Wonderful!!! Well scripted. Mrsexplorer kudos to you, you did well with this story. I wish it could be made a movie!

WOW WOW WOW!!! what a masterpiece, well scripted, a very nice story

Mrsexplorer, you still haven't answered my question. Where was the other guy that was working for Linda during the struggle? Or you'd say it was all part of the plan?

Wow....

Is this what?
Sorry...
What is this?
A story or a movie?
Wow!
Splendid....
Big ups to a marvelous writer....

wow so nice... thanks MrsExplorer this is a wonderful story and again thanks for finishing it don't think I have ever finished a story here on nl since I joined. Kudos

The last paragraph of Lucy's letter answers the question. Nice piece

The other guy couldn't feature during the struggle because him being there would prevent struggling of any sort. And it would defeat the purpose

Praissey:
Mrsexplorer, you still haven't answered my question. Where was the other guy that was working for Linda during the struggle? Or you'd say it was all part of the plan?

U remind me of my favorite writer,SANDRA BROWN,u gave the story a befitting climax and the morals was glaring. Thumbs up

fejicruz:
The other guy couldn't feature during the struggle because him being there would prevent struggling of any sort. And it would defeat the purpose

Just as expected....

Who asked you?

Read the story and move on

BlindAngel:
Upon all the writers we have on nairaland, you are the most proud of them all @ mrsexplorer, you are so proud and full of your self.
Bibijay123, is the most humble of all nairaland writers.
PamelB is very humble and she is the most hardworking of all nairaland writers i have ever come accross.
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My observations.

Wow @story

seriously you did a good job on this....very interesting and I love the suspense....but you were very brutal to the major characters

MrsExplorer do u mind if I copy this tory to my facebook wall?

Interesting read, suspense filled. Was held spell bound all the way. Kudos and more ink to ur pen @Op.

A fascinating story. Well done. Wouldn't it have been far more interesting if you had added more flesh to it? It is too short. I love lengthy novels.

I hope you will develop the story into a book -- that's if people skilled at wanton plagiarism haven't set their eyes on this work already.

Or you could write a longer story that's also captivating like this one.

Anyways, kudos to you for a job well done!

Wow! This is a very good story any day. OP, don't mind those label you "proud". A brain that's able to compose this stuff is not ordinary.

Nice nice masterpiece
It
Captivate d readers mind
Thanks a lot

God will continue to coil your brain

Ezerbullet:
MrsExplorer do u mind if I copy this tory to my facebook wall?

ehmmm, as long as you post the nairaland link of the story, no problem

thank you all for the comments and i really appreciate that you took your time to read my story, thank you

BlindAngel:
1)you have not even drop up to 10 updates and your story already have up to 46,000+ views, because of people coming here and refreshing the page daily to find the rest of the updates.
2)you have not even dropped up to 10 updates and the comments is already on page 11, because of people begging you up and down to update.
3)so many far more intresting stories are here on nl and don't even have half of the views and comments you got, reason is that the writer updates frequently and the readers does not beg for updates as you are making them do now.
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Am sorry to say but its either you are so proud with your updates because of the way you well planned the begining of the story, or you are just too lazy to type, or you have no idea on what to type next.
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My take.

See, this guy and all these people lashing this babe, is it not her story, are we not the ones begging her for story. Abeg leave the lady and read the piece from your humble ones.
A writer's ultimate skill is not about content but how much you can captivate the reader, this lady has potential to be as good as Stephen King.

Also, can a mod please help me mark the story as complete or how do i do if i can

What an ending!

I Duff my hat for you.....
A short film would be nice.

nice one .....didn't see that coming

nice one .....didn't see that coming

Lucy is replyin u wit "Z".. Lol,
Nice job, may God bless u for dis beautiful write up.. Higher u i prayed..

@MrsExplorer thanks a lot, love you.

I wish there was a way to make everybody who read this story to pay for it. So entertaining! You need to see how my heart leaped for joy when I saw THE LAST EPISODE. I couldn't wait to see who was behind this.

cococandy:
Who asked you?
Read the story and move on

. . Go sit down for bush joooor. Mtchewwwww

Cool story

Okay I just had to register so that I could comment... This story Is AMAZING..
Stephen King is looking for you my dear.
Kudos.