Ok. This is my first attempt at writing anything that doesn't have to do with an exam. Constructive criticisms and ideas are very much needed.




"Daniel"! Her voice brought me out of my thoughts. I must have been far gone, lost in thoughts as I listened or pretended to listen to her speak. "Are you even listening to me sef"? She asked. I smiled and replied "yes" in a very shy voice. Even I could hear the shyness in my voice. She smiled and touched my arm and my heart skipped a beat. I wondered what was wrong with me, this isn't my first conversation with her. Why am I acting like a 12 yr old girl who got kissed for the first time?
She must have heard my thoughts as I could have sworn I saw her ebony cheeks turn red. She turned to go and I held her hands. I wanted to kiss her... I really did but I settled for a hug instead, a really long hug and then I let her... The girl I like... Go but just for now.
As she walked away, I couldn't stop gazing. Her rare beauty, her co ordinated and calculated steps carefully putting one foot in front of the other, the elegance in the way she swayed her hips from left to right, the celestial shimmer of her rich ebony skin and the rhythmic movement of her buttocks...lol. I could swear she wasn't made for this world. She is an angel... MY ANGEL!

[color=#770077][/color]First to comment ...........ride on bro

Gr8 attempt it was. . . Weldone bro. Keep writing.

Thanks a lot!