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Re: Red Ashes by TeleboiZ005(m): 1:30pm On Jan 29, 2017
Chumzypinky:

lol.


I jst saw anoda funny moniker viewing..

Eniolarabosede, babe, hw many names u get na?
Ma. just ignore that oga politicalthug or so...he is a trouble maker....i still give u the credit on this story...FIRE ON!
Re: Red Ashes by yorhmienerd(m): 1:48pm On Jan 29, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
Useless story.. Lazy writer
Sorry to say this- you're just pained for no reason...

Re: Red Ashes by debamwen(f): 1:55pm On Jan 29, 2017
Nice story dearie keep it up. Na jealous dey wori dem.The Lord is ur strength. Amen
Re: Red Ashes by PoliticalThuG(m): 1:57pm On Jan 29, 2017
yorhmienerd:
Sorry to say this- you're just pained for no reason...
wetin be ur own?
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 1:57pm On Jan 29, 2017
U are strong IJN.
Re: Red Ashes by cyndylove64(f): 1:59pm On Jan 29, 2017
Mummy pinky get well soon u are owing us 7updates wen u recover#tell oga to prepare chill juice for u#winks
Re: Red Ashes by yorhmienerd(m): 2:04pm On Jan 29, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
wetin be ur own?
You've been spitting trash since, try get a life outside NL...

Even heard you've wrote over 800 works, lol, Greg42 did more than this, where is he today?

Your problem is a problem
Re: Red Ashes by harameede99(f): 2:25pm On Jan 29, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
wetin be ur own?
shuu see dis local cow oo ontop awa own story u r posting nonsense its obvious u r an attention seeker buh lemme tell u dis fool u cn go to hell for all we care we dnt need pple lyk u here so u cn easily walk away dan rite sometin dah wuld chop off ya hand sooner or lata
Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 3:00pm On Jan 29, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
Useless story.. Lazy writer

Re: Red Ashes by PoliticalThuG(m): 3:15pm On Jan 29, 2017
harameede99:
shuu see dis local cow oo ontop awa own story u r posting nonsense its obvious u r an attention seeker buh lemme tell u dis fool u cn go to hell for all we care we dnt need pple lyk u here so u cn easily walk away dan rite sometin dah wuld chop off ya hand sooner or lata
see this uglee girl.. Na who talk to u now? U no get respect?
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:15pm On Jan 29, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
Useless story.. Lazy writer
oh dude! Finally caught up with d story? Kip folowing 4 more dear *winks* I neva knew my story was dis gud 2 attract d highest critique here on NL, kudos to myself, really!

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:16pm On Jan 29, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
see this uglee girl.. Na who talk to u now? U no get respect?
monkey no fyn bt im mama gbadun am pass anitin
Re: Red Ashes by PoliticalThuG(m): 3:16pm On Jan 29, 2017
yorhmienerd:
You've been spitting trash since, try get a life outside NL...

Even heard you've wrote over 800 works, lol, Greg42 did more than this, where is he today?

Your problem is a problem
i am a retired writer.. I need to teach you guys how we did it in our time
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:17pm On Jan 29, 2017
harameede99:
shuu see dis local cow oo ontop awa own story u r posting nonsense its obvious u r an attention seeker buh lemme tell u dis fool u cn go to hell for all we care we dnt need pple lyk u here so u cn easily walk away dan rite sometin dah wuld chop off ya hand sooner or lata
abeg help me tel am
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:18pm On Jan 29, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
i am a retired writer.. I need to teach you guys how we did it in our time
abeg kip it 2 ursef. And mind u, writers dont retire, because ur imagination neva ceases to flow. Are you rili a writer? Pls post one of ur stories here na!
Re: Red Ashes by harameede99(f): 3:18pm On Jan 29, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
see this uglee girl.. Na who talk to u now? U no get respect?
abeg shat ap dah ya smellin maut na me get tym to dey reply u respect kor ur mates r sweeping dirt unda d bridge u go dey sweep road for express jst du us a favour nd keep quiet he goat
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:19pm On Jan 29, 2017
yorhmienerd:
You've been spitting trash since, try get a life outside NL...

Even heard you've wrote over 800 works, lol, Greg42 did more than this, where is he today?

Your problem is a problem
dnt mind him, he secretly admires my story. Anyway, wat happened to Greg42, i'd rili lyk 2 knw
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:19pm On Jan 29, 2017
harameede99:
abeg shat ap dah ya smellin maut na me get tym to dey reply u respect kor ur mates r sweeping dirt unda d bridge u go dey sweep road for express jst du us a favour nd keep quiet he goat
go girl! Im no reach!
Re: Red Ashes by PoliticalThuG(m): 3:22pm On Jan 29, 2017
Chumzypinky:

oh dude! Finally caught up with d story? Kip folowing 4 more dear *winks* I neva knew my story was dis gud 2 attract d highest critique here on NL, kudos to myself, really!
u are grown now... You now know the importance of a critiq in story writing.. You need to reward me for my time i took in criticizing your useless work
Re: Red Ashes by PoliticalThuG(m): 3:26pm On Jan 29, 2017
Chumzypinky:

abeg kip it 2 ursef. And mind u, writers dont retire, because ur imagination neva ceases to flow. Are you rili a writer? Pls post one of ur stories here na!
if i must post my works here, you need to assure me that some people will not steal them.. The last time i posted my poems online, it got stolen...
Re: Red Ashes by iwakacome: 3:46pm On Jan 29, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
Useless story.. Lazy writer

hmmm a worthless no good, regressive simpleton just joined the thread you're welcome Commander in Chief of Failure Republic, heard your imagination stopped working so you retired lol. dead brain. Please let's enjoy the story without your drama. worthless sissy.
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 3:51pm On Jan 29, 2017
Wait.... Wait... Wait oOooO. What is all this noise about?. Untop one person?. I no like am OooOo.
Chumzypinky and Co.... Why stress your fingers in typing a reply??. Its clear all the dude wants is ATTENTION...and i don't like how you all are giving him just that!.
Please... I beg you all. Just IGNORE him...and instead,drop comments on the story.
I'm sure the guy is even smiling or laughing while replying any comment..cause he's getting exactly what he wants... And that is,getting you all worked up!. Abeg,make una free am.
How body nah. Hope its not a serious something oo.
I pray you get well soon Chumzypinky.
#stillfollowing#

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Re: Red Ashes by teel123(f): 3:59pm On Jan 29, 2017
Do writer retire? Please continue your STORY joor
Re: Red Ashes by gtin(m): 4:11pm On Jan 29, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
Useless story.. Lazy writer
So Mummy Chumzy u never tire to talk to this fool, wen frm all indications he is jst looking for relevance
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 4:28pm On Jan 29, 2017
It seems d guy thrives in getting attention . pls ignore him, he Will get tired wen he sees no 1 is ready 2 exchange word wit him.
Re: Red Ashes by Thollex(m): 4:29pm On Jan 29, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
u are grown now... You now know the importance of a critiq in story writing.. You need to reward me for my time i took in criticizing your useless work


Lol... This guy na funny sha. You dey there dey run your mouth when better people dey enjoy the story

Abeg madam chumzypinky carry go jere and don't mind this attention seeker
Re: Red Ashes by PoliticalThuG(m): 4:45pm On Jan 29, 2017
debdave:
Wait.... Wait... Wait oOooO. What is all this noise about?. Untop one person?. I no like am OooOo.
Chumzypinky and Co.... Why stress your fingers in typing a reply??. Its clear all the dude wants is ATTENTION...and i don't like how you all are giving him just that!.
Please... I beg you all. Just IGNORE him...and instead,drop comments on the story.
I'm sure the guy is even smiling or laughing while replying any comment..cause he's getting exactly what he wants... And that is,getting you all worked up!. Abeg,make una free am.
How body nah. Hope its not a serious something oo.
I pray you get well soon Chumzypinky.
#stillfollowing#
see this black goooooot
Re: Red Ashes by PoliticalThuG(m): 4:47pm On Jan 29, 2017
teel123:
Do writer retire? Please continue your STORY joor
ofcus we do.. When we have achieved a lot
Re: Red Ashes by PoliticalThuG(m): 4:48pm On Jan 29, 2017
gtin:

So Mummy Chumzy u never tire to talk to this fool, wen frm all indications he is jst looking for relevance
let me ignore this eejiot
Re: Red Ashes by PoliticalThuG(m): 4:49pm On Jan 29, 2017
NLchikeeto:
It seems d guy thrives in getting attention . pls ignore him, he Will get tired wen he sees no 1 is ready 2 exchange word wit him.
i am sure u cant write a simple composition about your mother... How can you tell a good story from bad ones? Mtchwwww
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 4:50pm On Jan 29, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
Useless story.. Lazy writer

I believe you're just an online troll and you've not been getting enough mentions that's why you decided to criticise people's work unnecessary. I won't insult you cos is way below my pride and dignity so Mr. PoliticalThug why don't you concentrate on what you're very good at (being a thug) and stop derailing this thread. I believe you're way bigger than that as you claimed and stop throwing tantrums online. If really you're an elder or matured enough you'll take my honest advice. Remain blessed.

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