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The Last 12 Hours (A Short Romance Mystery Story By Kayode Odusanya) / Moon Walker (fantasy, Mystery, Supernatural) Written By: Onyeneke Abel / From Nigeria With Love: Part 3 (A Romance Mystery Story By Kayode Odusanya) (1) (2) (3) (4)
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Kimkardashain(f): 4:59pm On Jul 02, 2017|
cyber5:tnk u and welcme
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by cyber5(m): 5:05pm On Jul 02, 2017|
when are you updating ma
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Kimkardashain(f): 5:15pm On Jul 02, 2017|
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by stephenGee12(m): 5:37pm On Jul 02, 2017|
What is even dat ur name vectormike abi shud I say carrier of diseasesmike
Nobody asked you to comment forget that we are in the new month oooo.
Idiot, even the name self would let u knw he is a fool of his own caliber.
Rubbish idiat. Getout of here if u don't have anything to do or say. Or better still go and tap sense.
Be gone you fool. I don't have time to share E-words with you. Mention back at ur own peril.
Hadampson, kimberlywest, evajael, meneski, wizsolzy, ikombe, theblessedman, gtin, souloho19, boffinjay, hormobolanle abeg una no see the idiot of a human being
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by stephenGee12(m): 5:39pm On Jul 02, 2017|
Lol...laff wan kill me for where I dey.
Babe u wicked oooo. Don't minthe fool that calls homself carrierofdiseasesmike
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Kimkardashain(f): 6:03pm On Jul 02, 2017|
stephenGee12:guys jst leave d bull dog, their problm is dat i used sleepy hollow town, wats d deal iffa use d name, isnt fiction? didnt i make it clear? and d oda guys is sayin dat irving is going to sue me, jeez ,
for real? sue me?
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Kimkardashain(f): 6:18pm On Jul 02, 2017|
Juliet got to the woods and parked her car,she sniffed back a tear and got down,glancing at her watch its already past 10 am,she smirked,and chuckled to herself,she will teach her fiance a big lesson,so he can do her wish,she spread her gown to cover her legs and sat down,and brought out her phone
he stood at a not too far distance,watching her as she throw her head back in laughter,he rummaged through his bag aod brought out the syringe,he raise it up and smiled through the eyes,
tasha sat down on the long benche in the sheriffs office and flip through her phone barely some days and she is already missing rivensisle,she watched as ramsey exchange words with the sheriff,his back to her, even at that she could see his muscles through the revealing white polo that he wore,she found herself fantasizing how it would feel like to touch those sexy muscles,too caught up in her thoughts she didnt hear when ramsey called her to come over,she blinked and got up rubbing her palms together she walked over to him
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|Re: Fear (Mystery) by janeade(f): 6:27pm On Jul 02, 2017|
Kimkardashain:tanks for not giving up....
pls Kim k..can u make it long..d episodes are too short....tanks
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Kimkardashain(f): 6:33pm On Jul 02, 2017|
Juliet ended the call and got up time to leave she said to herself,she bent to smoothen the rumples in her gown,he grabbed her shoulders and juliet shouted out in fright,
"you scared me mr,who are you? "she said breathlessly
he looked at her the young lady looked frightened,best to put her out of the misery,but first he needed to play along with her
"oh am sorry miss,i obviously was caught off by the growling of a wild bear," he watch her face as he spoke,the lady didnt show a sign of fear,he continued"aint you scared of bear?"he asked her
"am not....am not scared,...i need to go now,it was nice talking to you"she got up and made to leave and he drew her back,
"i dont think so,you need to fear bears" he said as he jabbed the syringe into her arm,
stiffling her painful cries he scoop her into hands to his car,he laid he down at the back and drove out,whistling to himself,
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|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Kimkardashain(f): 6:37pm On Jul 02, 2017|
janeade:i will hum,just wantd to appreciate u guys,main update will cum tomw
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by EvaJael(f): 7:40pm On Jul 02, 2017|
Kimkardashain:Yaaaayyyyy,I'm bringing wine
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by EvaJael(f): 7:41pm On Jul 02, 2017|
stephenGee12:Lol....kimberlywest,come and make ur hubby calm down
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Toyin223(f): 8:24pm On Jul 02, 2017|
GREAT 1 Sister
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Hadampson(m): 8:25pm On Jul 02, 2017|
Calm down bro.. he don't worth ur time. Like doris would say PATIENCE IS A GREAT VIRTUE. Exercise patience please
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Kimkardashain(f): 8:27pm On Jul 02, 2017|
Toyin223:tnk u lve
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by graphicsdelight(f): 9:53pm On Jul 02, 2017|
Hehe. Good for you, Juliet.
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Darkcrisp(f): 10:41pm On Jul 02, 2017|
Wow. I guess another body will soon be found. Nice cliffhanger.
Thanks for the update (:
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by wizsolzy(m): 5:33am On Jul 03, 2017|
stephenGee12:... leave am make ah flog am
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Emperor380(m): 6:14am On Jul 03, 2017|
Nice one ma...thank you for continuing. Don't mind that hater pls, I think my dad and mum have just taught him lessons.
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Lexxyla: 7:15am On Jul 03, 2017|
Nice storyline kim. Stop giving attention to haters. Their hatred is just a form of their acceptance of your being better than them and should serve only to encourage you on the need to improve on some few obvious lapses of yours.
You are still doing great considering the fact that you are not a writer. Not so many people who just write for fun can summon the courage to start a project like you did.
Divepen1 has highlighted the things you need to improve on. It will help you build your skill and boost your rating here on nairaland. You might also want to adopt Lleigh's (that girl ehn) approach of mentioning your readers on every update, dem no go get choice than to comment.
Let me go look for somewhere to buy popcorn and beer. I dey follow.
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|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Lleigh(f): 7:22am On Jul 03, 2017|
Lexxyla thanks for telling me off I was only doing what I saw others do. Believe I was scratching my head why people were not reading it or commenting.
As I said Kim if you like writing continue, it will help you improve.
Off for some tea
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|Re: Fear (Mystery) by KimberlyWest(f): 7:24am On Jul 03, 2017|
Hubby, calm down.
Don't mind this kind of people.
If he looked half as good as Segun Arinze, his life would have been better.
Calm down dearie.
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by KimberlyWest(f): 7:26am On Jul 03, 2017|
EvaJael:Already on it, sis.
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Kimkardashain(f): 7:37am On Jul 03, 2017|
tnks guys, note taken, where is mhizgap,marianneada,queenitee and Akinwale14?
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Maybelconor: 8:00am On Jul 03, 2017|
Awww I'm sorry, I'm also guilty of this. for the people that encourged kim, thank you
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Kimkardashain(f): 8:22am On Jul 03, 2017|
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by mhizgap(f): 11:30am On Jul 03, 2017|
I went to get chicken and chips For you when I saw the killer injecting some stuff into Juliet.
I had to run for my precious life and am still running.
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Kimkardashain(f): 1:05pm On Jul 03, 2017|
mhizgap:hahaha,chai see run oya cum bk,he's not pursuin u yet,both you and kimberlywest
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Kimkardashain(f): 1:20pm On Jul 03, 2017|
"miss gilmore...." rick began
"tasha pls....."she cut in
"ok tasha,i understand that you want to see your dad,but he's still in the lab,so you...uh will have to wait....sometime around 4pm..." rick said
"she already knows that rick,go straight to the damn point..."ramsey cut in angrily,
"don't you dare shut me up again,ramsey baker,you dad is paying for his crimes...so deal with it" rick shouted at him flashing him his teeth,ramsey clenched his fist together and shot him an angry look,tasha's eyes darted between the two men,ramsey look like he wants to rip rick apart,and rick appeared to be unaware of the fact,
"ehm,pls may i see mr baker?.......i have some questions that require an urgent answer " she said bridging the cold stares,
"and what question and answer is that?" rick asked her, flipping through the thick note on the table
"best to hear it all once" tasha replied,and began moving towards the cell
rick stared after her and got up immediately,elbowing ramsey out of the way.
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|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Kimkardashain(f): 1:34pm On Jul 03, 2017|
She woke up feeling nubbed,her neck was stiffed ,and she couldn't feel her fingers,how long has she been here? and why is she in an operating room,she clenched her teeth together and tried shouting but no sound could come out,just then she heard the sound of boots seconds before the door was opened,
she angled her head towards the other side and look up at him,a tiny gasped escaped her mouth as she saw who her abducter is,
"welcome back sunshine,i know what is going through your mind right now....we shall begin the ritual by 4pm,that way you will have time to connect with your sister,......incase you are thinking of shouting,..." he stiffled a wicked chuckle and continue"dont bother cos you are in the middle of nowhere,and nobody can hear you,so enjoy your last hour alive" he ended throwing his hat back and exploding in laughter,he walked through the door and shut it,leaving her soaked in her own tears,she began regreting trying to play the stupid trick on her fiance,now she's never going to leave
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|Re: Fear (Mystery) by PoliticalThuG(m): 1:38pm On Jul 03, 2017|
When am i gonna see a good story to read on nairaland? Mtchwwwwww
|Re: Fear (Mystery) by Kimkardashain(f): 1:39pm On Jul 03, 2017|
Evajael, Lleigh, Divepen1, Darkcrisp, mhizgap,kimberlywest,marianneada,queenitee,surestG,stephenGee12,Lexxyla, mabelconor,Emperor380,pamelB,
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