Poetry is not unlike a painting, sometimes people see more than the author has in mind.
As a poet, I sought after themes in my early writings, later on it progressed to more complex weaving of images using words that have some form of ambiguity and vagueness. Nothing absolutely defined.
Have you ever had a line float into your head and you felt you could use it more powerfully? ever created a powerful rhyme but can't seem to find flesh immediately for it's skeletal form?

Here's an example of such a line:

With one click
They complete the trick!

I absolutely don't know what this line mean yet I am the inspirator/creator. I believe it will reveal itself at a future date.

yahoo boys, aka 419?

sorry, i couldnt resist!

lmao u are a cracker.

tpia:
I can see a connection there.

Here's another one:
"Of no fixed address
Always conscious of arrest"

Have a go at this.

dodging immigration?


couldnt resist that one either!

no offence to anyone- i always feel pain for anybody in this situation. Seriously.


could also be an escaped felon, as described by a bounty hunter.

dodging immigration?


couldnt resist that one either!

no offence to anyone- i always feel pain for anybody in this situation. Seriously.


could also be an escaped felon, as described by a bounty hunter.

Good. Applies mostly to those who think the law is a nuisance.

"Going around the bend
A tragedy was acquired"

"Going around the bend
A tragedy was acquired"

The imagery here is that of a crash. Does this have a "hypocritic" meaning?

slut/gay sleeping around catches aids

also sounds like someone going off the deep end ( crazy).

Thanks .

"man on fire
heightened awareness
sorrowful tears, shed the people"

a prophet, visionary or revolutionary who opens people's eyes and makes them see reality in a whole new light.

like fela.

a radical.

k0be:

Thanks .

"man on fire
heightened awareness
sorrowful tears, shed the people"

Sounds like a man consumed by some passion. An inspiration to his people.Tragedy has befallen him and the people are grieving. They have lost an asset.

What is this one saying?
[center]"My vision is clouded
It's must be rainy season in my head"[/center]

k0be:

Thanks .

"man on fire
heightened awareness
sorrowful tears, shed the people"

like a seung-hui, cho shooting up a school to put people in horror
or terorism like 9/11
or the oklahoma city bombing.
in short deranged man on a shooting spree

k0be:

like a seung-hui, cho shooting up a school to put people in horror
or terorism like 9/11
or the oklahoma city bombing.
in short deranged man on a shooting spree

"Man firing" is more like it.
"Man on fire" portrays the picture of a man being consumed by passion or a strong emotion. Fire burns and releases a lot of energy.
Can't see how a deranged man on a shooting spree can be said to be "on fire".At least not from his gun.

Iwerebor:

What is this one saying?
[center]"My vision is clouded
It's must be rainy season in my head"[/center]

speaks of turmoil, depression.

crying.

iwerebor how bout suicide bombers

k0be:

iwerebor how bout suicide bombers

Maybe kobe. That's a phenomenon I hear of only from a distance.

tpia:

speaks of turmoil, depression.

crying.

Good.