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BROKEN:A SAD LOVE TALE BY JESSICA DURU by Nobody: 11:37pm On Jul 04, 2020
Her smile,
that smile
Her beauty that yonder shines,
and her love which doth strengthens me
Like the wind blowing unceasingly
Across the White Eastern sea
Shall it forever be?
Oh,I wish...
If only wishes do come true

I feel the longing pile up
With each day that goes by,
Shall it ever pass?
Oh,I doubt
Love is really hard like they say

Everything seems so broken
Even from afar,
One could still see
Can it ever be fixed?
Oh,I know not...
Nor the royal empress herself
For the rust will forever go on...

Ciara

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Re: BROKEN:A SAD LOVE TALE BY JESSICA DURU by susrite(m): 1:42am On Jul 11, 2020
Ciara9251:
[center]Her smile
That smile
Her beauty that yonder shines
And her love which doth strengthens me
Like the wind,which blows unceasingly across the white eastern region
Shall it forever be?
Oh!I wish
If only wishes do come true

I feel the longing pile up with each day that goes by
If it will ever pass
Oh!I do doubt
Love is really hard like they say
Everything seems so broken
Even from afar,one could still see
Can it ever be fixed?
Oh!I know not
Not even the royal empress herself does
...As the rust will forever go on...

CIARA[/center]

Beautiful piece, still sound cool even being a blank verse writeup. Never knew you do poems too.

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Re: BROKEN:A SAD LOVE TALE BY JESSICA DURU by Nobody: 6:52pm On Jul 11, 2020
Oh,thanks so much.I actually decided to make it in that form...And yeah,I also write poems,well,that's if I see the ideas coming.But story writing's my main focus...So,I'm pretty much looking forward to sharing my works here,well,when I'm all done writing....
Re: BROKEN:A SAD LOVE TALE BY JESSICA DURU by susrite(m): 8:04pm On Jul 11, 2020
Ciara9251:
Oh,thanks so much.I actually decided to make it in that form...And yeah,I also write poems,well,that's if I see the ideas coming.But story writing's my main focus...So,I'm pretty much looking forward to sharing my works here,well,when I'm all done writing....
I'd be happy to read that. I write a bit too. Not too good tho
Re: BROKEN:A SAD LOVE TALE BY JESSICA DURU by Nobody: 6:28pm On Jul 12, 2020
susrite:
I'd be happy to read that. I write a bit too. Not too good tho
Oh,u write either?My,that's nice.I'd love to read your work.
Re: BROKEN:A SAD LOVE TALE BY JESSICA DURU by susrite(m): 10:59pm On Jul 12, 2020
Ciara9251:
Oh,u write either?My,that's nice.I'd love to read your work.
you read my stolen walls already
Re: BROKEN:A SAD LOVE TALE BY JESSICA DURU by Nobody: 12:24pm On Jul 13, 2020
susrite:
you read my stolen walls already
Oh,that's true....And I loved it.Just leep up the good work and I'm certain you'll go far...By the special grace of God.
Re: BROKEN:A SAD LOVE TALE BY JESSICA DURU by Nobody: 12:24pm On Jul 13, 2020
susrite:
you read my stolen walls already
Oh,that's true....And I loved it.Just keep up the good work and I'm certain you'll go far...By the special grace of God.
Re: BROKEN:A SAD LOVE TALE BY JESSICA DURU by Nobody: 2:25pm On Jul 16, 2020
#Fate

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