ojonemile:
shoo who be dz.

Just leave dat one recession affect her sense...
Can we fast for her to receive sense my people?

I see that the primary shallow minded students who can't tell when a story is loosing it's touch are here. Wizsolzy, it seems you brain have been affected by recession for you to know how one whose brain affected by recession reasons.

Kids who can't make sense without insults, no wonder you all are cheering

CecyAdrian:
I see that t primary shallow minded students who can't tell when a story is loosing I touch are here. Wizsolzy, it seems you brain have been affected by recession for you to know how one whose brain affected by recession reasons.

Kids who can't make sense without insults, no wonder you all are cheering

Cool down Bae.....

Am beginning to like yhu

ikombe:


Pls do the needfull

If you have a different opinion to what I said, say it, stop displaying your disturbing violence traits that can only b found in animals.

This is a literary ground, if you disagree with the angle of my criticism you state so, that's even if you know the meaning of criticism

CecyAdrian:
I see that the primary shallow minded students who can't tell when a story is loosing it's touch are here. Wizsolzy, it seems you brain have been affected by recession for you to know how one whose brain affected by recession reasons.

Kids who can't make sense without insults, no wonder you all are cheering

Nd one mad person like dis tin

Abeg aunty cecy share one story u hv written let me search for it...for my reading pleasure ....pls ma.

CecyAdrian:


If you have a different opinion to what I said, say it, stop displaying your disturbing violence traits that can only b found in animals.

This is a literary ground, if you disagree with the angle of my criticism you state so, that's even if you know the meaning of criticism

Pls shut the feck up and leave the thread

Episode 40

..hmmm.. Cnt believe iv been reading dis 4 up to 3hrs nw...it was worth it tho.. Tankz.. More in to ur pen,and more fluids to ur brain.

rachealfst, this is just a scene , anyways nice work......

I love ur point, ur mention about the story is applicable to me but i refuse to comment because i know the work of mettlesome rachaelfst. The plot of the story has ended and i don't know the reason it has not come to an end. The story has now become something like Jumong(story within story and plot within plot) all in all i praise ur spirited effort for critizising constructively and i also praise the great writer for feeding us with literary work.

CecyAdrian:
Miss Rachealfst just tell us you are writing a Nollywood script! If you really have lost ideas to the story, just end it already! Stop spoiling the beautiful story you created. I have kept quiet for so long, but I can't hold it anymore.

Are you writing for Primary school students? What is wrong with all you Nairaland writers? Once the praise starts flowing, you loss focus and derail. Pls end this story now and stop killing Daniella's character. We already know she is a good girl!

An action or incidence that should take just a paragraph, u turn it into a whole chapter. Stop looking for attachments to prolong the gist, you will kill it's initial impact and effect.

Too much ingredients spoils the soup.

CecyAdrian:
Miss Rachealfst just tell us you are writing a Nollywood script! If you really have lost ideas to the story, just end it already! Stop spoiling the beautiful story you created. I have kept quiet for so long, but I can't hold it anymore.

Are you writing for Primary school students? What is wrong with all you Nairaland writers? Once the praise starts flowing, you loss focus and derail. Pls end this story now and stop killing Daniella's character. We already know she is a good girl!

An action or incidence that should take just a paragraph, u turn it into a whole chapter. Stop looking for attachments to prolong the gist, you will kill it's initial impact and effect.

Too much ingredients spoils the soup.

wel dear, to an extent i think u're right. Wat i appreciate the most about ur criticism is the fact that you criticised with sense. To those who thought PoliticalThug was only criticising, this i what is called constructive criticising that would help the writer grow. Thanks dear. Please read my story Red-Ashes and criticise constructively please. Thanks

Honestly, this story is becoming boring

Chumzypinky:

wel dear, to an extent i think u're right. Wat i appreciate the most about ur criticism is the fact that you criticised with sense. To those who thought PoliticalThug was only criticising, this i what is called constructive criticising that would help the writer grow. Thanks dear. Please read my story Red-Ashes and criticise constructively please. Thanks

must you mention my name? I loathe unnecessary mentions plzzzz

CecyAdrian:
Miss Rachealfst just tell us you are writing a Nollywood script! If you really have lost ideas to the story, just end it already! Stop spoiling the beautiful story you created. I have kept quiet for so long, but I can't hold it anymore.

Are you writing for Primary school students? What is wrong with all you Nairaland writers? Once the praise starts flowing, you loss focus and derail. Pls end this story now and stop killing Daniella's character. We already know she is a good girl!

An action or incidence that should take just a paragraph, u turn it into a whole chapter. Stop looking for attachments to prolong the gist, you will kill it's initial impact and effect.

Too much ingredients spoils the soup.

Maybe you are right,but don't let us jump into a conclusion yet..I believe the writer knows what she is doing..
She might want us to gain something else

Hello everyone.

appreciate our comments, response and arguments.

I av a few point of mine to note too.
1. sometimes, a story aint all abt suspense, intrigues and d likes, from my knowledge of this story right from the start, each story in d big story has its lessons. doz dat av followed well understand this

2. If a story aint goin d way u anticipate, pls let it b, u ain't the writer after all.

3. as much as constructive criticism is healthy. making it constructive entails pointing out what seems missing and suggesting what needed to b done

4. This story is all abt morals. if u have all d morals u need and u av learnt it all in life. u may please leave d story

queenitee:

Maybe you are right,but don't let us jump into a conclusion yet..I believe the writer knows what she is doing..
She might want us to gain something else

nonsense comment

Chumzypinky:

wel dear, to an extent i think u're right. Wat i appreciate the most about ur criticism is the fact that you criticised with sense. To those who thought PoliticalThug was only criticising, this i what is called constructive criticising that would help the writer grow. Thanks dear. Please read my story Red-Ashes and criticise constructively please. Thanks

Thanks so much! It pains me that she is spoiling a world class story she created by herself without even ending. Will head to your page now to read your story. I once read a story by a very talented writer here on Nairaland TiffanyJ she skillfully keeps readers glued. Knows when to end a story or stop it out-rightly thereby forcing one to buy the completed version from her just to know what eventually happened and if need be, she continues it under a different name without losing the reader.

What's this murmuring all about, my dear rachealfst.keep doing what you know best and what will help u to grow.

CecyAdrian:


Thanks so much! It pains me that she is spoiling a world class story she created by herself without even ending. Will head to your page now to read your story. I once read a story by a very talented writer here on Nairaland TiffanyJ she skillfully keeps readers glued. Knows when to end a story or stop it out-rightly thereby forcing one to buy the completed version from her just to know what eventually happened and if need be, she continues it under a different name without losing the reader.

lol, mayb she's jst trying to prove a point. Dat Daniella helps everyone around her. From Lizzy to Sharon, i dont knw if you understand. Bt maybe she's overdoing it...

You are the antagonist who thinks that he is a friend, my brother, a short story can teach a moral lesson. Hav u read 'THE OLD MAN AND THE SEA? It is a short story but fetched the write the most pestigious award in literature. Obviously, the creativity of rachaelfst cannot be underestimated, and this, invariably, has let me to be one of her fans, but the story has lost pace and it has derided the character of daniella coz the writer is showing that she is a good lady.

opeano:
Hello everyone.

appreciate our comments, response and arguments.

I av a few point of mine to note too.
1. sometimes, a story aint all abt suspense, intrigues and d likes, from my knowledge of this story right from the start, each story in d big story has its lessons. doz dat av followed well understand this

2. If a story aint goin d way u anticipate, pls let it b, u ain't the writer after all.

3. as much as constructive criticism is healthy. making it constructive entails pointing out what seems missing and suggesting what needed to b done

4. This story is all abt morals. if u have all d morals u need and u av learnt it all in life. u may please leave d story

CecyAdrian:

Thank you, point noted.

@Cecy, she can't end the story yet, yes, we already know Daniella is a good lady, but we don't know yet if she will be able to conceive or not, don't forget she had an abortion...
@ Rachael, I love this story, please keep it up.

opeano:

Thank you, God bless you.

CecyAdrian:


Thanks so much! It pains me that she is spoiling a world class story she created by herself without even ending. Will head to your page now to read your story. I once read a story by a very talented writer here on Nairaland TiffanyJ she skillfully keeps readers glued. Knows when to end a story or stop it out-rightly thereby forcing one to buy the completed version from her just to know what eventually happened and if need be, she continues it under a different name without losing the reader.

Sorry dear but I've got to tell you that you just insulted me. I force readers to buy my work? I continue writing under a different name? So sorry ma, I am not so hungry for money to do that. I work, and I earned my salary.
Yes, I sell pdf copies of my first three stories on NL. These stories, I took my time, and completed it here. One of these stories accidentally got wiped out when NL was attacked and I took my time to retype and post it here again. I had to remove some part of my stories when people copy them and paste them in other forums for sale. When readers began asking for these books, I decided to sell three copies, monthly, to three readers I choose. If #1500 is too much to buy three pdf copies of my first three stories is too much then you may as well forget.
For your information, my story, 'Captive of my heart' has never been sold. You know why? Because, I haven't finish running it here on NL. Many came for it but I refused, I can't sell a book I haven't finish writing on NL and the story is still running because I am going through serious health challenges and then, I lost the manuscript. So now, I am busy, re writting it.
I owe you no explanation, but I owe those that trust in me and have great confidence in me. Finally, you most not buy my pdf copies. I sell only three copies at the beginning of every month. I challenge anyone with the complete copy of my last story to come out and disgrace me.

d story is now bcomin like an Indian zee world soap opera.......dey mak it intresting at first nd den boring towards d end......

PoliticalThuG:
nonsense comment

You again?

queenitee:
You again?

no not me

PoliticalThuG:
no not me

I can't start arguing with you

queenitee:
I can't start arguing with you

why?

Thanks for the mention and dedication. Keep up da good work

oyinella:


tnx boss

You are welcome. Are you enjoying the. Write up?