-Darus05: You be baba o.
-Shebarh: No be me allow Clara escape na. To speak the truth, the lady is smart. But lets just hope that everyday for the thief, one day for the owner.
-Bigwig97: Thanks
-Malonephill: I appreciate
-macpetrus, omotalkie, skimpledawg, stuff46, onemansquad, florjay, tecno4life, crystalsaint, LogoDWhiz and several others.
I appreciate all the comments.

Wait ooo, did Clara just escape Someone shud pour me water pls. D9ty7 why na

omotalkie:
Wait ooo, did Clara just escape Someone shud pour me water pls. D9ty7 why na

Mummy, abeg no faint o, we still need you here.
No be sey she escape, na dream. I just dey joke o.

D9ty7 you too much baba.

Wow!!

This is filled with suspence

But why did clara escape

Why why and why

I knew it. I knew that D9ty7 won't disappoint. He will always bring a twist.


But i expect an organisation as big as NATU to have a better defence.

The building should b on total lockdown. No one is allowed to move in or out.

And maybe she could have escaped through an underground passage.

Well, Clara is found out already. those security officers will mention her name.

Welldone dee. You rock

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author=omotalkie post=31997191]Wait ooo, did Clara just escape
Someone shud pour me water pls. D9ty7 why na [/quote]
hw can she escape na! Tina is d 1 dreaming!
Oga Logodwhiz, u make sense

Skimpledawg:

hw can she escape na! Tina is d 1 dreaming!
Oga Logodwhiz, u make sense

oga!! na u o

Moku o! D9ty7, did u just allow Clara to escape? Lobatan! #suspense filled, me likey...

prettydiva89:
This Clara is the real devil

What if Jimmy and adeola?

Dee baba how far now? Good job. Let's see how far Clara can go before getting caught. Meanwhile, don't let Tina and Mark die o. In another word, can anybody please introduce me to another action/crime story that i can read while Dee unfolds this. I have read THE COMPLETE ASSASSIN, ALL IN A CIRCLE. Thanks to

Olanireti:
Dee baba how far now? Good job. Let's see how far Clara can go before getting caught. Meanwhile, don't let Clara and Mark die o. In another word, can anybody please introduce me to another action/crime story that i can read while Dee unfolds this. I have read THE COMPLETE ASSASSIN, ALL IN A CIRCLE. Thanks

I d9ty7 recommends, AN EVENING WITH EVA(AEWE) by Kayemjay if he hasn't deleted it sha.

D9ty7:

I d9ty7 recommends, AN EVENING WITH EVA(AEWE) by Kayemjay if he hasn't deleted it sha.

i second u boss! dt wz d 1st story i read on nairaland! so captivating!

D9ty7, you're just doing justice to this story. Carry go....

@LogoDWhiz: I appreciate the points you raised, but looking at it from the perspective of a Nigerian man and a Nigerian writer, we have to make everything Nigerian. I mean, we all know how our security operatives are.
And another point worthy of notice is Mark who we all know is from America, do you expect him to have an easy ride? Like at first try, record success? No. If he understood the way things work, he must have problems with his colleagues.
I just want this story to be original, at least to an extent.

Skimpledawg:

i second u boss! dt wz d 1st story i read on nairaland! so captivating!

That was the first crime story I read on Nairaland.

There is every possibility that I add one more update before 11:59pm today.

Okk, thanks boss. Will check it out.

D9ty7:
There is every possibility that I add one more update before 11:59pm today.

we will definitely appreciate you

D9ty7:

That was the first crime story I read on Nairaland.

ahhrg! oga Kay wz bad bk den! Tu many offline duties takin hz time! Bt na u we kw nw o!

D9ty7:
There is every possibility that I add one more update before 11:59pm today.

*dancing etighi...* we dey ya bk dee man

D9ty7:
There is every possibility that I add one more update before 11:59pm today.

Oh! dat'll be well appreciated

--continuation--
Jimmy was seated in front of the CEO, God son group of companies, Chief Olukolade. The sixty year old business tycoon had an angry look on his face, and with the way he stared back and forth, one could deduce that he was looking from something to pounce on.
"Talk to me Jim." Chief Kolade said with a croaky voice.
Jimmy stared on, not knowing where to start, because he had made up right from the time he was summoned by the Chairman that he would lie his way out of the mess.
"Talk to me Jim. What's going on between my daughter and Daniel? I mean, did Adeola really had an abortion that damaged her womb?" The elderly man asked. "You are closer to the couple that we the parents. You've known yourselves for almost two decaded. What's the matter?"
"Seriously dad." He paused to see his voice left any trace of lies. Seeing that it was perfect, he continued. "I don't see any reason why you should believe these crap. You should know that in a successful company such as this with over fifty staffs all over the federation, there always will be rumour mongers. They fabricate lies and tell it to their friend on the second floor, then within an hour, everyone is aware of the rumour which would have been polished to look true." Jimmy explained.
"I don't believe this is a rumour. It looked so real.."
"With due respect sir, every human will at the first instance believe any rumour he/she hears somewhere. But on a second thought, you realise that they are nothing but lies." Jimmy cuts in.
"I had a second thought to speak the truth. You know, its my daughter we are talking about here, but when you look at it from the number of years that she has married Daniel, then you'll be tempted to believe." The elderly man said.
"I was angry the first time I heard it from my secretary this morning, because I felt like Daniel is hiding something from me, but on a second thought I knew they were just trying to break the couple apart. But I know the strong bond they share will make them remain together for long and at the right time, Adeola will have her own baby." Jimmy explained. "Think not over it dad, its nothing serious." He added.
Chief Olukolade smiled for the first time.
"You know, I was thinking maybe we could all take a trip to the golf club at the weekend. I come with my wife, Daniel with his and you with your date."
He knew he was coming to this. There was no way you would spend thirty minutes or more in the old man's office and he wouldn't compensate you for the time wasted, according to his words with a time out, either a dinner with wives or a time at the big men's club in Ikoyi or the golf club.
"I'll think about it sir."
"You have two days. Pick one from one of the numerous girls you carry around and meet use at the golf club. I need to take my pound of flesh, you defeated me the last time out."
With laughter, he walked out of the office and made for the elevator when he ran accross Daniel, who was just coming to work after spending five hours at a local bar drinking away his sorrows. He set sight on Christina the previous night and the highlight was seeing his son for the first time and being only a few yards away, he couldn't even look at him for five seconds, before the angry Tina drove away madly.
"Guy, you not try o." Jimmy said as he jokingly ran to catch up with his friend who was walking accross the large lobby which stood between the Chairman's office and the Managing Director's office.
"Everyone is talking about you. Your confidant, Magaret has spilled every secret of your marriage life to her friends and even Dad knows about it already." Jimmy said as he tried to keep up with his friend who still ignored him.
"Good morning hun." Magaret greeted with a seductive smile.
"Keep your runnig trap shut there or I shut it for you. B:itch!" Jimmy warned as he quickly opened the door into Daniel's office and the two friends entered.
"I saw Tina yesterday, my boy was with him." Daniel cried as hesat down.
Jimmy understanding the situation sat down calmy in front of him.
"Be a man. Don't let the boy disturb you. You have lived without him for thirteen years, seeing him at this stage is an added advantage, but I still stand on my point, make peace with Tina, that's the only way you can get to see your son regularly. If you use force, she'll take legal action and you'll loose, afterall, no one knows you are the father of the boy." Jimmy explained calmly.
"Nooooo." Daniel cried.
"Give it a second thought. Make peace with Tina and the boy will be under your roof without you requesting." Jimmy replied. "I'll be back during luch hour."

--to be continued--

Everything is falling back on Tina now. I hope she gets strong enough but if she fall my hand small ehn.......

D9ty7, you are too good. Just keep 'em coming.

Peace?.... Am going to seee how it unfold, Mr olukolade need to ask Daniel abt the rumour flying about...

D9TY7 i beg anytime you wan kill Clara make sure court sentence her to death by
1)make 50 guy go 2rounds her
2) make dem hang her and then make dem take firing squad finish her life..

whats d title again, antenna or what. Thumbs up d9ty7

any issue that has nothing to do with Tina, is a joke. .. Every road is leading to Tina


I hope you have your way through all this christy

Uthman51:
D9TY7 i beg anytime you wan kill Clara make sure court sentence her to death by
1)make 50 guy go 2rounds her
2) make dem hang her and then make dem take firing squad finish her life..

Oga, you bad ooo


On top watin gaan self?

Good job. Good morning everyone

Uthman51:
D9TY7 i beg anytime you wan kill Clara make sure court sentence her to death by
1)make 50 guy go 2rounds her
2) make dem hang her and then make dem take firing squad finish her life..

u na baddest bro! make dem gv am alomo b4 niqqas go rounds wd ha.
ntin lyk wakin up in d mornin to find appetizer by ya bedside! tnx dee. mor grace
we waitin 4 brkfast!

I'm out of comment but it would be rude to walk pass this masterpiece without glancing and spending a few extra minutes of my time commenting. Keep the work on D9ty7 u are the baddest but u fall ma hand ooh the way Clara escaped seems u rushed that part when writing the story as I didn't see a 'D9ty7' touch on it; It was too short and easy, it made N.A.T.U look stupid I taught u said lockdown and Mark ordered those security not to allow anyone in or out of the room, It should have taken a lot more persuasion from Clara to make them leave and the gate she followed should have been guarded maybe escape through a hidden exit or an underground or jump outta some kinda window. Na u be boss sha I twale