Hello, this is actually my very first post here, but I hope it won't be the last, I have a few poems that I want critqued,and then, does anyone know what it cost to publish poetry in Nigeria
Check this out and tell me what you think

You are my world, you are my life
My future hope, you are my promise of a better tomorrow
I look at you and thank the heavens
For bringing you my way
My life before you was void, empty of meaning
Now I have something to live for
Never have I felt a love so strong
It brings tears to my eyes
Never have I beheld such an angelic face
Sometimes I still believe I'm in a dream
A dream from which I never want to wake
This love I have in my heart, I give it all to you,
Take it, and make it a part of you, forever

Is this any good Please, I need answers

It's pretty good, but I feel it could do with some improvements. I feel its needs a bit more structure like in stanzas and a bit of imagery but I like the fact that u seem to write from ur heart.
Gdluck wit ur writing

I like this. Was it specially written for some1?

Yes, twas written for my little daughter

Do you mind if i work on your poem?

Let's talk on 07064344282

Cool. However, it stands to reason that a poem with dull imagery, and not spiced with a string of figurative language will rather be ineffectual. Keep it up!