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Review My Poem by Nobody: 9:52am On Sep 14, 2016 |
Criticism is allowed. JUST ONCE MORE Oh! Just once more, There lies the gold, A little dig is all you need, To unveil the glorious treasure. Oh! Just once more, There you will find paradise, A little search is all you need, To discover the wonderland. Oh! Just once more, There you'll find faith, A little trust is all you need, To reach an height of no fear. Oh! Just once more, I repeat, Just once more! |
Re: Review My Poem by greatex(m): 9:55am On Sep 14, 2016 |
Ok |
Re: Review My Poem by nelson16(m): 9:59am On Sep 14, 2016 |
motivational |
Re: Review My Poem by Nobody: 10:03am On Sep 14, 2016 |
nelson16:thanks. |
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