Sometimes i wonder, why im so fond of you

I've seen so many faces and met so many people

But none quite like you

Your face is not the most beautiful i have seen

But definitely the most stunning

Your voice is not the sweetest i've heard

But definitely the most alluring

Maybe its your smile which brightens me up

Maybe its When you talk that i wish you'd never stop

Maybe its When i hear your voice & i feel like a baby

Wanting that voice to be near all the time

Maybe its When i see your smile & i feel a warm glow from the deepest part of me

Making me come alive like the dawning of a new day

I can't really tell

I don't really understand

But i can tell it happens when you come around

And i want you to come some more

There are a thousand and one reasons people give for the things they do

But i just can't explain why i'm so fond of you

This is just beautiful. I love it.

Your face is not the most beautiful i have seen

But definitely the most stunning

Your voice is not the sweetest i've heard

But definitely the most alluring

.

That's my favorite part. I Love that part.

thanks Hot-angel
if feels good to know that a gurl actually appreciates that poem

i have another one
it's called "The Inner Man"

check it out
hope you like it

Really captivating.
Well done!!

Thanks man

/Your face is not the most beautiful i have seen

But definitely the most stunning

Your voice is not the sweetest i've heard

But definitely the most alluring/

/Your voice is not the sweetest i've heard

But definitely the most alluring

Maybe its your smile which brightens me up/

Nice, really nice. captures the feel and texture of the fabric of love.

and the "ordinary everyday" simplicity of tone makes it click home instantly,

personally, reminds me of my cutie,

a lovely piece really, keep it up bro!

Thanks men

wow it so lovley, i really love it and it really something that happens, just felt like u talking about me

Sean25:

There are a thousand and one reasons people give for the things they do

But i just can't explain why i'm so fond of you

Fantastic poem! Can i borrow it for use when i propose?

No Problem bro
i'm sure lots of people have already borrowed it without my permission
pls go ahead

The simplicity of it is absolutely true, pure & enchantling stirring!
smacks of an intense feeling from well within & the presentation is near perfection!

This is really nice man. I like it. It's really really nice.

In fact that was amazing and fantastic.I really do appreciate you man for such poem that is so mind glowing and touching.

@ poster,
this is a beautiful poem, but i could swear i have read the exact poem (with same words) somewhere online. you might wanna check if they have copyrighted your work. and sure enough, i read it from one of the numerous naija websites online. kudos!

guys do any one have any ideal to my request

I love poems like this, very romantic

But I must confess

On reading the 1st few lines i almost dismissed the credibility of its originality.

Simply because it reminded me of Teddy Pendergrass's "You're my latest, my greatest inspiration" ( an oh so lovely piece)

On further reading, i was quickly enraptured in a daydream right in my office

with a beautiful Nigerian lady with an alluring ambience and a bodacious curve

Talk of wishful wanting, till i spilled my coffee all over my desk

Anyway, i love it , keep it up.

Awesome poem,very real.Do keep it on and hoping to read more of such.
Very nice,kind of speaking my mind to my Fiance.

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this part is so so true.

love it.

l love this so much it reminds of someone special. please keep it up.

nice poem

I loved your poem, for it was very beautiful. Keep writing, for we may be purchasing your book one day![b][/b]

the poem is so cool, who or what inspired it?

beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, where did you pull this out from? I love it. Do you have more poems you'd like to share?

aawwww, so sweet, but the word should be deeper than fond

laraba:

beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, where did you pull this out from? I love it. Do you have more poems you'd like to share?

YES i do
this is one of my favourites but my number one can be found on the LITERATURE/POETRY BOARD
it's called "The Inner Man"
its not romantic O
but very very deep
i hope you'll like it

https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria?topic=41129.msg899949#msg899949

2dye4:

the poem is so cool, who or what inspired it?

A girl i fell in love with in SS3
she did not know
i told her after we graduted university and we both had a laugh
she's getting married soon though

awwwww, that was so sweet

and u know, sometimes its good to tell some people how much you care about them, u'll realise how relieved u will be when u do so

that poem was beautiful, too bad she's getting married

NICE POEM!

Sean25:

A girl i fell in love with in SS3
she did not know
i told her after we graduted university and we both had a laugh
she's getting married soon though

this is just beautiful. it immediately conjures the memory of a loved one.

funny where inspiration originates from atimes

Your face is not the most beautiful i have seen

But definitely the most stunning

Your voice is not the sweetest i've heard

But definitely the most alluring

Maybe its your smile which brightens me up

Maybe its When you talk that i wish you'd never stop

Maybe its When i hear your voice & i feel like a baby

Wanting that voice to be near all the time

Maybe its When i see your smile & i feel a warm glow from the deepest part of me






That was so sweet.That part was really lovely,your gurl must be really lucky that if you display those qualities.Kudos.

There’s something about u,
Your beautiful, exotic features
Your endearing smile,
Your soft, honeyed tones,
Your sweet, charming disposition,
I just don’t know. . .
But it makes me think about u. . .
All the time

an old one of mine. . . .

@Sean25:

Very very nice. But why did you wait until after university to tell her? Things might have turned out differently between you two. Maybe

junegirl:

@Sean25:

Very very nice. But why did you wait until after university to tell her? Things might have turned out differently between you two. Maybe

Yeah i know
but i was naiive, young and inexperienced

Besides,sometimes you gotta let a good thing go to get a better thing
You should see my girlfriend of today
She gets all the poems and "MORE"