Creeza keep it going I like this part........so Gabriel don enter wahala now

Hardybattee45:
Creeza keep it going I like this part........so Gabriel don enter wahala now

I just confuse too. But trust the nigga , story just began.
:-P
Thanks alot bro.

I hope you stay till the end of the story.

nyc piece u got here

MhizSuccess:
nyc piece u got here

thanks dear.

hmmmmmm

tunjilomo:
hmmmmmm

baba say something nah, before you kill me with suspense here . Like say you now the author and I'm a reader

yorhmienerd:
you updates are becoming slowpaced this days

I'm deeply sorry bro... But I promise to increase the pace, dont want your love for this thread to die o .

But this week was wierd. Skarlett finished her story- happy ending

Bibijay123 had migraines- hope she recovers

Angelinasto had same - taking agbo currently


seems like Literature section became a bit dull.

Thank God for Lleigh that kept it lively.

Creeza:
I'm deeply sorry bro... But I promise to increase the pace, dont want your love for this thread to die o .

But this week was wierd. Skarlett finished her story- happy ending

Bibijay123 had migraines- hope she recovers

Angelinasto had same - taking agbo currently


seems like Literature section became a bit dull.

Thank God for Lleigh that kept it lively.

aaw Creeza thanks for the mention, I am doing my best.

You just incredible. Lleigh I humbly employ u to keep up the good work.

Crystalsaint, I sight you. *winks for the past 30 minutes I've been seeing your moniker down there. Thanks for reading.

Creeza:
You just incredible. Lleigh I humbly employ u to keep up the good work.

Crystalsaint, I sight you. *winks for the past 30 minutes I've been seeing your moniker down there. Thanks for reading.

the story is very interesting...its a must read for me... lolzzz

awww!tnx alot 4d dedication dear.i rili appreciate it.more mb 2ur fone+more power 2ur power bank.am buying a carton of juice 4uk

crystalsaint:
the story is very interesting...its a must read for me... lolzzz

thanks dear *winks

Lankyannie:
awww!tnx alot 4d dedication dear.i rili appreciate it.more mb 2ur fone+more power 2ur power bank.am buying a carton of juice 4u k

thanks dear! I'M WAITING PATIENTLY FOR IT.

even if he has to gt kate bck he has to atone 4 his sin.

YINKS89:
even if he has to gt kate bck he has to atone 4 his sin.

Na waoh...Gabriel only did what he did so as to improve the way of life of his family,he almost slept with Dami but at least he didn't. The only thing Gabriel has done is to lie to his wife and Andy will do the same if he should get the chance to date Kate. Twas Gabi is feeling guilty for lying to his wife that's why he has been avoiding her. You guys should leave my Gabi for me o.

Nder and Yinks89 , thanks for your constructive reviews.
I appreciate.

Nder:
Na waoh...Gabriel only did what he did so as to improve the way of life of his family,he almost slept with Dami but at least he didn't. The only thing Gabriel has done is to lie to his wife and Andy will do the same if he should get the chance to date Kate. Twas Gabi is feeling guilty for lying to his wife that's why he has been avoiding her. You guys should leave my Gabi for me o.

I hope you understand that he didn't sleep with Dami because the alcohol got in the way, she floored. Two, his guilt shouldn't make him talk anyhow with his wife. He admitted to have only an eye for Kate, but Dami was the second (not exact words), meaning what?

He had thought of bedding Dami, got the opportunity, was ready to until the alcohol blocked it. Bad guy!!!

He is now so attached to the family, he sleep talks, calling the girls name

dd iykekelvins mhizsuccess crystalsaint yinks89 sharafawizkidayo
lleigh jagugu88li

Continues*

GABRIEL

''...So that's how it happened and the reason I kept it a secret'' I said ,feeling a painful heart wrench.

''Ok Mr. Gabriel ' Dami said '' I'll talk to you later. Please you can leave now'

Why the sudden change, Dami? I asked.

'Why the sudden formal tone?

'Mr. Egedege' She said '' Please dont let it get any worse than this. I said, I will call you later''

She made several signs with her head, eyes and even her tongue. I couldnt fathom what she meant.

It was as if she was saying '' Go now, please, I'll call you later. Lets just talk some other time''

' whatever ! I thought she was insane. We had to iron things out there and then.

' So is that it? ' I said' You'll just walk me out ,out of your life. Out of Funmi's life. Without explanation'

''We are done talking here. ' She said ' Dont let me call security'

Again ,her eyes betrayed her words.
*----

I glanced briefly at Kemi. She was rather perplexed than lost in thoughts. A single word did not see the daylight out of her mouth.

I left the two women, opened the door without second thoughts and banged it behind me.
*******

All the while I thought things were under control. Guessing now, that I had been wrong.
She was such an ingrate. A manipulative witch.

The good times, I spent with Funmi , flashed in my face. My grown affection for the little girl.

**----- ''The best gift you gave me is you, thank you for coming. Daddy''

'' I promise you . I will never leave again '' I said to her.


'' Promise?.....yeah! I love you daddy..-----*


At first ,it was all a joke, but now I knew I lost the game. The underdog won with high odds at stake.

My family was near dilapidation and my relationship with Funmi will also suffer.
***

I came home early. Tucked myself into the couch and waited for a miracle.

I dialed Tayo's number. The playback tune of Flavour's : Power to win, helped calm my storm.

'' Man whats up? I said.

'' Just finished a deal with Kay Constructions...I'm on my way home' Tayo's voice said.

'' Bro, I'm back to square one' I said.

'' Seriously? How did that happen.?

'Tayo, the chick blew my cover- I never knew she would have me investigated''

He kept on with his long list of advices, after which he admonished me to admit reality .

'' Now you have to focus all your efforts on your marriage, with Katherine'

'Ayo?- Its not going to be easy'' I said ''besides--''

''There is no sides here. You 're the man. She will understand, just sweet-talk her into it, She needs alot from you'' He said again.

'' Kate is different--'

''Listen to me G,' He cut in again, '' She is still your wife. Its a chance to make things right--''

' So I should tell her the truth? I asked.

He heaved a sigh of relief then continued '' Well , thats a wrong turn... Dont bail the cat yet, in time it will escape''

' Besides now, you haven't been unfaithful, have you? He asked.
****

The day weared away as the sun kissed the earth goodnight, with its yellow rays setting at the far west.

Kate was not yet back, neither was David.

I sat near the dinning table, glancing at the mouth watering food I had prepared.

I manipulated the urgency and made it worth while.

I waited. Then my phone rang.

It was Maxwell on the other end.

'' Bad news, bro! ' He said.

'' I've had quite enough doze since last night' I said ' drop the bomb. Whats it Max?

'' Its Kate--- ''

I became frantic. Stood up immediately, nearly ran mad. What happened to Kate?*

'' What do you mean? - Kate? Did anything happen to her?

I suddenly realised that my heart pace trippled, and shock waves travelled down my spine.

'' Ma Nkechi, just got rushed to the hospital'' He said.

'' Why? What happened to Mother.' I asked ' And why did Kate call you first ,instead of me?

It was a strange feeling, and it ate me up internally.

''well I'm not in the position to answer' He said '' maybe her mind randomly selected who to call first. We are on the same team ,arent we?

'' OK, what about David?

'' He is with his mother, at the hospital' Maxwell said.



'' I'm on my way. Text me the address''

I zoomed off, collecting my wallet and keys to the car Tayo gave me.

I got it at a second hand price, and would pay on interval rate. It was not too flashy, but it served its purpose.

Suddenly I my phone beeped again.

Indeed today, was full of wonders and painfull uncertainties.

The devil was really a fierce master in the act of temptation.

I pushed the message view button . A text from Dami.
* :

Please meet up with me, I want us to iron things out. I'm sorry for shouting at you.
I want to understand you more.
Dont leave us now, Funmi and I need you,.... Kisses and hugs, with Love. *

I was literally baked and at crossed roads.


My arms grasped the wheel. I paused and
undecided on whom to go to:

Kate who didnt bother to call me or Funmi and her mysterious witch of a mother?

Tbc

Just kill this maggot Gabriel, already . One word from Dami and his brain cells intertwine.

Gabriel deserves the worst Karma ever. The bullet that will kill him has the same stamina as that Russian Missile that fell in Iran, kill him

I dedicate my FTC to the Russian Government, God bless Russia

jagugu88li:
Just kill this maggot Gabriel, already . One word from Dami and his brain cells intertwine.

Gabriel deserves the worst Karma ever. The bullet that will kill him has the same stamina as that Russian Missiles that fell in Iran, kill him

I dedicate my FTC to the Russian Government, God bless Russia

lol free Gabriel joor, Its Temptation that is doing him anyhow in life things dnt happen how we plan. Dont you think.

This my bae sef, If you hate Gabriel, means you hating on me too.

Creeza:
lol free Gabriel joor, Its Temptation that is doing him anyhow in life things dnt happen how we plan. Dont you think.

This my bae sef, If you hate Gabriel, means you hating on me too.

Tell me you have a spine, unlike Gabriel here and maybe, just maybe I'll think twice.

You didn't say temptation..... Its way past that, he wants them as family two. Its not even about the money now. Die maggot die!!!

jagugu88li:
Tell me you have a spine, unlike Gabriel here and maybe, just maybe I'll think twice.

am begging, please forgive already. He hasnt done the worst yet.

And I think I got a spine, not sure tho. It should be there, somewhere /

He cant die , just yet. He has a mountain to climb. *winks

yorhmienerd:
Sweet, Gabriel is a typical example of man who wants wealth and peace at the same time which is impossible except you have a legitimate job

how was the pace of that update? Sprinting or meandering?

Creeza:
how was the pace of that update? Sprinting or meandering?

For now, its meandering/crawling

yorhmienerd:
For now, its meandering/crawling

hmmm.

Gabriel is a fool.

Hmm omo dis one na it lagos agberos dey call "one chance" bt in my own opinion, it should be family first b4 any other thing, bt anyway the writer knws best! so kudos to the writer, mr creeza, sir. u are 1derful thanks 4 dh mention, jah bless u

At last i caught up with you guys. I love this, you're doing a great job here Creeza. Following......more inspiration.