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Re: A Client From Hell by IffaCatchYouEhn(m): 3:47pm On Aug 19, 2016
jagugu88li:


Dress for me now, I wan sit Front Row

and the popcorns too #hides face#

I think I wont be going to the library anymore, NL has everything the library has. cool Thanks MrsExplorer you are one of my fav. NL writters. Be blessed
Haba......Begi begi, E no good oh.


I'd have loved to qive you but it's FROM HELL
Re: A Client From Hell by Nobody: 3:49pm On Aug 19, 2016
No real story no care. Exiting thread.
Re: A Client From Hell by 4reala(m): 3:49pm On Aug 19, 2016
MrsExplorer:
if you are reading this, kindly drop a comment
Ride on this is great
Re: A Client From Hell by ba2nde19(m): 3:50pm On Aug 19, 2016
Waiting patiently for the next... . tanx @ op
Re: A Client From Hell by Nobody: 3:51pm On Aug 19, 2016
An interesting piece creating mental pictures. Thumbs up!!!
Re: A Client From Hell by Nobody: 3:51pm On Aug 19, 2016
I wonder how fiction writers get the inspiration for their books. This author writes her story so well that you would think she is/was a call girl (no offence meant to the writer). Such a thought is inevitable when one looks at the depth of her tale.

Also, the finesse peculiar to this tale stirs up a similar thought when one considers the plots of the fantasy works in J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter series, J.R.R. Tolkien's The Lord of the Rings, John Grisham's books and others.

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Re: A Client From Hell by csamii: 3:52pm On Aug 19, 2016
doctokwus:
Though fiction,u can make it more real by paying attention to some details.For eg,there is no way your phone cud have been left with u to use whenever u wake up.
That part turned me a bit off,otherwise good storyline.

Really! Do you think this is one of those CIA stories or movies where they just manufacture service from thin air?

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Re: A Client From Hell by Realhommie(m): 3:54pm On Aug 19, 2016
Very interesting story. You've just won my followership .
Fascinated by your writing skill as well. Kudos

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Re: A Client From Hell by Nobody: 3:55pm On Aug 19, 2016
How fa the continuation naaa cheesy angry grin
Re: A Client From Hell by doctokwus: 3:55pm On Aug 19, 2016
csamii:


Really! Do you think this is one of those CIA stories or movies where they just manufacture service from thin air?
Are u ok.

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Re: A Client From Hell by doctokwus: 3:55pm On Aug 19, 2016
csamii:


Really! Do you think this is one of those CIA stories or movies where they just manufacture service from thin air?
Are u ok?
Re: A Client From Hell by Countrygirl(f): 4:00pm On Aug 19, 2016
Following......
Re: A Client From Hell by ngoben(f): 4:01pm On Aug 19, 2016
Good 1 mrs explorer...sandra is soo gud wif her job
Re: A Client From Hell by chris2face(m): 4:01pm On Aug 19, 2016
Wahoo I must say I like what am reading welcome girl
Re: A Client From Hell by Britzdon(m): 4:02pm On Aug 19, 2016
MrsExplorer:
if you are reading this, kindly drop a comment
Sweetie we are here

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Re: A Client From Hell by somehowpenis(m): 4:05pm On Aug 19, 2016
Leave ashawo work you no go gree.
Re: A Client From Hell by yakbauer: 4:05pm On Aug 19, 2016
I literally hate novels, but just when I thought I was reading someone's ordeals, I was on chapter 4, it was then it dawned on me that it was MrsExplorer's piece.
Reading it, one easily gets immersed and that to me is the yardstick to measure a good piece. I don't know how it's gonna end and I really don't care for now, I'll just go with the flow and hope it ends with a climax.
Also love the cover photo. Good work
No sorry GREAT PIECE

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Re: A Client From Hell by kelvinkosi(m): 4:06pm On Aug 19, 2016
Aunty finish d gist please .... Pleasure reading !!!!
Re: A Client From Hell by kelvinkosi(m): 4:06pm On Aug 19, 2016
Aunty finish d gist please .... Pleasure reading !!!!
Re: A Client From Hell by Felincous(m): 4:08pm On Aug 19, 2016
MrsExplorer:

lol i understand. Thank you


i really appreciate that and hope you doing good


huhuhuhuhuhu, lol, thanks


thank you and keep reading...,


hmmm, wow. I'm honoured. Thanks

A man's gift will make a way for him
kindly send me a PM nd lets c how it goes I will be waiting.

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Re: A Client From Hell by Princepoint(m): 4:11pm On Aug 19, 2016
this one is strong
Re: A Client From Hell by Kgdavid(m): 4:11pm On Aug 19, 2016
MrsExplorer:
if you are reading this, kindly drop a comment

Hey! Nice idea and good writing skills (lots of suspense and a very original story), but if you plan on taking this anywhere other than Nairaland, you'll need a decent editor.

There are a few serious errors in some passages.
Re: A Client From Hell by csamii: 4:12pm On Aug 19, 2016
doctokwus:

Are u ok?

Are you?

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Re: A Client From Hell by SpencerLewis(m): 4:12pm On Aug 19, 2016
MrsExplorer:
if you are reading this, kindly drop a comment
Mrs. Explorer na correct lie be this na. But kwontinue we de ur side as been in ur front or back cd be extremely dangerous.

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Re: A Client From Hell by jacksonPolloc(m): 4:12pm On Aug 19, 2016
See this the effect of doin sugar mummy and daddy thing One of them nearly killed me with a boobs knife
Re: A Client From Hell by jacksonPolloc(m): 4:13pm On Aug 19, 2016
See this is the effect of doin sugar mummy and daddy thing One of them nearly killed me with a boobs knife
Re: A Client From Hell by Eberex(m): 4:14pm On Aug 19, 2016
The episodes were flooding in when there were no audience. But as soon as the comments started rolling , the updates stopped. So typical f Nairaland writers

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Re: A Client From Hell by shinarlaura(f): 4:16pm On Aug 19, 2016
doctokwus:
Though fiction,u can make it more real by paying attention to some details.For eg,there is no way your phone cud have been left with u to use whenever u wake up.
That part turned me a bit off,otherwise good storyline.
I guess the phone was left with her because they knew there was no network in that room.

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Re: A Client From Hell by Bants(m): 4:18pm On Aug 19, 2016
Yo cool story is making sense.. even though she has her phone does she know where she is except Abuja is a one road city...plus can she not play with linda moreover she is social worker
Re: A Client From Hell by 4reala(m): 4:19pm On Aug 19, 2016
Mrs Explorer good work, we are waiting .......
I don tak seat already, so let's continue
Re: A Client From Hell by CioAngels(f): 4:20pm On Aug 19, 2016
MrsExplorer:
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My flight was great. When i got to Abuja a Car was already wating for me. Two men dressed in Black suits introduced themselves as my escort and were sent by Linda. This is actually looking far beautiful than expected, I thought. I sat in the car like the queen i am and opened the bottle of red wine beside me. I must have been really tired as i soon dozed off.

When i woke up i found myself in a room completely naked. The last thing i remember was dozing off at the back of a nice car with a man smiling at me. I was disoriented, weak and i felt very hungry. The room was completely dirty and smelled of shit. There was no window, the air felt stuffy and they were tiny pools of dirty water. I stood up from the bed and walked towards the door, turned the knob but it was locked.

My heart began to race, my knees felt week, and i started to panic. In fear i reached for my belongings and searched for my phone. I quickly dialled Lucy's number, NOTHING, i dialled again, NOTHING! It was then i noticed the network bar was empty. I looked at the date, 18th of April, i couldn't believe my eyes. Does that mean i've been sleeping and out for 48hrs, this explains why i was hungry. I started to scream for help.

Suddenly the door opened, a woman in a red flowing gown walked towards me. Her hair was perfectly plaited and on her neck was a diamond laced pendant with the words 'Love' She spoke;

''I am not sure there is anyone here to help you''

Despite the chillness in her voice and the fear that was currently gathering like acid in my mouth, i felt grateful i could finally speak to someone. I quickly grabbed a blanket and covered my naked body and silently promised myself not to cry or show any sign of fear.

''Where am i?'' I demanded'

''Well for one, you are far from home and secondly you are here to do the job i paid you for''

''Are you Linda?''
''I am no longer interested in doing any job, i want to go back home'' I said, trying desperately to sound like i have everything under control.

She acted like she was shocked. Walking the remaining distance between us until we stood toe to toe, then she started to laugh. The laugh sent chills down my spin, by this time i was sure i was doomed.

''Yes, i am Linda and going home depends on how well you do your job'' She said, her face toally blank and her smile gone. ''Now dress up and one of the gaurds would lead you upstairs'' She spun around and started to leave.

I quickly grabbed one of her wrist and tried to turn her round. She gave me a resounding slap that sent me straight to the floor. Her hand felt too thick for a woman and i couldn't help but notice how strong she was.

''Don't you ever touch me'' she screamed and spat on me. Then she started to laugh again, the initial anger and frown instantly disappearing.
''Shamson! Shamson!, Get her to dress up, if she refuses, you know what to do.''

A man built like a modern day goliath ran in ''Yes ma'' He said.

I felt my throat tighten and my tongue dry, i started to cry. She walked towards me and patted my back

''Don't cry dear, just do what you are told and everything would be fine,dress up and don't forget to come with your toys''

I opened my mouth as if to speak but nothing came out.

When she left and i saw the look on the guard's face, i did not need to be told twice before i started dressing. I rummaged through my belongings looking for a cloth that would cover the intimates part of my body, unfortunately i only came along with revealing outfits thinking that this would be a normal job as usuall. Finally, i settled for a red spaghetti top,a very short mini skirt, and a white pop-socks. I looked at myself and for the first time since i started this job, i felt like trash.

Once i was done, i was blindfolded with a piece of black clothing by the goliath looking guard and led through what must have been a staircase.

''If you know what is good for you, you'll do whatever she asks you to do'' He warned.

I couldn't help but feel like a lamb to the slaughter. The picture of beheaded ISIS captives started to play in my mind like a strange horror movie. I thought of my friends. not like i have many. I thought of my mum and tried to remember the last time i spoke with her. I couldn't. My head banged like a million PDP supporters and i couldn't help but wonder if i would be missed. Definitely not!

The guard pushed me forward, momentarily waking me from my thoughts and back to reality. A reality that now seem worse than my nightmares. Would i be able to survive this? I thought to myself amidst tears

It is really Scary, yet, am waiting to read more.
Re: A Client From Hell by Coyotejack(m): 4:23pm On Aug 19, 2016
Nice one op
There are a few discrepancies here and there but nice story....


Thumbs up story from hell
Nice intriguing story I have read in a long while.... See talents.......

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