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Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 2:50pm On Jul 13, 2007
grin grin Right. . .there are also other times on my posts grin grin Am knocturnal tongue grin
Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 3:01pm On Jul 13, 2007
hope you're able to get o'utta bed at the time of the day when it mattters most after all'a the nite crawling grin
Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 3:03pm On Jul 13, 2007
Ahhhhhhhhhh what time of the day that matters is subjective grin grin I do my best work @ nights tongue grin
Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 12:40pm On Jul 16, 2007
iice:

Ahhhhhhhhhh what time of the day that matters is subjective grin grin I do my best work @ nights tongue grin

shocked shocked shocked shocked shocked shocked shocked shocked

I comment my reserve grin grin grin
Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 4:56pm On Jul 16, 2007
Squash that thought! tongue grin

I just knew when i wrote that, that it would come off like a double entendre tongue grin
Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 8:32pm On Jul 17, 2007
Hey, i knw u was just kiddin. . No krazy th'ots here ;d
kind'a like nites though. . U can thnk clearly then; cloaked in my own l'il world, i piece 'em feelings 2geda better!
Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 5:30am On Jul 18, 2007
Exactly!
Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 1:56pm On Jul 19, 2007
High Up

just below the skys,
guided by the trail of star and moon light
palm greens backed by sea blues on coral whites,
framed lanes of dust-caked corrugated sheets,
acrylic and cotton flapping the winds,
red-peaked metallic lines potruding from the earth,
scattered mobile dots in colored shades,
here, there and everywhere . . .
tis' all i see from high up here.

don't know how i did this . . . but it flew right o'utta the top of my head - what do y'all thinkĀ 
Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 2:27pm On Jul 24, 2007
@iicey,
u have xhibited most of d traits of spec-wearin peeps!
lol
Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 2:28pm On Jul 24, 2007
@iicey,
u have xhibited most of d traits of spec-wearin peeps!
lol
Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 5:47am On Jul 25, 2007
Really? grin Nerdy perhaps? grin tongue I don't even wear them. . .kindda lost them in one escapade grin
Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 9:09am On Jul 25, 2007
iice:

Really? grin Nerdy perhaps? grin tongue I don't even wear them. . .kindda lost them in one escapade grin

yep nerdy's a bit like it . . . . Escapade hope u was able to see your way out of it safely without 'em specs on grin
Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 12:59pm On Jul 25, 2007
LOL so i come of nerdy? Hmmm interesting! grin

Yes i still see very well, i just wear the glasses when my eyes pain me.
My sight is not that bad


BTW @ your poem. . .i kindda liked it (The element thing going on there) cheesy
Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 5:25pm On Jul 25, 2007
iice:

LOL so i come of nerdy? Hmmm interesting! grin

Yes i still see very well, i just wear the glasses when my eyes pain me.
My sight is not that bad

BTW @ your poem. . .i kindda liked it (The element thing going on there) cheesy


Nerdy 'n Trendy. . . grin

i wear mine all d time. . . . its now like an extension of my being, take 'em off and i'm surely handicapped!

Thank. . . was looking out the window from where i work and the words just came in a rush, penned 'em down and tried 2 polish it out. looked at it 2 see if i could add stuff but ain't found a chink yet. . . you got any ideas?
Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by iice(f): 2:45am On Jul 26, 2007
Understand ya, my friend's like that although he doesnt wear his glasses like always. . .whenever we watch a movie, he has to put on his glasses coz everything's kindda blurry lol.


Hmmmm, nah can't think right now lol grin
Re: My Poems : Any Reviews? by RuuDie(m): 3:19pm On Jul 26, 2007
lol. . .
Pl's tell me if u find smthng u feel i oughta change!

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