officialflex:
chai aunty angel thank you oooo, this tory too sweet dieeee

Kimkardashain:
wat d hell is wrong wit soph anyway, y must she be dis stupid?
wat type of useless love is dis? it isn't love bt stupidity...how can she allow dis devil to always belittle her dis way?
am strting to hate her

honourable356:


What a creative brain... I am with you!

honourable356:
Rose Akpabio aka Angelsss... *smiles*... I never got an invite but I happen to stumble upon it and ..

Was I surprised? Nay
Awed? Nay
Shocked? nay
Excited? Yea
Impressed? Yea
Entertained? Yea
Educative? Yea

Ladies and gentlemen, you are undoubtedly reading from the Queen of short stories here on Nairaland at the moment.

This is clearly not the work of an Amateur!!!

Ever read her previous stories? absolutely ALL were a HIT.
Her ability to construct words together were top notch..
Well, well I can't say more than these else some audience might thinks I am merely exaggerating or somehow related to her.

I am not in a strong position to Critically criticize this story having never had a sister or grew up with one.

But in a BOYS world, no matter how fond a senior is to his junior brother, no matter how much he loves the said junior, the said junior can't have the audacity to do what Sophia sister is doing and get away with it especially the last incident... IMPOSSIBLE!!!! or is it that apart from being more beautiful,she is also physically stronger than her elder sister for her to be this intimidated

Well like I said, I am not in the best position to ascertain such situations given my growing up from boy to man...

Well, well, it is a ladies things or guys that grew up surrounded by girls..


Comments like "Angelsss update nah",
Thanks for the updates... etc just make me laugh... what are audience for?? discuss, debate, argue constructively, criticism etc... these are what make the place lively, inspire the writer or motivate him or her.. more importantly EDUCATE him or her with the audience included.

sigh...

The Queen of short captivating stories... that is what I have come to know you for.

Never a dull moment reading her stories.

What a creative brain... I am with you!

Angelsss:


Very sweet...thanks so much dear...I didn't forget u...I just forgot the numbers that followed ur name.
You just made a point. We should discuss on the characters more...
I am glad you all like the story...
I know you all expect Sophia to stand up for herself ...well...
what if this is based on a true life story?
what if they are very weak people like Sophia?

Kimkardashain:

NO! real life or fiction. soph nids 2 stand up 4 herslf, dat witch has bitten more dan she can chew. soph shud knw dat heaven cnt help her to kip lekan if she does nt bracen up.....she nids to unleash her own demon,
am meant to undastnd by my wican teacher dat ervy human has angels and innate demons.

Kimkardashain:

NO! real life or fiction. soph nids 2 stand up 4 herslf, dat witch has bitten more dan she can chew. soph shud knw dat heaven cnt help her to kip lekan if she does nt bracen up.....she nids to unleash her own demon,
am meant to undastnd by my wican teacher dat ervy human has angels and innate demons.

CRaIziee:

hmmm... Going with ur signature... I think I need an Iphone...

For a start though.. lol

honourable356:
....For a start?? You do have an expensive taste then but you know, Barbie would have asked for a Jeep?
Got the humour though...

Angelsss:


Very sweet...thanks so much dear...I didn't forget u...I just forgot the numbers that followed ur name.
You just made a point. We should discuss on the characters more...
I am glad you all like the story...
I know you all expect Sophia to stand up for herself ...well...
what if this is based on a true life story?
what if they are very weak people like Sophia?

honourable356:
If such a weak ladies exist, then I have never come across one.
A junior sister ordering her elder sister in such a manner that she even cried makes me wonder if such a thing happens in a girl world.

But I tell you this most solemnly... this NEVER happens in a boys world unless they are fathered by different man or has different mother.

well, here in this story I just met a weak character in your imagination (smiles). Sophia is indeed a wuss now but I see her overcoming it and becomes confident... that is the direction your story is showing me at the moment which obviously is gonna make this story even more interesting.

I keep on watching from a distance as things unfold.

crislyn:

I've never met such a weak character in my world, i don't know of others. Some girls are actually gullible but not to this Sophie's extent...you have a point.