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Tale Of The Walls by LifeofEl(m): 12:41am On May 08, 2019 |
In a journey stuck in four walls Where egos and pride meet For a understanding at first, an understanding To determine who deserves to be at the top. Ego starts the journey The journey of friendship and love Broken walls and acceptance are shown Till inferiority shows up and joins up. The tale of four walls Where bonds and love are made Bonds that get broken overtime with ego All in a closed and open wall. A wall that unveils real characters Characters kept in solitude Unleashed with sudden outburst of freedom Where IFUNAYA becomes IFY. All is a race in the first year Before priorities becomes a thing of the past A wall that harbors betrayals, backbites and disappointments Till friends become enemies And enemies friends. A wall that brings tears without cane In a wall where looks are deceiving Lessons learnt in a wall A wall that isn’t a wall without its perks. ©ADEBAYODANIELDAMILOLA2019 |
Re: Tale Of The Walls by Pusyiter(m): 5:40pm On May 08, 2019 |
Good Stanza No rhythm No rhyme scheme Thematic analysis will be difficult to ascertain However, good try and write up |
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