iffydave:


Hello....
2gb ram 34bit or 64bit??

dand9206:
Wow, nice, straight forward & educative analysis Boss.

Congrats to the top guys. Well deserved.

We(my type, lol) gonna keep practicing. We shall improve. lol

Btw Sadiq no show for this assignment. he must have been busy?

Lastbender:
CC Bestpoke Format is modified, another idea just popped and gave birth to the second pic

bestspoke:


3.surestam(2nd entry,11:26pm, Feb 09) : Good concept,icon use for this entry is the best of all your entries However your choice of fonts needs improvement.Your design will look better on mock ups if you fonts are not all stacked together.
In all ,It is a good design but with some missing attributes. Also the effect on the ASL is reducing the simplicity.You can leave the effect then remove the icon, or leave the icon and remove that effect.It'll improve the design.


I salute everyone of you for your trials ,and really appreciate your efforts.

I am commenting generally because there are general errors while some erros are specific.

FONTS : I have hammered on this severally, you need to go outthere and get some professional fonts for your designs

EFFECTS: I will advise that you should avoid effects,don't use it at all. Do flat designs for now.

ICONS: One is enough, if you must use more than one, there must be a synergy.

nell4(11:57pm On Feb 09), you want to turn you logo to a market abii ....how many icons,what is your motive and are you still doing a logo.? you want to include all the apparels in the logo kwa? .Love youe second entry thou.


A fashion logo especially for apparallel should look good on fashion mockups, cloths,labels and all.

Rules of logo design, simplicity is no. one...Things client can easily remember and identify the company in the midst of crowd.

For those doing multi effects,multi colors and those inserting too many icons,Please have it in mind that clients will want to print the design on
business cards,letterheads and all...multicoloring will increase the cost,too many icons wont look well and effect won't come out well after pressing.

Thank you all.

Keep practising
Do research ,feed your mind with ideas from great designs scattered all over the web.

I'm still learning too, lets learn together.

bestspoke:




1. androsurf - The fonts are on point and fashion related, Good placement of
logo elements, can work well as a fashion label or apparel label.Looks brilliant on mock ups.
Simple and precise.

2.Chigozie1(Last entry,5:31am,Feb09) : Simple and straight to the point,although font needs improvement,I'll still rank entry high
It'll look well on mock ups and fashion labels.Elements are also well placed and effect usage are moderate.Your other entries are on point too.Very.


3.surestam(2nd entry,11:26pm, Feb 09) : Good concept,icon use for this entry is the best of all your entries However your choice of fonts needs improvement.Your design will look better on mock ups if you fonts are not all stacked together.
In all ,It is a good design but with some missing attributes. Also the effect on the ASL is reducing the simplicity.You can leave the effect then remove the icon, or leave the icon and remove that effect.It'll improve the design.

4.Femsmart (1st entry) : Nice concept.Smart like your name.Simple enough,but lacks depth,why have your chosen to use white for the shirt icon,this was an element that gave the design depth and you let it fade off.
So change the color.(I knw you be boss)but on a white background, the icon is invisible.Good effects on the second entry by the way.It's great to know that the rule of simplicity is being followed judiciously.

5.bigbabyboy(1st entry) : Your design is one of my favorite. Nice concept,very great idea.But too much icons, too much effects. I get the fact the a shoe,a back ,a model are all fashion items
But you cannot insert everything into the logo.Imagine an ecommerce store with over 500products, they cannot put everything within the logo.
I love the back concept which represents the A but that should be used seprately.

ADVICE 1: Leave bag,remove effect on ASL totally,no wire around the fonts

ADVICE 2: replace back with A and leave the model.

Then the french taglines the client did not ask for. comot am

dand9206
Fastlinkpro
sareal1
spafu
hopy68
nell4
Thawarplay

I have certain issues with the entries from the people above.


I salute everyone of you for your trials ,and really appreciate your efforts.

I am commenting generally because there are general errors while some erros are specific.

FONTS : I have hammered on this severally, you need to go outthere and get some professional fonts for your designs

EFFECTS: I will advise that you should avoid effects,don't use it at all. Do flat designs for now.

ICONS: One is enough, if you must use more than one, there must be a synergy.

nell4(11:57pm On Feb 09), you want to turn you logo to a market abii ....how many icons,what is your motive and are you still doing a logo.? you want to include all the apparels in the logo kwa? .Love youe second entry thou.


A fashion logo especially for apparallel should look good on fashion mockups, cloths,labels and all.

Rules of logo design, simplicity is no. one...Things client can easily remember and identify the company in the midst of crowd.

For those doing multi effects,multi colors and those inserting too many icons,Please have it in mind that clients will want to print the design on
business cards,letterheads and all...multicoloring will increase the cost,too many icons wont look well and effect won't come out well after pressing.

Thank you all.

Keep practising
Do research ,feed your mind with ideas from great designs scattered all over the web.

I'm still learning too, lets learn together.

oboy see rating -LOL-my design no dey top 5 self, abeg tell me issue with my own, i read about abstract logo from you ooo.. maybe i should stay clear from it.

meanwhile, help see this one i want submit to some one-- she has a store selling kids sturf,color is shw said,pink,green or wite

lizzycreations:
please everyone, when i installed this software, its telling me its an unregistered version that i have 30 days remaining......whats going on please, is it normal? dand9206
Fastlinkpro
sareal1
spafu
hopy68
nell4
Thawarplay
bestspoke

bestspoke:


you did not crack it...

bestspoke:


you did not crack it...

bestspoke:


you did not crack it...

lizzycreations:
and probably a 30seconds video, thanks for the help, i always have problem cracking softwares, i don't know it at all, i have the crack version of video scribe that im supposed to havce installed, the tin is just useless there, kindly help with this sothink of a thing.

bestspoke:


5.bigbabyboy(1st entry) : Your design is one of my favorite. Nice concept,very great idea.But too much icons, too much effects. I get the fact the a shoe,a back ,a model are all fashion items
But you cannot insert everything into the logo.Imagine an ecommerce store with over 500products, they cannot put everything within the logo.
I love the back concept which represents the A but that should be used seprately.

ADVICE 1: Leave bag,remove effect on ASL totally,no wire around the fonts

ADVICE 2: replace back with A and leave the model.

Then the french taglines the client did not ask for. comot am

bestspoke:


there is an instructional text doc. in the zip file...

i have explained the steps severally here too

Fastlinkpro:
oboy see rating -LOL-my design no dey top 5 self, abeg tell me issue with my own, i read about abstract logo from you ooo.. maybe i should stay clear from it. congrats to my colleague ,surestsam you too much, we shall get there.

meanwhile,every one pls help see this one i want submit to some one-- she has a store selling kids sturf,color is she said,pink,green or white, pleas design is welcome ooo from you guyz

Sadiq3051:



Lols thanks for taking note say I de on mute zone ooo.. I equally participate, kindly check the previous page @ Oga bestspoke might v skiped mine ....

Princepri:

sorry, but this logo is poor. why use extrude and bevel on a logo. keep it simple

lizzycreations:
please are these logos also made with sothink templates?

lizzycreations:
House please criticise, na my first work be this, though i joined una school late, abeg i don't know what mockup is and i don't know how to muck up this logo, abeg who fit teach me......i wan blow fiverrrrr.
Fastlinkpro
sareal1
spafu
hopy68
nell4
Thawarplay
bestspoke

nell4:
hmmm I don dey fear you ooo. fireeeeeee

lizzycreations:
everyone please assist me in cracking this sothink abeg, i have been trying, i'm just installing the trial version, please help! a 30 seconds video will do this please, have tried all my possible best.

lizzycreations:
House please criticise, na my first work be this, though i joined una school late, abeg i don't know what mockup is and i don't know how to muck up this logo, abeg who fit teach me......i wan blow fiverrrrr.
Fastlinkpro
sareal1
spafu
hopy68
nell4
Thawarplay
bestspoke