PamelB:
lol
But u mah eh, u love sex. You'll rake from morning till night only to end up like putty wen u see p*ssy. Diarisgod o

thats the effect of that thing call pvssy.. So intimidating

Hadampson:
Thanks bae. u see with ur response, am convinced dat future has a special place 4 us only if we cud trust each oda..

hmmmmm

at this point I'll like to say theblessedMan is a hell of a writer,mahn we love your style your flow,and your choice of words for now I'll rate you 99.9% creative impress me so that I'll give you 100%,thumbs up bruv.

TheBlessedMAN:
am sorry for causing this. My wife is givin me a hard time. I feel like running away.

lolz.... U don't have to run away oooo... That's ur cross so u have to carry it

divatolaz just check you up I must say you look stunning n pretty prettiest on nl no pun intended, can we link up

ololadeking:
divatolaz just check you up I must say you look stunning n pretty prettiest on nl no pun intended, can we link up

iffa hear.... Prettiest ko......u are flattering me abi

So e no get the day wen U no go lose ur sense if u see naked woman

divatolaz:
lolz.... U don't have to run away oooo... That's ur cross so u have to carry it

even the mighty Jesus did not carry his cross alone. He stil had help from a certain Joseph of Arimatea. So why cant u b my own Joseph? U knw?

TheBlessedMAN:
even the mighty Jesus did not carry his cross alone. He stil had help from a certain Joseph of Arimatea. So why cant u b my own Joseph? U knw?

I can't.... Carry it urself

ololadeking:
at this point I'll like to say theblessedMan is a hell of a writer,mahn we love your style your flow,and your choice of words for now I'll rate you 99.9% creative impress me so that I'll give you 100%,thumbs up bruv.

bro thanx 4 ur words of encouragement. Believe me. It reali helps

Hadampson:
I have away 4 a while now.. like where do i even start from, ur work is dope( when i said 'dope' i mean ur work is d dopest on nairaland) u r d best. i kept on reading diz story over nd over again buh cnt seem to get enuf of it. u rili deserve an award 4 diz. kudos to u nd more O.B.O to ur O.K.O
u r very talented
#stay blessed


Btw congrats on making fp. alamiendagash, spdazzy, wizsolzy, yewandequeen, xolocious, azeequeen, yusufibrahim, aminzy, ikombe, queenitee.. In DJ KHALID's voice.. Another one

I am here boo

Chumzypinky:
hahahaha, very funny. Wah do you mean? Arent you good?

ME am more than GOOD But, i cnt say d same for d guy she was referring to

wizsolzy:
So e no get the day wen U no go lose ur sense if u see naked woman

naked woman na d guy mumu button nd Mouth Action

phetto:

naked woman na d guy mumu button nd Mouth Action

Na b*ow j*b i write no b mouth action

Hadampson:
I have away 4 a while now.. like where do i even start from, ur work is dope( when i said 'dope' i mean ur work is d dopest on nairaland) u r d best. i kept on reading diz story over nd over again buh cnt seem to get enuf of it. u rili deserve an award 4 diz. kudos to u nd more O.B.O to ur O.K.O
u r very talented
#stay blessed


Btw congrats on making fp. alamiendagash, spdazzy, wizsolzy, yewandequeen, xolocious, azeequeen, yusufibrahim, aminzy, ikombe, queenitee.. In DJ KHALID's voice.. Another one

In Drake's Voice #Now_We're_Here!!!

keep it coming sango man you are doing great though i'm viewing your thread with a borrowed chinko phone..

divatolaz:
iffa hear.... Prettiest ko......u are flattering me abi

no o pretty diva,other girls be jealous cuz they want to be like you

PrinceOFprince:
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guys dnt just read and go o.. Drop sumting. Appreciate a great work

Since I was mentioned your literary skills are commendable for a beginner despite the grammatical errors. However, I must confess that I stopped reading right after the one night stand. How do I put this now? Personally, I prefer the stories that I read to have a nice tempo right before the climax which can be anything really. Your story seemed to have lots of these "highs" without any sufficient background or base to help me understand the characters better. It's like an avalanche of ideas all fighting to be read at same time. Think about it, first came the slap, then the girl on wheel chair, then the shooting scene and then seconds later literotica. My senses were overwhelmed and I lost interest cos I knew that deep down another catastrophe must occur to surpass the last. The scene I truly enjoyed was that on the spaghetti.. In a nutshell, your train of thoughts and ability to string words together is above par. Keep that up. But always remember KIS which simply means Keep It Simple. Would love to read your next work so please mention me when you write it up. Later

TheBlessedMAN:
thank u bro. May ur source of sperm neva run dry. Amen

ROFL

And urs too

ololadeking:


no o pretty diva,other girls be jealous cuz they want to be like you

uhmmm... Like mummy chumzypinky thou she is not a girl

TheBlessedMan so far so good you're trying like experienced olosho on war front. More mb to your hello, more pap to ur staff... In fact more strength to break records yet including oldies , disabled, underage,........... OLOSHO OOO. And finally God is your strength and motivator, carry on with the good work nothing do you. Rating 90% over 100.

TheBlessedMAN:
no mind uncle yorhmienerd. He dey lowkey o. Morning to u bro

Morning O Jewe Egbon, Eye's You Doing?

Bro Yorhmienerd Too Like Silent Stuff, Thank Gwahd I Don Exposed Him Left Yanch

son of shango, will you drop ur next thunder or we seize your license? nice one Bro

This is to inform the nairalanders particularly the literaturelander that another edition of nairaland get together party is here again. This time around, they are organizing a pool party scheduled on 22nd of april. The venue is De renaissance hotel, ikeja lagos.

Finally am Here!!! Son Of Thunder you are Too Good mehn, more Ink to your Pen Jare

phetto:

naked woman na d guy mumu button nd Mouth Action

Na wa

peacettw:




Since I was mentioned your literally skills are commendable for a beginner despite the grammatical errors. However, I must confess that I stopped reading right after the one night stand. How do I put this now? Personally, I prefer the stories that I read to have a nice tempo right before the climax which can be anything really. Your story seemed to have lots of these "highs" without any sufficient background or base to help me understand the characters better. It's like an avalanche of ideas all fighting to be read at same time. Think about it, first came the slap, then the girl on wheel chair, then the shooting scene and then seconds later literotica. My senses were overwhelmed and I lost interest cos I knew that deep down another catastrophe must occur to surpass the last. The scene I truly enjoyed was that on the spaghetti.. In a nutshell, your train of thoughts and ability to string words together is above par. Keep that up. But always remember KIS which simply means Keep It Simple. Would love to read your next work so please mention me when you write it up. Later

thanks very much... Its noted..buh just to clear things out, The slap scene was like an epilogue. The story began on the day of the visit. I expect the readers to have figured that out now. Am just trying to narrate the important events and happenings that took place before the day of the spaghetti and I really can't be digging into the unending events that were suppose to take place beyond. Buh like you've constructively criticised, am just a learner trying to write for my pleasure. And if others enjoy it too, then the better. The grammatical errors are my blunders...since I no get money to buy a dico. Thanx alot for being wise.

TheBlessedMAN:
thanks very much... Its noted..buh just to clear things out, The slap scene was like an epilogue. The story began on the day of the visit. I expect the readers to have figured that out now. Am just trying to narrate the important events and happenings that took place before the day of the spaghetti and I really can't be digging into the unending events that were suppose to take place beyond. Buh like you've constructively criticised, am just a learner trying to write for my pleasure. And if others enjoy it too, then the better. The grammatical errors are my blunders...since I no get money to buy a dico. Thanx alot for being wise.

It is okay dear. Kudos

hmmm!theblessedman,ur name don sum up everitin abt u.great piece of work.gbayi.

24. COUNTLESS.


We rested for a while before Adedoyin saw the necessity to order for our foods and drinks.

The food was brought after ten minutes of order and we ate quietly, but she couldn't stop staring seductively at me with every spoon to mouth action.

We finished eating and the table was cleared.


She told me to have a sit, that we need to discuss something important. I sat down on a chair not too far from the bed she was sitting on. I checked my wristwatch and it was past five already.


"are you going somewhere boy?" She asked. Obviously after seeing me check my watch.

"no..not atall..am fully yours today." I replied smiling.

Her phone started ringing, she reached for it and answered. She spoke with the caller for a while and dropped the phone.

She apologised for the calls interruption and I told her its nothing.


"thanks hon...." she said and paused "so you know, I heard about what happened at the hotel. Care to tell me how it happened?" she said inquisitively.

The question nearly caught me off guard but I quickly composed myself by throwing her a charming smile.


"eerm..its just that, I drank too much and I couldn't find my way back to the room we lodged in. I ended up sleeping half nak3d in an open place" I elusively explained.

"oh! Is that so? But where was Beatrice when all this happened? She should have looked out for you instead of abandoning you to take care of yourself!"


Although she tried hard to hide it, but I could see the hypocrisy in her words and facial expression.

"actually, Beatrice was oblivious to my situation, because she was already asleep when it happened." I explained "But wait, How did you know Beatrice?" I questioned suddenly.


"like seriously? Everybody knows Beatrice" She replied laughing.


"hmmmm...ok. That's what really happened, and thats also the reason why I couldn't call you at that time. Am sorry." I pleaded.


"Oh no, you really don't have to. You know, I even went to ask Beatrice on that night if I could speak to you, but she strictly said you are off limits, that was why I had to resort to using the waitress to pass my message to you." She said conclusively.

'hmmm. Message well receive.' I thought


"now that am finally here, what's next?" I asked.


She adjusted a bit and spoke. "after that fvck we had, am already convinced about you and I want you to be my regular and steady fvcker. In simpler terms, You service me well and I pay you well. Fair deal. Isn't it?" she asked.

"hmmm! That sounds better, but the service is not what am worried about, but the payment...what do you propose?"

"you make it sound as if you are not going to enjoy it as well, but you don't have to worry about money, my dead husband left me enough life insurance and assets. But for the sake of transparency, let me start by giving you this..." she reached for her bag and brought out her phone and began to type. "tell me your bank details."

I gave her my account details and after 3mins I got an alert on my phone. I brought it out from my pockets and checked the message. She just sent me a whooping sum of one hundred and fifty thousand naira. Life can't get any better than this. Can it?


"thats 150k, lets start with that and I assure you, the payment will only get better once the service also gets better." She said conclusively.

I smiled and returned the phone to my pocket. She walked up to me and drag me to the bed.

"your service starts now sugarboy..you have to fvck my brains out...now!" she ordered and I complied with a renewed vigor now that money is involved.


****

We left the hotel at 6.30pm, and she dropped me off at lafenwa, with the promise of calling me later to inform me of our future schedules.


I decided to take a bike to Gtbank at FUNAAB to withdraw 50k from the ATM.

While waiting for a bike beside the road, I dialed Jide's number. He picked at the first ring.

"Before you say anything, just know that, am sorry for not picking your calls and right now...am..." he didn't let me finish before he cuts in.


"Beatrice had told me everything!. You really fvckd up Darous, how can you spoil our business like that? You fall my hand seriously." He sounded very upset.


"I know say I fvck up, buh you no even hear my side of the story, how can you judge me with what a stranger said to you?" I queried.


"mumu, that stranger can buy you and your shango without working up a single sweat and which kind side of story you wan tell me? Will it end up with my money?...You don fvck up gan. You know how much we suppose collect from her? Eh? You really fvck up big time!." He retorted angrily.

"what if I just send you your own share, right now, what will you say? Eh?" I questioned.

"na me go happy pass for nija, but as you don fvck up, na you mumu pas. Idiot boy. I dey vex for you gan" he said.

"ok. If thats the case, expect your share in the next one hour." With that I ended the call.

I waved down a bike and headed to FUNAAB to withdraw the cash.

Shango be praise!


TBC

zirizee:
hmmm!theblessedman,ur name don sum up everitin abt u.great piece of work.gbayi.

thankz bro... I declare u immune to thunder!