BABANGBALI:
moderate size

Ok

doctokwus:
Though fiction,u can make it more real by paying attention to some details.For eg,there is no way your phone cud have been left with u to use whenever u wake up.
That part turned me a bit off,otherwise good storyline.

The phone was left there for a purpose to depict hopelessness and despair, knowing even though she had the phone it was useless becos there was no network to call out for help. This OP reminds me of a writer...

You should be writtin a script for our yoruba nollywood! Please continue! God bless the work of your hand

MrsExplorer:
I'm literally sweating from excitement. I FINALLY MADE FRONT PAGE?

Thanks for all the comments, means so much to me. and for the critics, ehmmmmm, thank you too.

I thought i wont be updating this story till on monday, but now.., damn me if i don't before the end of tommorrow,, you guys should sit still.


NOTE:

If you have a great idea how the story should/could go,, just let me know in the comment. If i like your idea i would incoperate it to the story and give you credit for it.

For those of you trying to contact me mrsexplorer21@gmail.com

veekid:
I trust Bibijay123 she no dey use update suffer us, old someone should wake mrsexplorer up from sleep
Follow back sha

Patience bro, she must have her reasons and her updates are worth waiting for.

bibijay123:



Patience bro, she must have her reasons and her updates are worth waiting for.

She is in d land of d ghost receiving inspiration

MrsExplorer:
I'm literally sweating from excitement. I FINALLY MADE FRONT PAGE?

Thanks for all the comments, means so much to me. and for the critics, ehmmmmm, thank you too.

I thought i wont be updating this story till on monday, but now.., damn me if i don't before the end of tommorrow,, you guys should sit still.


NOTE:

If you have a great idea how the story should/could go,, just let me know in the comment. If i like your idea i would incoperate it to the story and give you credit for it.

For those of you trying to contact me mrsexplorer21@gmail.com

Okay...for contribution I wish the runs girl come out victorious not dead at the end, meanwhile kudos for the suspense had to follow you so I won't miss the update

MrsExplorer:
if you are reading this, kindly drop a comment

Pls don't stop.
In Falz's voice, "We're enjoining it"

obontami:


What kind of dumb question is that ??

So if a writer write a story about a hooker according to u she's automatically a hooker right ??

Your types are the one going about saying kanayo o.kanayo is ritualist cos he acts being a ritualist in movies


Hian

Guy I swear u no get sense.

MrsExplorer:
I'm literally sweating from excitement. I FINALLY MADE FRONT PAGE?

Thanks for all the comments, means so much to me. and for the critics, ehmmmmm, thank you too.

I thought i wont be updating this story till on monday, but now.., damn me if i don't before the end of tommorrow,, you guys should sit still.


NOTE:

If you have a great idea how the story should/could go,, just let me know in the comment. If i like your idea i would incoperate it to the story and give you credit for it.

For those of you trying to contact me mrsexplorer21@gmail.com

Probably u get pregnant for Caleb

come this call girl...Can you please finish this your fiction or are you still burning in hel? anyways I hail your brain.....and if I may ask at what degree does that hel burn, so we might get ready for it

sleekyonyx:
yes ma'am

Na so I jam my Queen for here op!

herbie27:
Good!.

Op, please we're waiting patiently.

So I was just going to pretend I didn't see you reply the monkey, but you did over and over again! I am disappointed!


You see, haters only exist to fulfill one thing...Hate! That's their job! Yo, let them do their job! Only then can they have a fulfilled life!

Please, stop wasting your time stopping them from existing!

Another piece that has no updates.

doublezero7:


So I was just going to pretend I didn't see you reply the monkey, but you did over and over again! I am disappointed!


You see, haters only exist to fulfill one thing...Hate! That's their job! Yo, let them do their job! Only then can they have a fulfilled life!

Please, stop wasting your time stopping them from existing!

Sorry Sir!, thanks for the advice.

Till tomorrow?

how many of us will remember to come back?

nice story sha.

obontami:



Just like way the whole of ur extended family lack basic sense

No matter.

I wanna say hater wish you well, but nigga you can't be my hater, my level too much for ur like to hate on.

I blame the moderators for this; why put an incomplete story on front page?

ladyF:
Till tomorrow?

how many of us will remember to come back?

nice story sha.

LadyF, don't worry will quote you.

gensteejay:
I wonder how fiction writers get the inspiration for their books. This author writes her story so well that you would think she is/was a call girl (no offence meant to the writer). Such a thought is inevitable when one looks at the depth of her tale.

Also, the finesse peculiar to this tale stirs up a similar thought when one considers the plots of the fantasy works in J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter series, J.R.R. Tolkien's The Lord of the Rings, John Grisham's books and others.

good comment you made there. like Grisham a lot, I have read all but one

Babycherry:


Mention me, when you are mentioned abeg


she's not coming now ooooooh

She's creating cover for some pips

can you please mention me, please please please and please.

Wen will the story bbe completed !a new nairalander

herbie27:
LadyF, don't worry will quote you.

Thanks so much. Curiosity wan kill me.

obontami:
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Feel free to go and eat a dick as usual and swerve into the cave you came from kid

sweetie

ladyF:



Thanks so much. Curiosity wan kill me.

I know.

MrsExplorer:
updates coming soon, before the end of tomorrow! thank you all.

Be sure to tag me when you update. Interesting piece you got here.

hope we wont end up paying a token to read the rest? I remember one writer who did so, after posting like 7 episodes she referred us to her blog.

Pls continue nh... Enjoying it Pls continue nh... Enjoying it

MrSEXplorer, it's taking too long joooor. Complete what you started.