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THE RAIN by LaurinaDavid(f): 9:49pm On Jul 03, 2016
He laid there enjoying how bright and beautiful she smiled
He wished he could touch her face but she is far away
He laid there gazing just as she stares into his soul smiling
Her smile so bright so yellow so warm
The brightness of her smile made him so hot he starts to sweat
He doesn’t care
He’s getting dehydrated by the heat
He laid there watching her
Praying she smiles at him for longer



While I enjoyed this precious moment The Devil In Prada blew in seductively
Coming between me and my lover’s view
The devil sways to the music in her head
She steals everyone’s attention
I try to focus on my love but She’s persistent
Destroying everything that stands between me and my love
I try to hold back but her force is too strong
Slowly I give in to her
Letting her take me in her arms slowly



I forgot for a moment my love was watching me keenly
Suddenly I hear the cry of my love
She screamed so loud
Her voice was fire
But it couldn’t break me out from the devil’s arms
She’s hurt
Her bright, yellow, beautiful gradually fades away
She becomes blue
Her warmth gets cold
She’s heart broken


He’s all wrapped in the arms of the devil in prada
She didn’t get to feel his hard rough hands on her skin
The pain hit her so hard
She felt a tear run down her check
She sincerely prayed it would touch him and bring him back to her
But he’s already consumed by Her lust
Another tear followed
She couldn’t hold them back anymore she let it all pour down on him
Once again he has hurt her
Just as always
And now all she had was her tears
She rained it all down on him
Hoping he drowns in her tears for all the pain

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Re: THE RAIN by LaurinaDavid(f): 7:08am On Jul 04, 2016
This poem is actually about the rain, the He is the earth or ground, his love is the sky, the devil in Prada is the wind, when she smiled is when the sun is shining, when she cried is when it rained.... Would love to hear what you think about it....

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