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The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) / 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] / All In A Circle...(a Crime Story)-- The Completion (2) (3) (4)

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by femyodsky(m): 3:36pm On Nov 27, 2014
Updatus enjoyious
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ajaxtea(m): 3:48pm On Nov 27, 2014
@ D9ty7...
1) Pls am beging U don't let Tolani die...

2) Clement should go and burst Don's residence wen Dr. Raphael will stil b dere so dat d bastard wil stop disturbin rachel...

3) Habeeb should be involved in an accident, so dat he will not foil Clement's plan concerning Victor...

4) I want Sandra and Frank 2 reconcile back, Frank has gone through alot emotionally in a short period of time..

5) Proximate analysis of the story to be continued later.....
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 3:51pm On Nov 27, 2014
I found out that most members of the whatsapp group are new readers. cry cry
Where are all the old orders angry
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Jasminelilian(f): 4:16pm On Nov 27, 2014
oga is pass 4pm
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 4:36pm On Nov 27, 2014
Are you guys ready? Leggo
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 4:37pm On Nov 27, 2014
--continuation--
Dolapo bumped into her friends, Tokunbo, Charity and Tokunbo's cousin.
"where are you going?" Charity asked. Even though she has been having difficulty talking to Dolapo since the night she sent her away from their room.
"Welcome." Dolapo said ignoring her question.
"How is Tola?" Tokunbo's cousin asked.
"She is fine, still in the ICU." she replied.
The three of them sighed as their hopes seemed lost.
"Is she gonna make it?" Tokunbo's cousin asked.
Dolapo gave her one kind look that could make a snail withdraw into its shell.
"The doctors said it is 50-50. But first she has to be treated out of coma." Dolapo explained.
From the pavement into the top floor, they could hear struggles outside the gate.
"What's going on?" Dolapo asked.
Her friends all looked on with confusion written on their faces. The struggles finally died and about twenty students walked towards them. Dolapo could recognise some of them as Tolani's course mates.
"Good morning." A guy stepped forward.
Dolapo bent low as a sign of greeting.
"We want to see Tola." He said.
"Please who are you?" Charity in her ever rude manner asked.
"We are all her course mates. I am the rep." The guy replied.
Charity looked at Dolapo to reply them.
"Am sorry, you can't see her. She is in a critical condition, but...." Her voice trailed off.
Tokunbo hugged her and whispered "You have to be strong, she'll make it."
"I can help you get her mum. You can drop your messages." She continued.
"But, I think I can follow you in there to see her." The course rep said.
Dolapo wanted to refuse him but the pleading eyes of the other members of the class and Tokunbo's expression changed her mind.
"Come with me." She said and led him into the first reception where they climbed the stairs to the third floor and took the first turning by the left towards the ICU.
Dolapo quickly took her eyes off Darasimi who was still squatting but this time in front of her chair and sobbing. A group of people, about three were crying at the extreme of the waiting room. They are the relatives of the guy who died a few minutes ago.
"Mum, he came to check on Tola, he is her course mate. The rest are downstairs." She explained pointing to the guy who by now was standing very close to the glass wall and staring at Tola as tears rolled down his cheeks.
"Thank you very much my son." Tola's mother said, but he was far away.
He came round after a minute and announced his departure. Dolapo volunteered to see him off. And silently, they descended the stairs.
"Please our regards to her. We'll come back." A girl in her department said. "This is a token from all of us." She gave her a get well card and a bunch of flowers.
"Thank you very much." Dolapo said.
They all left in the manner in which they had come, struggling to get past the gate and making jest of the security men.
How she wished she could be this happy all day. With none of her loved ones dying or she afraid of death.
"Some people came to pack you things." Tokunbo announced.
"Who are they?" She asked.
"A man who called himself Akpan and some policemen." Tokunbo continued.
"I knew about it." She said trying to smile but instead, tears rolled down.
"But how do you intend to write your exams?" Charity asked.
"Exams? I am less concerned. All I want to see is Tola getting back to her feet."
"It will be double celebration by God's grace. Tola will be fine and we'll all pass our exams." Tokunbo assured.
Dolapo nodded her head slowly. How she wished God grants every of our wishes and prayers.
"I want to see her." Tokunbo's cousin said and Dolapo led them all up the stairs to the third floor.

--to be continued--
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 4:38pm On Nov 27, 2014
--continuation--
Clement had more than enough on his plate and he has a limited time to empty the content of the plate. He would have thrown in off at once, but for the sake of his job, its sensitivity and the issues at hand, he had to go steadily.
After a third try, Sylvester picked his call.
"Sly, aren't you coming to work today?" Clement asked checking the time, it said 11:56am.
"I am currently in Benin. I recieved a tip on a guy and I felt tracing him all down will be instrumental to our investigation." Sylvester explained.
Clement was begining to like Sylvester all over again. He believed that being relieved of his official head duties has really being helpful. Now that he works indirectly on someone else's lead, he had the time to work extensively on cases unlike when he was the boss and the pressure on him was enormous.
"Who is the guy?" Clement asked.
"I was lucky to intercept a call from inside the khal corp and the guy. He is called Jay and the caller from Khal corp is Danger something something." Sylvester replied.
If there was something he loved about Sylvester, it was his ability with computers. He could sit down for five hours combining codes upon codes, dialling codes, network provider then come up with the live phone chat, provided he has had a working connection with the corp. Unknown to the Khal corp, they had mistakenly dropped their number when they came looking for his wife and he had acted on instinct. Afterall his instinct and predictions were right.
The name Danger rang a bell in Clement's head but he knew better not to jump into conclusion.
"Are you alone on it?" Clement asked.
"I have my FBI team with me, as well as some policemen from Benin. But the problem now is getting a direct system from which I can get the location of Jay or that of his phone." Sylvester explained.
"You know what? Send the combinate to me, I'll get someone to work on it." Clement said hanging up.
He checked the file before him, Danger-kelv was bodly written on it.
Now, he has promised Sylvester that he'll help him look for a grand surveillance provider in Benin or any neighbouring city. He was not good with computers, his next available option was Ngozi, and time was not on his side. He decided to go to the ICT control room and give the assignment to some of the experts there.
But first, he needed to know more about Danger-kelv. He picked up his phone and saw about twenty missed calls. Who could be calling him at this time of the day. He was far from guessing right. Twelve calls from his wife and eight from her sister, Chidinma. He decided to call them later, but first he has to speak with Habeeb.
While he was awaiting Habeeb's arrival he took his time to scribble some things down. Then a knock sounded on the door.
"Come in." He said even though he knew it wasn't Habeeb. Because he won't be resuming duty until twelve noon. The door was pushed open and a young female officer walked in.
"Excuse me sir." She said shyly.
He ignored her and continued writing.
"Excuse me sir." She repeated, this time tapping the table lightly.
He flared up.
"How do you expect me to excuse you? Stand up and hug you or what? Excuse me sir. Its not until when I replied will you state your mission here."
"Am sorry sir."
She went down on her knees as she started talking.
"You don't need that."
"Sir, it was a mistake. The devil's handwork." She said.
He wanted to laugh, but thought against it. Devil's handwork indeed.
"If you'll permit me. I have an assignment to carry out now." He said picking all the necessary files and headed for the door.
He stopped in his tracks when he got to the door.
"In case of next time, learn to say no. Sleeping with your boss doesn't guarantee you of getting promotion." He said and walked out.

--to be continued--
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 4:40pm On Nov 27, 2014
Till later in the evening 9pm when the last set of update drops. Lemme do something with 'The Thomas.'
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 5:02pm On Nov 27, 2014
clement d claim nice guy,mtcheeewwww....
Kelvin should cover his track laaa..
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by donsamtex(m): 5:07pm On Nov 27, 2014
Nice update d9ty7. N I luv u for sticking to ur words.
No disappointment kip it up
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 5:08pm On Nov 27, 2014
Hmmm...world war waiting for Clement at home,Danger waiting for danger-kelV in the hospital,I think Kelvin z gonna do smthing stupid...something incredibly stupid even tho he has a good heart
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Xslaze3xd(m): 5:41pm On Nov 27, 2014
donPhill:
lolz....shoutout to D9ty7 ....ur work is appreciated boss!!....more ink to ur pen
lolzzzzz...... I dey feel U
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Xslaze3xd(m): 5:43pm On Nov 27, 2014
D9ty7:
Thanks boss.lol. Poo stone bawo?
nor mind dem.... Dey nor wan comment
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 6:00pm On Nov 27, 2014
clement please don't contact habeeb please and as for that female junior


*runs to were she is and removes her panties. (thats what she wants)
who ban onemansquad *what did he do mods?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by zainharb: 6:53pm On Nov 27, 2014
my nomba 08142143338.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by shankies215(f): 7:16pm On Nov 27, 2014
Clement biko, dnt contact habeeb, abegy! Oga duro, Weldon
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by GodofGrace(m): 8:00pm On Nov 27, 2014
seriously guy I'm begin to like you the more (no homo) after each update and that make me wonder the kind of environment you are living or the kind of film you are watching to have this kind of inspiration. D9ty7 pls if you don't mind could you please tell me one of the film you watch or one of the book you read
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:08pm On Nov 27, 2014
Thank you boss. I'll reply your question with another post.
GodofGrace:
seriously guy I'm begin to like you the more (no homo) after each update and that make me wonder the kind of environment you are living or the kind of film you are watching to have this kind of inspiration. D9ty7 pls if you don't mind could you please tell me one of the film you watch or one of the book you read
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:27pm On Nov 27, 2014
Reply to GodofGrace question and every other person who have the same question for me:
- I don't read novels, neither do I watch films. Only recently I completed the whole Harry porter series in pdf format and I am currently reading Tom Clancy's novels.
The only thing that inspired me to write this story was my imagination and ability to join them together and form a story. All my life, I have watched Kiefer Sutherland 24, Prison Break, The 4400, The OC, Gossip girl, Glee, and the Vampire Diaries. You can see, I am not much of a film lover. I think I watched Nikita too.
I love high school romance films more than I love crime or action movies. But I have the ability to imagine crime scenes and turn it into a story.
When I first wrote 'All in a circle late last year, it was all about the university killings. I called it 'The Detective' then. Clement was the main character.
But this year, with the help of Emzypaz, I was able to join teorrorism to the story, then I called it 'All in a circle.'
Have I answered your question?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by omotalkie(f): 8:48pm On Nov 27, 2014
Tanx for the update, but am begging pls dont allow Tola to die ooh, cos i rily feel for Dolapo, shes highly traumatized. have mercy biko, mbok, ejo (which oda language? add urs)
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by crystalsaint(f): 9:13pm On Nov 27, 2014
LogoDWhiz:


Lol!
Thanks for the prayer.

But i'm not sick.
Just wanted him to reduce the rate at which he updates, so i can catch up.

And also, no one has offered to give me the summary.
Finding it hard to comprehend some things.
I didn't pray for you,I prayed for D9ty7..tot I quoted him!!!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 10:12pm On Nov 27, 2014
Whatsapp group still open
Infact where is hameenat94 angry
I need your number asap
And bluestarry angry
If una no drop then.....

Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by codedbaby(f): 10:21pm On Nov 27, 2014
tecno4life:
Whatsapp group still open
Infact where is hameenat94 angry
I need your number asap
And bluestarry angry
If una no drop then.....
techno u don drink ogogoro. shey me no be part of una. so u don't need my number too Abi. OK no wahala. angry mode activated
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 10:40pm On Nov 27, 2014
codedbaby:

techno u don drink ogogoro. shey me no be part of una. so u don't need my number too Abi. OK no wahala. angry mode activated
no be so na, you be one of us. Infact you you be us na. We are not there without you. Na ystrdy dy start dy add. It nevr too tey when dy start am.

Brings out my wallet, shea you go eat suya and pure water bah?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 11:43pm On Nov 27, 2014
crystalsaint:
I didn't pray for you,I prayed for D9ty7..tot I quoted him!!!


Ohh okay!

Thanks for not praying for me
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 11:55pm On Nov 27, 2014
codedbaby:

techno u don drink ogogoro. shey me no be part of una. so u don't need my number too Abi. OK no wahala. angry mode activated

Sorry babe na kiss kiss
Oga your number
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 11:57pm On Nov 27, 2014
LogoDWhiz:



Ohh okay!

Thanks for not praying for me
Lolzz grin

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by onosj(f): 12:06am On Nov 28, 2014
D9ty7 weldone more increase 2 ur creativity!...
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 12:08am On Nov 28, 2014
tecno4life:

Lolzz grin
Lol.
Abi na
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by donPhill(m): 1:58am On Nov 28, 2014
wow...finally caught up with u guys....not in Ghostmode anymoreeeee
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:38am On Nov 28, 2014
--continuation--
Habeeb walked into the hidden cell finding his way with the help of his flashlight. He unlocked the iron bars and with on click on the switch, the light flickered on. He stopped in his tracs when he saw the criminal seated on the chair.
"Habeeb!" Viktor said raising his swollen face up.
"Viktor! What are you doing here?" Habeeb asked in low tone, almost a whisper.
Viktor wanted to reply him but decided against it.
"I thought you already left the corp. So, how come you are arrested as a corp member?"
Viktor took his time to explain all that Habeeb needed to know. How they went to release a harmful gas in one of the largest shopping complex in West Africa. How his pictures were taken before they were granted entrance, how orders came from the corp that he be killed. How Danger-kelv shot him, thinking he was dead, but he managed to escape. He was on a revenge mission against Danger-kelv when he was arrested by the soldiers and handed to the police for further investigation.
Habeeb was caught in a web, has the option of illegally releasing Viktor and risking his life or alerting the corporation and they'll know how to get him out of the cell. The later seemed to be the best of ideas and he was ready to do it.
"So are you here to question me or help me?" Viktor asked.
"Remember you are no longer a member of the corp." Habeeb replied.
"But you still are. Be prepared for your arrest then." Viktor threatened.
Habeeb's jaw twitched, he knew it will definitely come to this. Even though he had concluded that he will alert the corporation and they'll in turn device a means of esacape. But they are both aware of the fact that Viktor will be killed once taken out of the cell.
"I want you out of here or I won't hesitate to give out your name."
Habeeb walked toward the door, clicked the switch and the light went off.
++++++++++
Clement was standing behind a young police woman who worked in the ICT hall.
"Amaka, have you gotten the right combinate?" He asked the lady.
"Not yet sir." The lady, Amaka replied.
He walked away from the lady's station and walked towards a guy who wore a spectacle.
"Edgar, have you gotten a base-line connection?" He asked.
"In ten seconds please. Amakah, what combinate are you using?" Edgar, who was widely regarded as the wizard of the computer world inside the station.
"Alpha-charlie-zero." Amakah replied.
Edgar used the combinate on his computer and smiled broadly.
"Listen everybody." He said.
Everyone working on the assignment paused and faced him expectantly.
"Combine, Charlie-Alpha-zero three times. Atk-36ph-gf44-333mmph that's the surveillance base. Two location would be displayed. You could either get one or the two." He said.
The other listening to him did as he instructed on their respective system.
"Amakah, you should get two locations." He said minimizing his computer page and standing up.
He walked towards Amakah's computer. "Here it is." He said as Clement came around and bent down to see what the computer was displaying.
"St Battaihas hospital around Akoka and Gaol five star hotel, Benin city." Amakah called out.
Clement jotten the two locations. And removed his phone to dial a number.
"Sly, the Jay of a guy is currently in Gaol hotel in Benin city." Clement explained.
"Room 65." Edgar added.
Clement hunged up, gave some instructions to Edgar and Amaka before he exited the hall.
He summoned a team of five junior officer and drove off towards the hospital. Maybe they are after Ngozi. He concluded.

--to be continued--
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by codedbaby(f): 7:39am On Nov 28, 2014
tecno4life:


Sorry babe na kiss kiss
Oga your number
now u are talking.
08066690070

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