congrats on the delivery of a great story........

this story had so many other possibilities in my mind

congrats on the delivery of a nice story........

this story had so many other possibilities in my mind

Best of luck in your exams. This story was worth reading wooh! God bless u dear.

Creeza:
He can't afford it. Just let it pass....

m nt an he.......

this story got me thinking... life don't always go the way we wanted ( i wished Gab survived it though)

great piece Creeza....bless your brain bro

Omgee creeza tnx for completing d story buh wah apend to dammy nd kate's fada......a million kisses for u dear buh u avnt been replying my messages why??

honestly the story was superb.....
although it took another turn. u practically beat my predictions and imaginations. Every thing in this world is all in vanity,we shouldn't be spending our time on things that doesn't count much for us. one's quest for money is good because it necessary in life buh it shouldn't control us. we shouldn't be quick to draw conclusion just like in the case of Andy, also we should learn to let things go and try not to be selfish in d case of Dami..... All d same u gat a very nice,interesting and educative story #ThumbsupCreeza#

All I can say is with Gabe dead, Kate and Andy stand a pretty good chance. Mind you, I never said his death is pleasant.

Thanks creeza. Oya chop em

... I've been jacking o!!! Reading like a world class fool

book non gree enter brain..
You guys should help me out , what will man pikin do nah?

Gabbyraze:
Creeza my man,well done,you have done well. Perfect ending mehn,pain is part of human existence

my brother , nwanne nmadu

Na so we see am o

queenitee:
Creeza,you sha made me cry in the end abi?see twist,I never thought Gabe would die..
So touching.When love dies
Life is funny sometimes,so also is death.


Best of luck and God in your exams.

If you have cried finish, let me buy you mae shayi bread and tea... Evrythng will be okay

tunjilomo:
Bless you Creeza,am sorry for not following this story for a long point in time,but this an A+ story.

Bros me, I prostrate for ground give you sha...


You were following before Na, until you run away when Gabe no gree do the thing ... bad man like you.

Lankyannie:
Creeza,to be frank wid u,i dont like dz ending@all.
Wah happnd to d dami dt supposd 2die nah,cant a man be offerd a second chance afta he retrace his step?
So u wonna tel me dt d guilty one is roaming around d earth lyk nfn happnd while d innocent jst kpai like dt(beta try put finishing touches to dz story ooo).
Wil andy nd kate end up 2geda,wah bout kemi 2?biko clearify us b4 dt tin dt happnd in 1883 wil repeat itself again.lemme stop here for now cus of ma MB.nyc1 shaa.

Lanky baeski


The story have ended nah!



No more touches to be made nah.


I left you to imagine what will happen to Dami and Kate's father...


" The police is on their way here...please , papa, drop the gun"
* rings a bell?

I even created a picture where Kate hugs Andy! What do you think? She told him everting nah and they are now in good terms.

KpagoGIN:
am just speechless..... you really took me by surprise and am impress, I have nothing more to say than thank you for taking your time in finishing this work of art.
God bless you.

bless you too brother mi

Gloria007:
Thanks for the story creeza.Don't forget slaves in the soul and good luck in your exams.

thanks for the wishes and I will do my best to finish that one too.. Its not even long, laziness have finish my life

Mztemmy:
Waoh.......been a ghost reader on this thread since the beginning but I can't just help buh to comment at the end... . this is a very nice work cr eeza more grease to ur elbow

spirit of ghost reading, come out IJN

Thanks for commenting sha, means a lot

Mayreeyam:
Waoh dnt no wat to say. Ds story is a bomb, it teaches us mostly d men Dat every tyn doesn't revolves abt money. Wish u all d best in ur coming exams

thanks for the wishes.

hormobolanle:
wow wow wow
u deserve a standing ovation.I love d story from d beginning till were it ends. it is just sooo wow
though couldn't folo up properly but d time d use stickied to my fone really worth it


tank u so much for dis wondaful story,more wisdom unto u.d story was EMOTIONAL,LESSONS TO B LEARNT N MIND BLOWING

ALL I CAN SAY IS
A JOB WELDON
#THUMB UP

first timer, am happy you learnt a lot.

hottadiva:
congrats on the delivery of a great story........


this story had so many other possibilities in my mind

thank you..

Possibilities..??

Tell us please, I want to know what other ways it could have gone!

nikz:
Best of luck in your exams. This story was worth reading wooh! God bless u dear.

first timer....

Thank you ma!

remiseyi:
this story got me thinking... life don't always go the way we wanted ( i wished Gab survived it though)

great piece Creeza....bless your brain bro

thanks

harameede99:
Omgee creeza tnx for completing d story buh wah apend to dammy nd kate's fada......a million kisses for u dear buh u avnt been replying my messages why??

How far nah? I am busy , sorry I didn't reply earlier.

StephanieElla24:
honestly the story was superb..... nice,interesting and educative story #ThumbsupCreeza#

thanks...

jagugu88li:
All I can say is with Gabe dead, Kate and Andy stand a pretty good chance. Mind you, I never said his death is pleasant.

Thanks creeza. Oya chop em

you too

And all I wanna say is God bless this brain. on the watch for another beautiful piece

Creeza:



Lanky baeski


The story have ended nah!



No more touches to be made nah.


I left you to imagine what will happen to Dami and Kate's father...


" The police is on their way here...please , papa, drop the gun"
* rings a bell?

I even created a picture where Kate hugs Andy! What do you think? She told him everting nah and they are now in good terms.

kemi nd funmi nko?

Creeza:
If you have cried finish, let me buy you mae shayi bread and tea... Evrythng will be okay

Oya lemme wipe my tears

nice one creeza,at least Gabriel ended up dead.nice one

Creeza:
How far nah? I am busy , sorry I didn't reply earlier.

hmm i hear u all d best in ya exams sha if u find anytin hard jst tink of me u will jst knw it sharp sharp

Creeza:
thanks for the wishes.

U r very much welcome

Lankyannie:
kemi nd funmi nko?

Oya use brain to picture and place them somewhere....


Funmi either gets reunited with her grandma: Ma Funke.. or she is left in the care of OluwaKemi Joe.



Still following ? OK!


Funmi could also be with her real dad...Richard, whom I mentioned earlier in the story but didn't include him at the end, because he ain't too important to the plot...


So you see, The possibilities are endless...

stories don't really need to end before the" whole thing ends"





Any more question

Creeza:




Oya use brain to picture and place them somewhere....


Funmi either gets reunited with her grandma: Ma Funke.. or she is left in the care of OluwaKemi Joe.



Still following ? OK!


Funmi could also be with her real dad...Richard, whom I mentioned earlier in the story but didn't include him at the end, because he ain't too important to the plot...


So you see, The possibilities are endless...

stories don't really need to end before the" whole thing ends"





Any more question

na sire though u didnt tel me bout kemi.
Wil jst blv dt she found anoda love again,tnx alot creeza.
If u go writn competi eeh,u ft carry award oooo.stay sharp