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Re: Clash Of Two Pens: Laveda Vs Jigsawkillah by ShaqFu: 11:38pm On Jul 26, 2016 |
Oahray:Really, and to think I think myself a learner. Hmm. |
Re: Clash Of Two Pens: Laveda Vs Jigsawkillah by Oahray: 11:42pm On Jul 26, 2016 |
ShaqFu:that's the human capacity for self-improvement. The man who is satisfied with his position remains stagnant. It's a good thing. On the flip-side, it means I have a 0.00000000000003% chance of catching up. |
Re: Clash Of Two Pens: Laveda Vs Jigsawkillah by Laveda(f): 11:44pm On Jul 26, 2016 |
firstEVA:Eva, thanks. 1 Like |
Re: Clash Of Two Pens: Laveda Vs Jigsawkillah by ShaqFu: 11:47pm On Jul 26, 2016 |
Oahray:LOL. Give yourself more credit Ray. |
Re: Clash Of Two Pens: Laveda Vs Jigsawkillah by Oahray: 11:50pm On Jul 26, 2016 |
ShaqFu:ok... 0.00000000099% Bottom line is, levels dey. If I good like una, na poetry I go take dey answer people for road |
Re: Clash Of Two Pens: Laveda Vs Jigsawkillah by ShaqFu: 11:58pm On Jul 26, 2016 |
Oahray:LOL. I use to do that, people complained and called me a looney. Lol. 1 Like |
Re: Clash Of Two Pens: Laveda Vs Jigsawkillah by sirjay(m): 12:00am On Jul 27, 2016 |
Abeg make Una no vex... Since na the kings of poetry dey here make I just drop this jagbajantis for here.. On top the "Enemy" matter Came smiling Took my pain away Gave me everything Took it all away Docile and sheepish; me Wise and crafty; you I knew it The little man within nagged about you Closer and closer you came Stimulating and entering The happy host; I was Doors wide open; hell! I beckoned Relaxed, in euphoria I basked Oblivious and ignorant Adamant to the pleas of my cerebrum I listened to my cardiac muscle You took it What I could have given for you What I could have laid at your feet You took it For naught but pride and vengeance For something committed from ages past Confused as realization dawned Knife in the jugular I realized What a bumbling idiot I had been Juggernaut Bn Yusuf 4 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Clash Of Two Pens: Laveda Vs Jigsawkillah by Laveda(f): 8:11am On Jul 27, 2016 |
sirjay: Nice one. |
Re: Clash Of Two Pens: Laveda Vs Jigsawkillah by sirjay(m): 11:04am On Jul 27, 2016 |
Laveda: Thanks ma'am 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Clash Of Two Pens: Laveda Vs Jigsawkillah by llaykorn: 1:43pm On Jul 27, 2016 |
Now these are two awesome pieces. The idea of poetry duels is a fantastic one too, but I believe that two things need to be improved if more of these are going to happen which I hope would. The first one is theme clarity. A single word is not enough as a theme. I believe that the idea of 'theme' was brought up so both poets, in the end, would have written poems with exactly the same themes and what would be left to score is the style. It should be clear enough that poets who drift away too much from the theme should get penalized. (If a criterion scoring system is being used) That brings me to the second point, and that is the scoring system. A criterion-based scoring system would be much more awesome to use for the judging as a poem is never always good in all ways and never always bad in all ways. And, Laveda, you're a star! 2 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Clash Of Two Pens: Laveda Vs Jigsawkillah by Laveda(f): 4:56pm On Jul 27, 2016 |
llaykorn: Your observations are cool. But I'm still a newbie tho, and the duel wasn't really planned.. The next one would be better.. Yippee! thanks. |
Re: Clash Of Two Pens: Laveda Vs Jigsawkillah by JigsawKillah(m): 10:56am On Apr 02, 2019 |
Laveda: Did you write other poems after this? Plus I need my revenge . |
Re: Clash Of Two Pens: Laveda Vs Jigsawkillah by Laveda(f): 4:40pm On Apr 02, 2019 |
JigsawKillah: Lol. The quest for money has taken over now Jigs. Can’t remember when last I tried |
Re: Clash Of Two Pens: Laveda Vs Jigsawkillah by JigsawKillah(m): 7:37pm On Apr 02, 2019 |
Laveda: Lol understandable. |
Re: Clash Of Two Pens: Laveda Vs Jigsawkillah by J2381: 7:43pm On Apr 02, 2019 |
Laveda:Welcome to our world, diva. |
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