepSight, UyiIredia, 1miccza, Cuddlemii, Nuges11, musKeeto, UjSizzle, Tovot, LarrySun, Mynd44, harlos, laykorn, Jbluv55,

Yaay! Thanks for the mention Tex, I really need this. So, what to do now??

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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by JigsawKillah(m): 10:29pm On Mar 10, 2015
I, on behalf of my partner Donifez apologize for our inability to bring you today's classes, please forgive us, we never saw it coming
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by EverestdeBliu(m): 8:29pm On Mar 11, 2015
JigsawKillah:
I, on behalf of my partner Donifez apologize for our inability to bring you today's classes, please forgive us, we never saw it coming
You're the VP,u know that...I don't accept your excuse
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by yuzjet(m): 8:55pm On Mar 11, 2015
EverestdeBliu:

You're the VP,u know that...I don't accept your excuse

Seconded.





Night Fell by Florence Ripley Mastin

Night fell one year ago, like this.
He had been writing steadily.
Among these dusky walls of books,
How bright he looked, intense as flame!

Suddenly he paused,
The firelight in his hair,
And said, “The time has come to go.”
I took his hand;

We watched the logs burn out;
The apple boughs fingered the window;
Down the cool, spring night
A slim, white moon leaned to the hill.

To-night the trees are budded white,
And the same pale moon slips through the dusk.
O little buds, tap-tapping on the pane,
O white moon,

I wonder if he sleeps in woods
Where there are leaves?
Or if he lies in some black trench,
His hands, his kind hands, kindling flame that kills?

Or if, or if …
He is here now, to bid me last good-night?[/b]

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Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by JigsawKillah(m): 9:42pm On Mar 11, 2015
EverestdeBliu:

You're the VP,u know that...I don't accept your excuse

I'll gladly accept your punishment
sir
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by JigsawKillah(m): 9:44pm On Mar 11, 2015
yuzjet:


Seconded.





Night Fell by Florence Ripley Mastin

Night fell one year ago, like this.
He had been writing steadily.
Among these dusky walls of books,
How bright he looked, intense as flame!

Suddenly he paused,
The firelight in his hair,
And said, “The time has come to go.”
I took his hand;

We watched the logs burn out;
The apple boughs fingered the window;
Down the cool, spring night
A slim, white moon leaned to the hill.

To-night the trees are budded white,
And the same pale moon slips through the dusk.
O little buds, tap-tapping on the pane,
O white moon,

I wonder if he sleeps in woods
Where there are leaves?
Or if he lies in some black trench,
His hands, his kind hands, kindling flame that kills?

Or if, or if …
He is here now, to bid me last good-night?[/b]

Swag
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by yuzjet(m): 9:59pm On Mar 11, 2015
JigsawKillah:


Swag

Only that?
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by JigsawKillah(m): 11:55pm On Mar 11, 2015
yuzjet:


Only that?

u of all people should no I just had to say something hence the comment
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by yuzjet(m): 8:32am On Mar 12, 2015
JigsawKillah:


u of all people should no I just had to say something hence the comment

Lol!
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by EverestdeBliu(m): 7:24pm On Mar 12, 2015
yuzjet:


Only that?
LoL,u of all beings should av known that Jigs was conscripted from the rapWorld.
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by yuzjet(m): 8:36pm On Mar 12, 2015
EverestdeBliu:

LoL,u of all beings should av known that Jigs was conscripted from the rapWorld.


I hear haba! cry
Re: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by EverestdeBliu(m): 9:00pm On Mar 12, 2015
Nine on the dot...
Me don show class o...are my the only one here?

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