Wordy Phrases Beginning with “In” [Part 1]

Among the scores of verbose constructions that can be whittled down (usually) to one word with no loss of, and often with a net gain in, clarity are those phrases in the following sentences beginning with in.

The replacement words are not necessarily the only (or the best) choices, and the sentences could be further refined, but employ this list to help you be on the lookout for — that is, be aware of — phrases like the ones presented below. They need not be automatically excised, but examine your writing for an abundance of such prolixity, and revise at your discretion.

1.
Please submit your report in advance of the meeting.
Please submit your report before the meeting.

2.
We received a check in the amount of $1,000.
We received a check for $1,000.

3.
We’re implementing this policy in an effort to streamline our process.
We’re implementing this policy to streamline our process.

4.
Which section is this question in connection with?
Which section is this question about?

5.
Do not use in excess of the recommended dosage.
Do not use more than the recommended dosage.

6.
Are you in favor of the new system, or do you oppose it?
Are you for the new system, or do you oppose it?

7.
Use Form BFF in lieu of Form OMG.
Use Form BFF instead of Form OMG.

8-9.
Improvement will be noted in most cases (or instances).
Improvement will usually be noted.

10.
They have changed the procedure in order to reduce the necessary steps.
They have changed the procedure to reduce the necessary steps.


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