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Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by EverestdeBliu(m): 8:05am On Dec 29, 2014 |
youngcrysta:Nice work dear,I call this 'a poetic prose' or ' a narrative poem' Was it intended or you just saw yourself here? |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 8:35am On Dec 29, 2014 |
texanomaly: Goodmorning... Okay lemme explain Eve noticed that she wasnt the only one present in the scene her family all lying down flat was also present. According to the bible a thief is known to kill, steal and destroy, any normal human would pray/wish for him to steal and not to kill or destroy anything. Before he could make his decision he was shot dead by the recuse team. Pls point out errors, hope you understand?:-x |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 8:42am On Dec 29, 2014 |
EverestdeBliu: I guess it was |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by EverestdeBliu(m): 8:50am On Dec 29, 2014 |
youngcrysta:U guess?,that means u ain't sure...next time u want to write,figure out what u want before starting... Your work is good; over 10,I give u 6. |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by EverestdeBliu(m): 8:53am On Dec 29, 2014 |
youngcrysta:Aww! '...shot by the rescue team'. #Twisted fate 1 Like |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 9:32am On Dec 29, 2014 |
EverestdeBliu: thank you sir |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by Nobody: 12:35pm On Dec 29, 2014 |
youngcrysta: I think it's a nice poem, about adam and eve and the temptation which led to the fall of mankind.....nice,but you should keep writing so you can improve and do even better than this. |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 7:47pm On Dec 29, 2014 |
Krystalxxx:alright... thankz |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by Nobody: 9:25pm On Dec 29, 2014 |
I like the imagination you brought into it...didn't get it at first,but she was on the street,ow did her family end up there with her at that time of night? I got a wild imagination of that too...all in all,it was a very nice poem...keep it up 1 Like |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by Nobody: 9:28pm On Dec 29, 2014 |
Ghostlady:. Yes I like the imagination. Ayamlaykorn |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by Nobody: 9:39pm On Dec 29, 2014 |
laykorn:mr laykorn,you have being ignoring me all this while y |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 1:15am On Dec 30, 2014 |
Ghostlady: I forgot the word 'alley' when writing, just noticed it... thankz for the correction and comment |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 1:17am On Dec 30, 2014 |
laykorn: thankz... |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by Nobody: 1:29am On Dec 30, 2014 |
youngcrysta:You neffa sleep ? Ayamlaykorn |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by Nobody: 8:31am On Dec 30, 2014 |
youngcrysta:you welcome dear...good morning 1 Like |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 6:10pm On Dec 30, 2014 |
laykorn:vigil |
Re: Words and Imagination of the mind by youngcrysta(f): 8:52pm On Jan 03, 2015 |
Symbol, synecdoche, stire, rhymes, anagram, character There she laid in tears I could sense her fears But what can I do? I bid her adieu. CC: Krystalxxx, OMA4U 1 Like |
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