The truth of my afflictions penned exquisitely. Yet the journey tough as nails

GIYAZZ:


Sitted in lonesome, inside the inner capacious rooms of the Shambhala/
Merriments in my heart, as I reminisce the warming words of my father/
. . .Which gave me victory/ triumph over falsifiers. . . for how they became still remains a mystery/
Been to sorrows kitchen and lick the pot clean/ defeated and almost broken. . . had this thought. . . ringing in my head. . .like "You the most boring!"/
After your endless tantrums you ended up a blanked fool/
You wack! "go write poems nigga, you ain't made for rap battles"/
The feeling of not belonging/ got me resolving/
Lucid issues with self-discrimination/ hit up my hommie and was like "I'm cutting G off " cos i hardly be magged to this Rap battle nation/
Then his Words of advice calmed my nerves/ that feeling you have when you find your other half/
Started up my engine to continue the movement/ as the chance to prove my beast divulged itself to these mooped fangs/
The Pioneer pioneered my glory/ accompanied with a sparse of folly/
Stuff like Can G rap? I need HER lines/ my hommies repped. . . "if you ever seen G empty it must be African time!"/
Grabbed that chance, it's time to give in my all/ spillin lines raw/
pen spiked. . . Focused on killing that dawg!!/
Troubles waved/ my personality be-littled and swayed/
Still i stay firm my way/ let the ink from my pen decide my fate/
Before time the beginning was end/ what my determination ripped required a muffle around the din i extend/
Not really what i expect/ blinded with shades of respect/
Till the hulky chiefs poured me praise/ even Rebel's negativity never got me fazed/
My sobs erased/ cos i copped niche'/ (atlast!)
Euphoria evil glee sembler to mocking Hyenas/ dumbed moment i spilled 'em shinny bars/
Who laughs last laughs best. . . . words sunk in my conscious, the
colonnade to my shinning star!!!!

Darkrebel666:
Reminiscing the Past~..when I joined this blog/
Truly missing the Yaps~...including jeers and taunts....and the disjointed talks/
And also buzzes and curses/ caused by Arguments we had/
That pained our Navel Parts...and gave our Abdomens the cramps/
I was Persistently booed...and in fact ridiculed/ by Giyaz, Sosiqdude/
Cos I emerged a rookie....a new bloke in the Station/ undergoing maturation/
Was Unknown in this zone....had Zero Reputation/
A duel with Ely Surfaced...and I did smite his limbs/ had him severely butchered...with Sticks,knives and whips/
But lost cos I Stretched ………like Richard Reeds /
But my fire never quenched....I got restored at once/ Synonymous to Pyro...I reenforced the burns/ and preserved my flame ....like Johnny Storm /
And despite the hate...from whizzy and Krone/ I just stiffened my bones/ and Embarked on adventures... Like Indiana Jones/
Biyasi was next....and I was pinned, skinned and injured/
She got my Knee,heels disfigured/
She beat me black and white....like the Yin,Yang Symbol/
I felt Sickened and Feverish....My demeanour was "Sheepish" ....ted made me be a ram /
I was Owned by a Pussy...Call me "Mary's little Lamb" /
So Redemption was Vital....after being Lashed and Owned/ and after series of jests... I challenged Krone/
His bars were simplistic-...Basic Lame Scripture/
But the Twerp still triumphed..... Cos the aging frail peanut/ uploaded fake Pictures/
My State deteriorated....I was stunned and confused/
Situation Worsened....when I got murked with nukes/ dropped by wrongturn too/
My Enemies online...saw me as bitchy and shallow/
They wanted me mummified...like an Egyptian Pharaoh/
So they threw tantrums...with swords and arrows/.... Its no hidden secret...that I was mocked by fellows/
And that i endured more trials...than Brother Jero/
In all the tide and deride... I was still flashing a smile/
" I was killed in brawls"  ... "but kept returning" ... "Like an Ogbanje Child" /
I put the pen to paper...carved a brand new style/
And worked on setups...which was my well known weakness/
And discovered it helped...against Geo and Illness/
Like the "Lucozade Drink"...my lines got the 'boost'/ was redesigned and improved/
Lyricism wise...my rank did rise/ so i proceeded to whoop...Iyasara thrice/
Halted his blood circulation.... And contorted his legs/
Debarred blood in his veins....from touching his neck/
And even from touching his wrists...like short-sleeve shirts/
Now am all about tormenting...till the haters are departing/
I ll' first have them Fattened..... Then thoroughly Flattened..... Like An Asian Chapatti/
Gone are my Losing Days...though am still a Mystery/
And though I lack a decent history/ but its been overshadowed.. By my Recent Victories/
Rebel is box office/ a verbal contortionist/
Plus I was branded a viper/..for my venomous spittle...in the Nairaland Cypher/
This new status gained/ got those bad belle maimed...and put my haters to shame/
Now they Lazy around..estimating my worth/
Icekid and blood....2 gayish whores/
But I make them hold on....like dropping 1....in the game of whots/
Tell these dejected fellas/ to accept am betters/
Even FYH ....isn't serious or ripe/
While Lunatic is like keyboards ....still the Jealous Type /
But I got them all bent ...cos am Avatar with scripts/ had them massacred on streets/
Plus they used to be laughing....when I got blasted in bouts/
But their stock depreciated...they have been blighted and trounced/
now I laugh at their woes...they like Basket mouth/

Reyginus:
On a serious note their is no poetic touch in any of them. Metaphors, Imagery and Consistency should be the most significant here. This is not a poet tourney yet. You sound typical like Rappers still. I want to read a poet

I vote none.

kr0ne:

Lmao! I get ur point sha, but these guys are more hip hop inclined, that's why

Reyginus:
A little flexibility won't do bad. I am not a Rapper but I can rap if I am pushed or signed to it.

Darkrebel666:


I am a rapper not a Poet..
this is a Topical tourney not a Poetry contest
I told Krone not to use this name cos it would be confusing...

Eminem was storytelling in Mocking bed
did that sound like Poetry?

once again, this is not a poetry contest.. its a Topical RAP tourney

04kaa:


I fucckin love this Darkrebel no homo.... Darkrebel has that Classic O4ka I dont give an efff kinda attitude ! Absolute classic ! lol

Darkrebel666:


I am a rapper not a Poet..
this is a Topical tourney not a Poetry contest
I told Krone not to use this name cos it would be confusing...

Eminem was storytelling in Mocking bed
did that sound like Poetry?

once again, this is not a poetry contest.. its a Topical RAP tourney

Darkrebel666:


I am a rapper not a Poet..
this is a Topical tourney not a Poetry contest
I told Krone not to use this name cos it would be confusing...

Eminem was storytelling in Mocking bed
did that sound like Poetry?

once again, this is not a poetry contest.. its a Topical RAP tourney

laykorn:


PS: I think you should stop spreading your famous line about poetry and love letters. I wish I wouldn't be the one telling you this, but it always shows some element of ignorance.

Ayamlaykorn

Darkrebel666:


what are you saying? who is spreading anything?
go to Big time Facebook rap groups and see their topical tourneys ...
I know rap also has an element of Poetry.
.but this isn't a POETRY CONTEST.. this Is a TOPICAL BRAWL..where storytelling is the key...
go listen to immortal technique-dance with the devil and learn ....

Kr0ne caused this confusion by naming this stuff -King of Poets in the first place.. I warned him about it..
now they want me to be feminine

Reyginus:
Dude, just calm down and learn. There are Rap Poets in the Rap Game. I will advise you study to history of rap. Krone didn't create any confusion only that he didn't set the right standard. He created this to help Rappers become better.

Storytelling is not necessarily the key here. Or you can educate me. How does storytelling equate to Poet Tourney? And don't even try to bring my lecturer I.T here.

I would also like to know how Poetry makes one feminine. Go on.

Darkrebel666:

.This is a TOPICAL Tourney... who told you this is a Poet Tourney...?

mtshewwwwww

Reyginus:
What do you understand by King of Poet, to begin with?

Darkrebel666:


this conversation is officially over...

Reyginus:
Why act like you find solace in ignorance. Why do you want to hurt yourself?

Reyginus:
Nice one Laykorn.

he he ....lemme form a poetry ...


I bring hordes of doom/ to burn your parlour and spill your guts in your room/

he he poetry is girlish and for pusssies....

iyabodeh come give me a blowjobb

lol ..I dropped a poetry ....

you guys must be geeks ...who does poetry? if not geeks and nerds.... I prefer to listen to Fuji music or pasuma ...

every one can do poetry...its easy... plus I think its soft .its for girls .... .


modify ko ...Adverb ni

dude shut up there....i was invited here... who is seeking attention ? clown lmfao ....can't you take a joke ..? you are too serious all the time..just one joke I made and you are getting emotional .....

anyway ...continue what you are doing here..its good.. bye

laykorn:
Reygenius, you can notice that his problem is far deeper than the fact that he doesn't know what poetry really is. He is busy beefing an art he's doing himself; the height of ignorance

By the way. Anytime, anyday. Darkrebel666 is still my boss.
Ayamlaykorn

Darkrebel666:


Keep Quiet dude
.I have been writing poetry since my JSS3 days when we read Boy on the swing, Daffodils e.t.c.
can't you comprehend English?
I never said Poetry isn't part of rap..
Am trying to tell you that this isn't a Poet contest..this is a Topical Tourney... Krone confused all with the name he chose..
instead of you to listen and understand.. you are doing another thing..

Learn to be a good Listener