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Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 2:32pm On Sep 23, 2021
cassbeat:
Happy birthday eyeneka....
More life, more blessings...[color=#000099][/color]
Thanks bro..

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Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 10:34pm On Sep 23, 2021
Nuel45:
Happy birthday bruh
Wish you long life and prosperity
Thanks bro..
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 10:35pm On Sep 23, 2021
Adeola25:
Frost's Father is a funny man, calling his son in-law an elephant. Thanks for the update and happy a prosperous birthday llnp. Igba odun, odun kan ni oo.
Much gratitude..
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Kentuforchrist(m): 12:03pm On Sep 24, 2021
Happy birthday bro sorry I missed it na data no make me come online like before......no vez God go do am for u wella

Enjoy ur day boss
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Whiydhee(m): 11:24am On Sep 25, 2021
Noblejohn32:
•••
Twenty eight minutes later, I was served a mouth watering local delicacy.
Ekpankukwo.

After the dish, I washed it down with a jug of fresh tapped palm wine.

"My son, I want to appreciate your efforts for finding time to visit us.." My Dad said, he was on his third jug of palm wine.

"It's okay Dad...it's my responsibility!"

"What is your responsibility?" He threw what seemed like a senseless question to me.

"To visit you people na" I replied.

He deadpanned, "Because you visited us today doesn't make it your responsibility".

" So, what is my responsibility then?" I asked.

"Hmmm.." He drained another jug of palm wine.
"You are my only child that have made me smile in days...look at what you brought. At least I wouldn't worry about food for the next six month. Your Elder Sister...Flora who claims she is married have never visited here with a cup of garri. Not as if I'm interested in it but at least...I told that girl not to marry that antelope headed.."

"Dad it's okay!" I chided. My Dad was always fond of changing sides immediately the situation favours or disfavours him.
I'm pretty sure if my sister should show up tomorrow with a plate of chicken, my dad will say his other children are good for nothing because they couldn't show up with same.

"Mark, do you know that your sister...Flora is a punching bag?" Dad asked.

"How?" I asked confused.

"You are very, very stupid for asking me how?"

"Ahh.."

"You mean if I die today, that means you won't be able to run this family.
See, it's not all about wearing chain and barbing okpoto haircut. It's simple sense of family running."

Dad was pissing me off, "last time I called her, she told me that everything is fine".

" And you believed, you see..on the scale of one to ninety, your stupidity is eighty six. Last time your sister visited, her mouth was like 1996 Peugeot fender".

"Dad, calm down...what do you mean?"

"What you mean is what I mean? That husband of your sister has been beating your sister. He has been using your sister's face to learn punching".

" Dad you mean your son in-law has been beat..."

"If you were not the son I like, I would have just forget the back of my hand on your teeth. Who are you calling my son-in-law? The only son in law I have is Udoka's male dog that impregnated my female dog."

My Father was truly loosing it.

"But Dad, have you tried to resolve the problem?"

"Why should I, am I a lawyer. That's why I sent you to school, but instead for you to go to school, you failed literature eight times in WAEC".

" Jesus! I wasn't an art student".

"What were you, commercial? By the way...the boy has been saying that my daughter isn't good on bed".

My mouth hung open.

" I have asked your mother and her daughters what it means but they don't have an idea. What does it mean to be bad on the bed?" He asked.

I wanted to feign ignorance but I decided to come out clean, "it means she isn't sexually active".

My Dad jumped up and spoke in tongues.

"Sexually active ko....sexually strong ni...you mean he wants my daughter to be a porn star. The daughter I trained, he wants my daughter to be throwing football stunt and he will be kapashing her every corner. He wants to spoil my daughter.."

Dad took it really personal.

"Koko.." My mum called from the backyard, "Allow my son to rest".

" Allow your son to rest? No one will rest until this battle is over...Lemme go and change up...we are going to that house now!".

I wonder what I've gotten myself into.
My cabman took us to my sister's residence at ikotabasi.
All through the ride, my Dad kept on shouting like a mentally deranged man.

When we arrived, he jumped out of the car and headed straight to the apartment.
Ready for a fight.
Without knocking, he barged in.

"Father inlaw.." My Sister's hubby called out.
He was eating on the dinner table.

"Father inlaw..." He called.

"It is your biological father that is your father in law! Elephant!!" Dad barked.

tbc..


Adeola25 and thousands of fans out there,
Put smiles on the birthday boy's face...
Mfon John David..
3106001412..
First Bank!








Happy Belated Birthday BRO, waiting for next update sir we dey anticipate am ooo

God bless you and more ink to your pen for this massive story you are giving here.
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 9:55pm On Sep 27, 2021
New Episodes loading...

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Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Whiydhee(m): 10:49am On Sep 28, 2021
Noblejohn32:
New Episodes loading...


Waiting bro keep the good work on
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Kentuforchrist(m): 11:26pm On Sep 28, 2021
We dea wait
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 5:47am On Sep 29, 2021
Sorry for the delay in updates, device wahala...
Í'm working on something, hopefully...we will have something long to read before weekend.

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Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 5:07am On Sep 30, 2021
•••
Mr. Chris was shocked at the outburst.

"Flora...come and see your father!" He called.

"I didn't come for Flora, I came for you. Do you know that you are a righteous fool?" Dad screamed.

I just moved gently to an adjourning settee and sat, praying that my Dad shouldn't do something stupid.

"Father, what have I done?" He asked.

"You have done many things...you are a donkey. A castrated human dog. An embarrassment to the generation of Isaachar. You are a bullock. F√ck you! F√ck you! You are an upgraded version of .."

"Daddy",my sister rushed out of the room. " it hasn't come to this na?"

"It hasn't come to what? See the object you married...are you happy the way he's been treating you? Anthony Joshua is earning millions for fighting, how much has your house-goat earned from beating you?" Dad screamed.

Mr. Chris couldn't bear the insult, he washed his hands in the sink and made to move but my Dad pushed him.

"If you deh walk out on me, heaven will walk out of you. You are a stray sperm".

My sister pleaded with me to calm Dad down but I was enjoying the TV show despite the screams.

" In law, I won't stand here and watch you insult my personality just because I married your daughter. In my marriage, I don't need a third party" Mr. Chris said.

"You are as stupid as they say..see your mouth like third party. I will uproot you one day, I will shoot you with a gun. The very day your hand touches my daughter...you will die that day. Because I will hire demons to.."

He pushed my father out of his path and moved out.

Flora stood still with tears in her eyes, "Daddy, I'm so disappointed in you..".
She rushed into an inner room.

Dad and I exchanged glances.

" Between my daughter and son-in-law, who is more stupid?" Dad asked.

"The two both of them" I replied.

Tbc...

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Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by danielsempire2: 12:16pm On Sep 30, 2021
Following quietly bro. Blood in the ring and Money ain’t loyal, I don't know which one is more fast paced and thrilling. I salute you guys
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Kentuforchrist(m): 8:50am On Oct 01, 2021
It short na.....happy new month everyone...
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by legendburna: 12:08pm On Oct 01, 2021
Updates please!! cry
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Kentuforchrist(m): 5:18pm On Oct 02, 2021
John wetin dea sup na
Abeg u must finish this blood in the ring ookk
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 7:24am On Oct 03, 2021
Most nairalanders are funny..
Yesterday, I received bashing from like three different fans.
Not that I purposely refused to update...
I really hate the situation of starting a story and unable to keep it up.
My device is really a setback,I'm using a crappy itel and we all know that brand has a weak processor.
I can't type up to two hundred words without the phone freezing.

Blood in the Ring will continue and I mean it!!!

I pray I get a better device soonest!!!

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Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by dat9jaguy(m): 7:17pm On Oct 14, 2021
Noblejohn32:
Most nairalanders are funny..
Yesterday, I received bashing from like three different fans.
Not that I purposely refused to update...
I really hate the situation of starting a story and unable to keep it up.
My device is really a setback,I'm using a crappy itel and we all know that brand has a weak processor.
I can't type up to two hundred words without the phone freezing.

Blood in the Ring will continue and I mean it!!!

I pray I get a better device soonest!!!


Bros your phone never unfreeze since?

Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Kentuforchrist(m): 4:12am On Oct 15, 2021
Noblejohn32:
Most nairalanders are funny..
Yesterday, I received bashing from like three different fans.
Not that I purposely refused to update...
I really hate the situation of starting a story and unable to keep it up.
My device is really a setback,I'm using a crappy itel and we all know that brand has a weak processor.
I can't type up to two hundred words without the phone freezing.bro how far na

Blood in the Ring will continue and I mean it!!!

I pray I get a better device soonest!!!
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Carterj007(m): 4:34am On Oct 18, 2021
Thanks for the updates. I really enjoy your story. Please when will you continue Desire 2?
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Dollish(f): 12:47pm On Oct 25, 2021
Carterj007:
Thanks for the updates. I really enjoy your story. Please when will you continue Desire 2?
The story is becoming stale no sauce again. The delay in update kills the zeal.
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 12:14pm On Oct 27, 2021
Dollish:
The story is becoming stale no sauce again. The delay in update kills the zeal.
I'm really sorry for the delay..
You my might think I'm purposefully delaying...Nah!!!
I've been managing my device to write but it isn't working out well.
My phone hangs like mad...i've changed battery like twice now!

Imagine writing and the phone shuts down!!!

I'm tryna see if I can get a new one..Once that's done, the story will pickup!!!
Trust me on that!!!

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Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Dollish(f): 1:10pm On Oct 27, 2021
Noblejohn32:

I'm really sorry for the delay..
You my might think I'm purposefully delaying...Nah!!!
I've been managing my device to write but it isn't working out well.
My phone hangs like mad...i've changed battery like twice now!

Imagine writing and the phone shuts down!!!

I'm tryna see if I can get a new one..Once that's done, the story will pickup!!!
Trust me on that!!!
Ok dear I understand now meanwhile it's worth the wait just that am anxious nothing more
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Kentuforchrist(m): 10:21am On Oct 30, 2021
To my disappointment....I never find any update again

John even if na next year u go complete am at least try they let us know.....

Almost every nairaland stories are not completed na wa oooo
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Itachi23: 11:14pm On Oct 30, 2021
Kentuforchrist:
To my disappointment....I never find any update again

John even if na next year u go complete am at least try they let us know.....

Almost every nairaland stories are not completed na wa oooo
Everyday I dey slide enter like snake for update on on blood in the ring, I don't tire men, na season novel?

Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Kentuforchrist(m): 10:25am On Oct 31, 2021
Itachi23:

Everyday I dey slide enter like snake for update on on blood in the ring, I don't tire men, na season novel?
as in I don wait tire.....make we dea see sha
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 7:33pm On Nov 03, 2021
Nairalanders, 60k can actually get me a device and solve little of my problems...

Please someone should help out...please!!! I really don't wanna keep you guys in suspense...please
..please...

Please....

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Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 11:44pm On Nov 13, 2021
Good day everyone...
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 6:48pm On Dec 10, 2021
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Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by hotswagg12: 8:23pm On Dec 10, 2021
Sorry for your loss man and may God continue to strengthen you and yours.
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Adeolaeniola(m): 8:45pm On Dec 10, 2021
Sorry for your loss bro
Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Noblejohn32(m): 5:52pm On Dec 11, 2021
hotswagg12:
Sorry for your loss man and may God continue to strengthen you and yours.
Thanks..

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Re: "Blood In The Ring" A Crime Thriller By John Mfon. by Seunfunmi18(m): 6:42pm On Dec 11, 2021
Noblejohn32:
Wow...
It's months and counting, no updates!!!

I guess my complains are too much..
I complained about my device giving me issues...and i have still not gotten a device because of SAPA...
To crown the suffering, i lost my mum at a young age on the 30th of November.

Gosh!!! The pains and anguish is outta this world.

But no matter what my story will still continue despite the setback.
It seems the whole suffering of the globe is being pushed on my head..

Like I said earlier, I'm still trying to source funds to get a good device..

I could go a long way with monetary support...You guys can help out..
Anything is appreciated!!!

Please bear with me and apologies for the delay!!!!

So sorry for your loss bro.
Accept my condolences

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