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The Ashes Of Love / Analysing Dialogue In Red Ashes By Chumzypinky / Hearts In Ashes (2) (3) (4)
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Re: Red Ashes by cerowo(f): 8:13am On Jan 26, 2017 |
Adesina12:*runs out ov d thread 2 call sis azeequeen* The pop corn is nw ready sis all tnks 2 Adesina12 |
Re: Red Ashes by twinkiet(f): 8:38am On Jan 26, 2017 |
Chumzypinky:so what....... We are in love ❤..... |
Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 8:43am On Jan 26, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: u dat eyaf drop 3 engines... shay u be virgin ni |
Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 8:48am On Jan 26, 2017 |
rachealfst: oohhh*sighs* hope is not wat am thingking |
Re: Red Ashes by gtin(m): 9:37am On Jan 26, 2017 |
wizsolzy:If its also wat am tinkn i knw 14yrs is waiting by d corner 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:40am On Jan 26, 2017 |
myking95:bt u ddnt have 2 quote d whole update jst 2 say dat na |
Re: Red Ashes by Damilahrey(m): 10:25am On Jan 26, 2017 |
I swear chioma. need to assainsinate chucky b4 he goes too far |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 10:29am On Jan 26, 2017 |
gtin:That chioma woman self na selfish yeye woman. If u have any problems with yourself male or female work on yourself, rehabilitate yourself spiritually, mentally and physically. Me self I will just jejely tell the whole family and leave her if she doesn't go seek help |
Re: Red Ashes by Azeequeen(f): 12:38pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
Hadampson:Many things dey shele ooo,just sit down Mr Adesina12 go supply una popcorn 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by Azeequeen(f): 12:41pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
cerowo:I'm here jawe,don't stress yourself |
Re: Red Ashes by cerowo(f): 12:50pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
Azeequeen:Have started reading d writeup, nd u knw what! d story is muahh its so superb tnks sis 4 mentioning me 2 this intriguing story, i am indebted 2 u with one Gulder,hp u like it?? |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 1:14pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
[/quote] 'listen to me Jolade, i dont like the way you treat people in this house. Everyone is equal. What is all this rubbish all about? Is it because you were fortunate enough to live a life of luxury? Is that why you treat people of a lower class like trash?' TBC[/quote] So jolade treats people badly, I see life paying her back in her own coin |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 1:15pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
So jolade treats people badly, I see life paying her back in her own coin with Nathan's Treatment. |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 1:41pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
The time I heard that thing from a girls mouth, I just say no sharpenly..but till now I still think of deliverance sha |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 1:46pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
By the way if I was jolade I would ruin Nathan...like mess him up big time so even Nene go tire for him matter, to rape a lady countless times and drop her in a cemetery to be raped? That yeye Nathan has just won himself an enemy for life |
Re: Red Ashes by teel123(f): 1:56pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
When someone is stingy with update ooooo .God is seeing ooooooooo lolz |
Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 1:57pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 2:17pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
namedonfinish:But the name sha...laff just dey do me any how |
Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 2:23pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
Hadampson: Oga consultant thank u jareh,....i have done the needful |
Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 2:28pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
twinkiet: no u aiint honey... ps:this "baby" u called me just bust my head....i think d last time i was called baby was wen i was 5.... |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:40pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
samyfreshsmooth:eyaa, i jst fil 4 u |
Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 2:48pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: mama come post something ooo... no be all dis things wen u dey do sooooo..wen i saw ur name dos now dos now i tot u yaf updated oo |
Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 2:51pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: How u no go feel form me when i sure say dem (our hubby) dey call u baby every time..... oh and hw is the 4th warrior doing?? he/she don begin practice how to kick? |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 3:10pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
*faints, wakes up, weeps, showers and warms afang to eat* That Xavier of a guy is a devil, as if hisnhands are clean, na this deadly strain of gonorrhea him go get for yankee. I can imagine MozB singing in his airplane with lil kesh's voice as he was approaching Nigeria...."if any of my female friends wan marry, I go dabaru come cause trouble cause trouble!!. " |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 3:40pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
Chumzypinky:Lol. Just thinking about the exercise that you and oga did. Nine months true true we go eat rice |
Re: Red Ashes by hatchetman(m): 3:49pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
Chumzypinky:d tin pain am wel wel..gehs dey 4k up walai..*in falz's voice*wehdone ma 4 d starvation |
Re: Red Ashes by Azeequeen(f): 4:32pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
cerowo:Gulder kwa?You want me to start somersaulting abi? Noooooo,I prefer juice,bluetooth it |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 5:28pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
myking95:lol, naughty u |
Re: Red Ashes by BlissfulJeff(m): 6:41pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
nice story u've got here.weldone |
Re: Red Ashes by Adesina12: 7:13pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
Azeequeen: Thanks for your word of encouragement Sweetest popcorn for only you for free Ladysuperb and queenite must pay for their supplies |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:47pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
Sori 4 d late update... KAKA. 'do you really have to leave? Nene would be lonely...' Nathan said. Since i couldnt gain audience with Kainene, i decided to speak with Nathan, maybe he could do something, talk to her and get her to understand what i'm passing through as well. 'Nathan, you just dont understand my plight and you'll never do except you're in my shoes. This placed holds no meaning for me anymore, i look at everywhere and i have painful memories, even this place holds memory of Xaviercasmir and i. Remember we...were here? On your birthday?' Tears stung my eyes now as i remembered that day. He wrapped his hand around my shoulder 'its okay. Calm down. I understand what you're passing through and i'll speak to Nene. I understand you need a change of environment for a fresh start, to start a new life. I understand you quite alright Kaka. Its not as if Nene doesnt understand, she's just trying to imagine life without you in this town....' 'country' i chipped in. 'You are...?' 'yes. I'm leaving the country. I'm going to Canada' 'that explains it then. Kainene wont be able to live without you' 'i'll come back' 'but it wont be anytime soon' 'i'm afraid thats the truth' He sighed and removed his hands from around my shoulders. I immediately missed the warmth it gave me 'anyways, its you choice. I believe you're old enough to know whats good and whats not for you' 'true talk' He patted my shoulders 'i just wish you luck. You'll find a better man' 'i dont even want any man wahala again sef. It just pains me that i'm no longer a virgin else i would have gone to a convent and serve my God in truth and in spirit' He laughed, then he placed his face ontop his palms in an inquisitive manner 'so you're not a virgin?' I slapped his smooth cheek softly 'get away! Like your girlfriend is a virgin!' 'i was the one who disvirgined her' he hit his chest proudly. 'and are we supposed to give you an award?' 'on the contrary, i think she's the one who deserves an award for waiting for the right man and at the right time' 'but you know you didnt disvirgin her at the right time? The right time should have been on your wedding night. You know, i've always had this fantasy of being disvirgined on my wedding night, but...' 'things didnt work out that way. I understand. Teenage hormones can be something else' 'at what age did you have your first sex?' 'uhm...lets say 14, 15? Around that age. Yours?' 'mine was 15 as well. How was your first time?' 'uhm...i'll just say...it was just there, i wasnt happy that day so i just forced myself to enjoy it seriously' 'mine was extremely painful. And to think he made a promise of never leaving me that day' 'thats men for you. We promise and we fail' I looked at me wristwatch 'i think i need to go now. I've spent an hour here. Thanks for keeping me company seriously, maybe i could drop by sometime again before i finally leave the country' i stood up. 'alright' he stood up too. Then he hugged me 'have a nice day Kaka' he said smoothly. I loved the way he pronouced my name. 'you too dear' 'i'll walk you to the door' 'thanks' As we walked to the door, the door opened and Kainene walked in holding a bag obviously containing jewelries. Her smile faded on seeing me. 'Nene...' She just walked towards the couch and sat down. Nathan looked at me and shrugged. He walked to Nene and kissed her on the lips, then he smoothed her lips 'welcome honey. I'll be right back' Then he left leaving Nene and i. I fiddled with my clutch for a moment, then i walked to her. I sat beside her 'Nene' She looked at me, then she spoke softly 'so your mind is really made up on leaving? You wont even stay for my sake. But if it had been me, i would have stayed for you...if not anything but because of you' tears started pouring from her eyes. I started crying too 'Nene, i'm sorry. I'm very sorry' She grabbed my shoulders 'answer me Nene, are you going or not' 'Nene....' 'fvcking answer me!' 'i'm going' 'you're what?' 'Nene, i'm leaving...' i cupped her cheeks with my hands 'Nene, please stop this. Stop hurting me. I'm not dying. And we'll still be in touch. And i'll be back. Please understand, this place holds nothing for me anymore' She sobbed aloud. 'Nene, please forgive me but this is my ultimate decision' 'i wish you goodluck' 'what?' 'i said i wish you goodluck. Like you said before, you're arent dying, we're still gonna keep in touch' 'do you honestly mean that?' Then she looked at me 'i dont. But what can i do? You're like a sister to me and i cant stand being away from you. But then its your decision and i'll respect it. Just promise me you're going to take care of yourself' I nodded 'i will. I promise' then we embraced. Her phone rang. She looked at me 'its my mum...' then she picked 'hello mum....who's this and why are you with my mum's phone? No, you didnt....what!!!! I'm coming over right now, stop the demolishers...what station? On my way' TBC 3 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 8:58pm On Jan 26, 2017 |
maw!maw!!maw!!!choi.FTC |
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